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Old 11-13-04, 04:11 PM   #1
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Newbies are pointless... (funny shit..)

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Old 11-13-04, 04:18 PM   #2
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lyrics were good........i thought ur flow fell off at times........delivery wasnt tha best.....pretty much u got lyrics down now just fix ya flow and delivery
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Old 11-13-04, 04:19 PM   #3
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^word... same as always -_-
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Old 11-13-04, 04:19 PM   #4
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^tru pretty much. but not bad, man. keep doin' it and elevating. pc
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Old 11-13-04, 04:24 PM   #5
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lol I decided to give you more feedback, cuz I think it was tight how when you said "nobody cares who you are" and shit about pics, I was actually lookin' at some newbie who posted up their pic. that made me wanna give more feed. nah layins? weerd...

First thing beat: nice shit. Is it mainstream or what? jus curious

Hook: emotion could have been better but lyrics were nice. And flow was aiight.

Verses: lyrics I liked. They were real nice. nice multi's shit. Flow was aiight, but fell off on that. You need a lil more emotion too. But this was a nice track. I enjoyed viewing it. lol

Pretty much sayin' why newbies ARE pointless like sinner and so on. lol

but yea, tight shit. keep elevating and droppin'. BTW, you english or something? jus curious. pc nah layins? weerd...
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Old 11-13-04, 04:25 PM   #6
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oh, I also liked that "you wanna be better go to a wacker website" lmfao tru shit. weerd.. pc
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Old 11-13-04, 04:26 PM   #7
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lmao... word..

its just some beat i found on soundclick..

and nah im from san diego... But ive been in australia for a few months and my accent is a little fucked now ... im here for like 6 more months still...
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Old 11-13-04, 04:28 PM   #8
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yea, I could tell it was either English, or maybe australian, cus I peeped Nostra's audio earlier today on AIM, and you had like same accent. weerd, keep elevating. pc....

oh, and By any chance you kno who made that beat? cuz they got tight shit. weerd.. pc
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Old 11-13-04, 04:33 PM   #9
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I liked this... ur flows not perfect but lyrically on point... just keep droppin, LOLROFLMAO.. damn this shit gets funny too- You should concentrate on audio, You can already slaughter most of the homos on this site with cool edit and your ego isn't irritating--- "If you wanna be better, go to a wacker site"... word.
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Old 11-13-04, 04:33 PM   #10
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nah i got it a while back... it was like... DKN something...
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Old 11-13-04, 04:34 PM   #11
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nah i got it a while back... it was like... DKN something...

lol aiight. I have my real player on repeat, so I listened about 5 times so far. lol But lol "EXCLUSIVE EMPIRE" <<lol tight shit there. lol keep it comin', and I'll stop cloggin' yo thread. pc.....
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Old 11-13-04, 04:35 PM   #12
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i like this shit alot funny i like the part where you talkin bout them bitches votes thats shit funny.. but yeah its hott flow could be little better and on beat but emotion was real good ins ome points
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Old 11-13-04, 04:38 PM   #13
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word thanks for the feed..

I cant believe people didnt notice my wordplay.. must have made it too subtle..

"D/R .. i wont say much just that its an ...Xclusive... - Empire"


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Old 11-13-04, 04:40 PM   #14
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not bad...ill give it 7/10...diss me as much as you want it wont get you any where..
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Old 11-13-04, 04:42 PM   #15
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I know... you never listen ...
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