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11-15-04, 08:51 AM
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Social Outsyder .vs. A1C
IP: AEBA 9CCC
 ^4 votes...remember to vote clearly^
Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Tuesday By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern
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11-15-04, 10:27 AM
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IP: 2977 E8BF
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11-15-04, 02:44 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
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11-15-04, 03:38 PM
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IP: 2977 E8BF
Dudes from Iowa and swears he spits flames like a lighter
iLL from Iowa? LoL & U wonder Y they call U Social Outsyder An Outcast, Because all u're verses are just plain lame...Damn Get out the game fam..cuz ya raps sound gayer than the preacher on EM's Rain Man Dawg play the sideline, get out the way and Lay low Cuz I'll leave ya blood in a gulch like this was a game of Halo You Gay hoe, Beat Me?......LoL this Guy here's funny Look between ya legs bitch...I bet its pink like the energizer bunny Penalize ya sonny, There's a yellow flag on the field Referee: (Whistle Blows) Penalty..#00 Social outsider...This CAT IS NOT real Its over, face it, Ya chances of suceedin in the league are fake Cuz u Like Fat kids when it comes to L's....U take the cake Blah 12 lines match it
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11-16-04, 09:54 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
ok be done and dropedd b4 2:45 today got a lot to due got like 4 battles to do today
2 on this site and a handie cap match at home aginst a couple of friends at lunch today so ill drop at 2:45 or befor |
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11-16-04, 12:03 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
See A1C ya got no production, ya rhymes need construction
Thats why i'm combustin, Fuck it, i got the win with just an Introduction The win's already been laid out, just like you droped my first punch and already killed you This battle you shoulda stayed out, Like i'm Buffy ya'll juss got slayed out with a fade out Ya mind as well bow down like bow wow Cuz i'm hot now, No I wont stop now Eternally ripped on lyrical conflict Ya couldn't despise me if ya was a hysterical convict I constrict tha convict in conflict Cuz Its time ta inflict on this emmcee who is Not Sick Fuck a finisher i'll just stomp ya intestines, With no peace this kid is restin, cross dressin Who was this kid testin, Fuck the blessin, I still gotta decompose that Bitch crew ya used to be reppin |
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11-17-04, 09:21 AM
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#7
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IP: 2977 E8BF
Nice drop i guess....................votes
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11-17-04, 04:51 PM
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#8
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 8155 9B30
A1C:
Dudes from Iowa and swears he spits flames like a lighter iLL from Iowa? LoL & U wonder Y they call U Social Outsyder not too good An Outcast, Because all u're verses are just plain lame...Damn Get out the game fam..cuz ya raps sound gayer than the preacher on EM's Rain Man wording was wack Dawg play the sideline, get out the way and Lay low Cuz I'll leave ya blood in a gulch like this was a game of Halo okay. You Gay hoe, Beat Me?......LoL this Guy here's funny Look between ya legs bitch...I bet its pink like the energizer bunny good punch, horrible wordplay Penalize ya sonny, There's a yellow flag on the field Referee  Whistle Blows)Penalty..#00 Social outsider...This CAT IS NOT realare you serious? Its over, face it, Ya chances of suceedin in the league are fake Cuz u Like Fat kids when it comes to L's....U take the cake your best one yet. this wasnt a good read. nuff said. See A1C ya got no production, ya rhymes need construction Thats why i'm combustin, Fuck it, i got the win with just an Introduction mulits, not good for an opener The win's already been laid out, just like you droped my first punch and already killed you This battle you shoulda stayed out, Like i'm Buffy ya'll juss got slayed out with a fade out Ya mind as well bow down like bow wow Cuz i'm hot now, No I wont stop now i dont really know wat this cluster of rhymes was. Eternally ripped on lyrical conflict Ya couldn't despise me if ya was a hysterical convict didnt make any sense I constrict tha convict in conflict Cuz Its time ta inflict on this emmcee who is Not Sick you used the same rhyming word Fuck a finisher i'll just stomp ya intestines, With no peace this kid is restin, cross dressin Who was this kid testin, Fuck the blessin, I still gotta decompose that Bitch crew ya used to be reppin the most stretched lines ive seen. your thinking on a whole different level. you didnt even have personals. vote: A1C
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11-17-04, 05:43 PM
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#9
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The Watcher
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IP: 28D6 AD76
......... A1C, u had a meh verse overall...ya shit can definitely use some improvement though...try n come wit more fresh/creative concepts next time...Outsider, i dunno what to say.....ya verse was wack yo...u focused on multis and vocab...<--n i know both of those are good, but the overall strength of a battle verse comes from punchlines and strong/witty wordplay...u had neither.... V/ A1C... |
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11-17-04, 10:36 PM
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Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 9834 0763
I gotta say.....both your verses are horrible, for something in the league anyways, both of you have wack structures, but A1C actually had personals. many of both your punches are played, socail outsyder had multis, but that is all, he came up with lame ass punches like "Eternally ripped on lyrical conflict ya couldn't despise me if ya was a hysterical convict". I mean, are you serious? A1C was wack too, but at least he was actually dissing his opponent: "Its over, face it, Ya chances of suceedin in the league are fake, Cuz u Like Fat kids when it comes to L's....U take the cake"
So overall, I vote A1C for a overall better verse...you kids need to elevate
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11-18-04, 09:45 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
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11-18-04, 08:08 PM
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#12
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RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
yeah not a good battle A1c takes this one. you both need to work on punches and personals. structure would be nice, i mean both verses were all over the place. A1c took this for at least trying to throw some punches. elevate please.
v-A1c
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11-20-04, 12:09 AM
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#13
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: A063 529A
Vote - A1C for not being completely wack.....that about sums it up
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11-20-04, 07:02 AM
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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: 0D01 5ECC
weak battle on all accounts. but a1c had a better structure...coz socials was fucked up. nobody had great punches but a1c had a try at some. elevate and come better next time.
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11-20-04, 10:50 AM
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#15
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Real Nigga, nigga.
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IP: 6879 709C
wtf@social
That was beyond gay From the structure to everything v/a1c
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