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01-06-05, 08:40 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6E86 2914
upppiuppin uppin
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01-06-05, 08:47 PM
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IP: F745 50DD
that was very good in the beginning great multies but then you started to fall off but it was still good 9.3/10
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03-19-05, 08:49 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6DE3 D322
hmm uppin......
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03-20-05, 01:15 AM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6DE3 D322
yea this is an old OM but can someone new read it? lol
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03-20-05, 12:41 PM
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nice drop
IP: 2AF4 5C39
yo yo this piece was tight,,,,
from beginin ta end caught my attenction i read i twice keep that up an if ya feel up to it we can collab sometime ive been off line for a few days been mixing it up in my studio but i gotta bit to spit im a lay a few down for ya all in open mic...................CB83 HOLLA?
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03-20-05, 12:47 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 7264 17FB
Thanks for getting me all scared to go to bed now! Meanie! The imagery was amazing, I could really picture those dreams inside my mind (and I fear I'll have similar ones tonight). The vocabulary you used was impeccable, adapted to the content of the piece and had a good balance between basic and complex. You managed to portray the sense of confusion and the struggle the person's going through. You let the readers get into his mind which I definately liked.Had your flow on lock and the structure was good. I absolutely love your writing style, dopeness!
Lmao @ you upping this old shit btw... DQ
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03-20-05, 06:24 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6DE3 D322
lol no problem.. and thanx ya.. more feed will be very appreciated
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03-20-05, 11:19 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6DE3 D322
more feedback plz...
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03-21-05, 08:08 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6DE3 D322
up up and awaaaaaaaaaaaay
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03-23-05, 01:53 AM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: B334 EBA7
Damn... That shit is str8 up fire, man... Awesome flow...Vocab is really good...Metaphors all over the place in this piece...Strusture was good... Easily 10/10...And you should be voted best open mic... Lyrikally no one has done anthing better that ive seen... good shit... ~1~
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03-25-05, 02:55 AM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 3205 57D1
hahaha thanx man...
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03-25-05, 08:57 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 3205 57D1
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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03-26-05, 07:51 AM
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...OUTSTANDING...
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IP: 3EEE C909
The structure was great the vocab you used was nice i enjoyed this peice cause you wrote on a deep subject. heard good reviews about you, im looking at your previous work and i think you have skills.
please return the fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183663 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183659
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03-29-05, 04:57 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 3205 57D1
thanx man.. uppin for more feed
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03-29-05, 05:18 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
niiiiiice, very deep and didn't go off topic... i like your style too.. like that last line too, but this was very consistent... but um considering your record is 0-38... that was good... lol idk what that whole record thing is all about but it was hott... rtf
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