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Old 05-13-05, 10:40 PM   #31
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heh. I liked the first four line cuz I could actually relate to that. But murder and gangbanging. Thats some thing my brother would rap about so I guess you can say I only like a little bit of this. But good job......
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Old 06-07-05, 03:27 PM   #32
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thank yous sirs
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Old 06-07-05, 05:43 PM   #33
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Mom never noticed what happened as I lay in bed and cried
She was working at the factory unaware of the pain in the room I lied
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We started to rob bnaks, and turned that profit to crack
Soon pulling 200 grand a week by sellin the goods to blacks
Crack epidemic reached its high, the entrepenuers of cash
Making the biggest deal of our lives, a mill producing coke/hash
5,000 lb the first day, Crips on top, we had a royalty mentality
On top of the Underworld, but about to crash in reality


nice piece this had alot of potential nice vocab used this is a very good piece kinda stretched out try to cut it down or put . between verse ok cuz it just looks kinda stretched out but still good keep doin ya thing i liked the lines above from the piece it was good man ill like to see more pieces from u i see u got a lot of potential so keep doin ya thing man
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Old 10-02-05, 11:29 PM   #34
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nice piece this had alot of potential nice vocab used this is a very good piece kinda stretched out try to cut it down or put . between verse ok cuz it just looks kinda stretched out but still good keep doin ya thing i liked the lines above from the piece it was good man ill like to see more pieces from u i see u got a lot of potential so keep doin ya thing man


Thank you...but This is old stuff

wow I havent rapped in 4eva
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Old 06-20-06, 06:51 PM   #35
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Old 06-20-06, 11:00 PM   #36
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