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i got potential but i need alittle elevation.

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LoL, alrite.. but u must be active iight????

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well i'm active.

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lol..iight, but keep battlin non stop also cuz thats wut will help u elevate alot

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ok but i might lose some and win some but i wanna pick my offenderz right. dont wanna pick the wrong people.

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ayo...i guess ill try out....i wanted to be in the regular forum as The "God of Vocab"....but no one is posting a yes or no...

aight i mind check my new battle wit logistic thats aanother dope verse.

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i got potential, but im in 50th Brigade and im workin on a side crew.... i could drop the side crew, but u gotta understand, im only usin this 4 practice.... prolly aint stayin here 4ever... ima just drop my verse of my open mic. its longer than 10 lines, but fuck it....

now im not normally a violent person, unless u give me a reaspn/
but if u pop shit about me, ill shoot u, even if bitch aint in season/
so just cause im a woman dont mean i cant b violent/
in such a sick world, multiple gunshots wont even make media silent/
its like murder is a game, like a sport or a hobby/
hundreds of ppl git killed everyday, but my song aint about 2 git sobby/
i aint tryin 2 preach, i got 2 much of a backround/
but in my case, if rappin effects were like wrestlin, my lyrics a smackdown/
ive been thru tough times, haters hatin my shit/
drugs, sex, and violence, emotional relationships/
bitch u know im talkin bout u, so dont fuckin deny it/
my records out n exposed, so u cant just hide my shit/
u raped me bitch, made me pay 4 my own abortion 2/
but u aint gittin away with this im out 2 torture u/
who woulda known id grow up 2 b such a lyrical genius/
date such a fag, slice off both balls from his penis/
dangle his dick right in front of his face (ha ha!)/
am i suckin hard enough now?! blast fuckin semen all over the place/
cmon, bitch, wanna take advatnage of me now? grab my chest and use me 4 sex/
well i guess i aint got a choice, im 2 high 2 fight back, i knew i shoulda refused that X/
cause i hate u, y the fuck did i date u?/
i should rape u, all iwanted was a thank u/
i did so much shit for u, u never took the time for a glance/
that bitch swingin her thong up in ur face, the hos got u in trance/
do i not mean shit 2 u? i thought that we were sumthin?/
but im stuck another night at home, naked, watchin ur body humpin/
im sick of bein white trash, its time 2 make a come back/
u gonna git ur nuts cracked, im more than just a big rack, boy ima make ur guts clap/
squirtin outta ur mouth, unless u watch the shit u speakin/
im cut all ur limbs off, we aint even close 2 the weekend/
so watch wut u say, else ur out 4 a bitch smack/
think im playin around, but u better just watch yo back!!!

holla when u reached a conclusion

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

damn girl nice wordplay but fuck no flow shit.

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its a rough draft, i aint finished editing. i still need a chorus and bout 2 more verses, so im workin....

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

aight coo coo. shit check this.


people bite my rhymes all the fuckin time/
you versin me is a suicide sign/
girls love me they never ever decline/
thats a flow perfect three baar line. lol its dope right.

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ah.............

ill just b nice and say "why yes"

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

well i'll jus be nice and say it was. it had flow i was givin youu an example.

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