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Old 10-16-04, 02:51 PM   #1
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Many Men (Remix)FT :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: /OREO/Lyrical Disciple

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Lyricsl Disciple
i aint scared to die,im just scared to survive
im wanted with numorious niggas dead not allive
but little do then know on my side i keep a fourty-five
tha counnt down contiuous as my life ticks away
tic toc tic toc time is flying will i make it to see another day?
but fuck with me ya life will be in my hand
in other words this is tha end of ya Life spand
wish death on me i got Esp ill let tha fourty-five free
now you see what you get for fuckin with me
i interigate niggas with who want me dead
they feed me some bullshit i aint puttin it my head
i know who want me dead know who they are
im comin so smooth so quick cant catch me on they radar
niggas want me dead in an open casket
i keep uhm skippin like rabbits with there easter basket
how you want you chest?closed or open?
we'll leave you bleedin and tha gun smoke


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i'm with the homies n it seems everybody wannabe a thug..
gun shots, no hidin, all ya feel is the slug...
niggas leavin me to mourn
hated since i was born.....
the hate goes on n on an it wont stop til they see me gone!???


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i'm wished death on by at least 50 foes...
some friends, some hoes, all i know is i'm the one they chose..
if they had there way......
i'd be layin up in my casket within the next 2 days...
gun shots sprayed at my casket...
eniems like ''yo! theres dopemans dead body, HA! lets blast-it!''..
*blat blat* yall gonna make me grab my gat...
i aint the violent type but i'll slice n stab...
lyrical hitman killin muhfuckers for free tellin ya to put it on the tab...
its unbelievable how much i'm hated...
when i die, i know god didnt do that, fate-did...
i've sat n i've waited, now i'm truely ready to die...
the streets got me goin crazy even the strongest of us cry...
i just sit n hope an watch folk commit sins..
people takin shots at me connectin with the chin...
this juice n gin is all a brother got...
so many men wish death on me i'll hand em the gun an take the shot..
theres angels around me or is it just a vest...
pullet proof this, bullet proof that, a nigguh with a gun thats despressed..
a deadly combination like Pac n Big L...
people wont rest til they see me dead or in the county jail


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i'm with the homies n it seems everybody wannabe a thug..
gun shots, no hidin, all ya feel is the slug...
niggas leavin me to mourn
hated since i was born.....
the hate goes on n on an it wont stop til they see me gone!???

OREO
i aint trying to get my casket closed,
the lord love me but i dont wanna go the path he choose,
take away these hoes, all the fancy clothes,
got fiends trying to burn me faster than an ounce of dro,
people dieyin that aint even tryin to get in the way of the iron,
cuz i aint lyieng, i can take a look outside and see a body lying,
you aint a killa at all, at least you tried,
lesson1, no one lives for ever, even superman died,
lesson2,put your money where your mouth is they both get stolen,
three,watch your back its either me or the cops patrolin,
and 4, fuck with me,polise be "etch-a-sketchin" somebody,
and wat you scared for?they say iron good for the body,
dont come my way, no-one wants to live in soorow,
and dont go to sleep tonight if you plan on waking up tommorow,


:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
i'm with the homies n it seems everybody wannabe a thug..
gun shots, no hidin, all ya feel is the slug...
niggas leavin me to mourn
hated since i was born.....
the hate goes on n on an it wont stop til they see me gone..


ha ha yea 3 niggas somin atcha BAW!!!!
see you niggas in hell nigga


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Old 10-16-04, 03:03 PM   #2
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upppin for feed yall.....
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Old 10-16-04, 06:08 PM   #3
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uppin on feedback.........................
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Old 10-17-04, 08:24 AM   #4
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diz wuz niiiiice da hook iz great stay up chall
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Old 10-17-04, 11:42 AM   #5
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apprciated
u drop alotta feed homie lol
feed on everythin
but thanx

uppin for mored feed yall
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Old 10-17-04, 12:05 PM   #6
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good shit, even doe i was suppose to b in dis collabo and i wasnt, dis was good
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Old 10-17-04, 02:17 PM   #7
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hahah
ya big dick..theres a reazon u wasnt on this collab
why?
WHY?
............
Cause your ASS....

can we get some feed on this yall???
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Old 10-17-04, 02:25 PM   #8
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This Was iight... I Didn't Like Some Parts Though.... But Keep It Up.....
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Old 10-17-04, 02:44 PM   #9
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thanx, but which parts wasnt you feelin?
cause if it was any of mine, i'd like to know so i can work on my game
thanx tho
appreciate the feed
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Old 10-17-04, 11:29 PM   #10
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upppin yall, tell us something
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Old 10-19-04, 12:20 AM   #11
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Old 10-19-04, 12:50 AM   #12
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this is dope as fuck.
all flowed well..lyrical disciple had a dope flow. nearly stretching a few line's.
but over all all 3 were flowing tight.
oreo your verse is dope like. waaaatt!!!.
you came with some hott line's and good wordplay.
Dopeman . I aint even gotta comment. You just doing what come's natural .. you on some intergalactic shit man.
over all this is a dope drop.
nice collab....
pz
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Old 10-19-04, 01:58 AM   #13
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dope man dope man i need another hit

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not bad but you should do hit em up
50's shit can't touch PAC, but you already knew that Keep on keepin on!! PEACE
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Old 10-19-04, 06:12 AM   #14
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thanx yall
the feed is gratefuly appreciated
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Old 10-19-04, 07:16 AM   #15
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Yea this was aight i was feelin LD's part most Dopeman had a good hook but i'll give ya an 8/10 was good
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