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yo,
I’ll shit on this dame….. willappear thinks u will win? -That bitch is insane.
I stamp out little camp FIYAS, ……then squat down and piss on the flame
Your name is defamed! ….Life repeats itself like a standing rerun
Cuz I’ve sunned this bitch before- & she’s back for more like a tanning salon.
I’m demanding refunds Cuz your audio was wack - ……Don’t try-tah debate.
Can’t get away with thinking its dope! ….cuz I boarded all Fiya-escapes
Justice is never yours, ……….as long as there’s someone to get it
You, the Duchess-of-METAPHORS?? Be nice to see AT LEAST ‘one’ in your lyrics.
These kids are hysterics- got clowning material for days on these dumb bitches
Ur audios, and no shows.…. Plus still got links to your shitty prom pictures!
Last time u ditched my battle….tho it's well known I instill the fear.
If u take hints from your clit riders. Maybe this time u Will Appear.
I’m still sincere, when I say my verse makes predictions bleeker
I'm like Ron Artest throwin PUNCHES….. and you're the fat ass attention seeker
I would battle to get u banned……. But with no-shows you’d try-tah stall
So now I’m like, Fuck a pink slip!...… I’ll just enable my Fiya wall.
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Shi-1 baby....

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*SHIESTY~ ONE*
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HELLO! well ummm
CLICK TO HEAR MY SHORT ODE TO RAPVERSE "

I sent a pm to the mod saying my verse will be late i had to go to the hospital... so..


^both dated on september 21st (my birthday last bar..)


I throw chains- linkin’ your 4 O’s like symbols for Audis [text n audio record]
I Torah most likely, as top 5 bitch your only Deuteronomy
Name's got irony, cuz your spelling’s hid in abridged books
Shoulda took ya verse 2 RapWorlds but Meziaa got u shook! (lo-fi)
Bulimia got looks, ya pic heard “threw up”, and left the forum!
Stompin' her throat, I stole ribs of Adam’s, his apple’s ya orange (her adam’s apple)
SINGLEd vocab worn, some doubt’s form as ur EXaggeratin text!
Get pumped in rigged tourneys, now you whip-lashing headrest (ego)
Soak ya ego in warm H2O, palm ya own skull, til u dead AND broke!(Skull in hand-sig)*
now I kaleidoscopes, to see this loss I’ll give back your first Quote!
Ya votes a lifted miracle, ur Kerry in levels, while I’m Burning Bush!**
Teleprompter cooked like roasted engines, ya need an extra push?!
Ya crew’s overlooked, but the last battle u put famine personals..
ya truly A. P.ussy,don’t hit Front Lines, make ya accept this arsenal.!***
F^3 agencies, ya hertz cycled this second round until ya anorexic!
I blew out the candles right with ya lyrics--left this loss invested..!****
BEEOTCH

Her Lyricz, rofl
It happens every night again, its time that I recite again, the shi-1 of the bunch i crunch emcees like FlintStone Vitamins
Our collaborations will have the nation receeding
hearts beating....
ears bleeding from microphones Im proceeding-to ROCK
or not to rock, THAT IS THE QUESTION
lets END all interveiws and send our crews to battle sessions,
Don't be shi, I wont bite-grip the mic steady tight
Ignite crews like Jews leaving ashes and liquid (blood) when I come thru
TRACKS SOUND TIGHTER
rappin I major--freestyling I minor
Grab ur arms and angles lift ya ass up from all 5 angles, mangled minds
Rob u of your 5 senses, watch you decline.....

~*-Wordplay-*~:
-Torah(1st five books bible)-tore her
-Deuteronomy-due to honor me (4th book out the five)
-Exaggerated- ex had u ratin’
-Kaleidoscopes-collide her scopes
-Kerry- carry
-famine- fam in
-hertz- hurts
*designer clothes shrink in hot water..
**miracle/Burning Bush
***A.P.--her one person crew, F^3 agencies (title)
****My birthday’s Sept. 21st the same date she made the quotes..

Others y’all should notice if not, read it again, for metas, DON’T pm me.. And her pic is on her soundclick page, just click her lyrics... rofl...
get at me
~L F~

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DAAAAAAAAAMN!!!!!!!

First I'd like to say props to both cuz y'all definitely the two hottest femcees on this site, hands down! There were flames sparking from both sides this time around... one of the fiercest battles I've seen since i been here... now for the breakdown:


I’ll shit on this dame….. willappear thinks u will win? -That bitch is insane.
I stamp out little camp FIYAS, ……then squat down and piss on the flame

killer opener.. nice... startin off with heat...

Your name is defamed! ….Life repeats itself like a standing rerun
Cuz I’ve sunned this bitch before- & she’s back for more like a tanning salon.

nice personal....but... i thought the rhyme (couplet) was a little forced here... still an effective punch/personal other than that

I’m demanding refunds Cuz your audio was wack - ……Don’t try-tah debate.
Can’t get away with thinking its dope! ….cuz I boarded all Fiya-escapes

the set-up was cool and i liked where the personal was going... but the line that finished it off lost steam... i think it coulda hit harder if it were reworded

Justice is never yours, ……….as long as there’s someone to get it
You, the Duchess-of-METAPHORS?? Be nice to see AT LEAST ‘one’ in your lyrics.

this line was aiight... i've seen ya hit a lot harder shi

These kids are hysterics- got clowning material for days on these dumb bitches
Ur audios, and no shows.…. Plus still got links to your shitty prom pictures!

damn...lol... the prom pics again... i'm kinda used to seeing these but with the other stuff added it was a pretty good personal and punch combo here

Last time u ditched my battle….tho it's well known I instill the fear.
If u take hints from your clit riders. Maybe this time u Will Appear.

lmao... definitely the best line in this verse... shyt's funny as hell... sorry fiya but that shyt was dope!

I’m still sincere, when I say my verse makes predictions bleeker
I'm like Ron Artest throwin PUNCHES….. and you're the fat ass attention seeker

haha... like the use of current events in this line but the set-up coulda been a tad better

I would battle to get u banned……. But with no-shows you’d try-tah stall
So now I’m like, Fuck a pink slip!...… I’ll just enable my Fiya wall.

original closer... nice... omma give this verse a 8.5/10




I throw chains- linkin’ your 4 O’s like symbols for Audis [text n audio record]
I Torah most likely, as top 5 bitch your only Deuteronomy

sick!... that's all i got to say about that!

Name's got irony, cuz your spelling’s hid in abridged books
Shoulda took ya verse 2 RapWorlds but Meziaa got u shook! (lo-fi)

lol... nice personal... i don't think everyone know the story behind that but it's a decent personal

Bulimia got looks, ya pic heard “threw up”, and left the forum!
Stompin' her throat, I stole ribs of Adam’s, his apple’s ya orange (her adam’s apple)

ehhhh... not really feeling this line too much

SINGLEd vocab worn, some doubt’s form as ur EXaggeratin text!
Get pumped in rigged tourneys, now you whip-lashing headrest (ego)

first part was crazy but i wasn't feeling the headrest part.. i think you coulda came up with sumn else for that

Soak ya ego in warm H2O, palm ya own skull, til u dead AND broke!(Skull in hand-sig)*
now I kaleidoscopes, to see this loss I’ll give back your first Quote!

hot line here... lol...liked the word play

Ya votes a lifted miracle, ur Kerry in levels, while I’m Burning Bush!**
Teleprompter cooked like roasted engines, ya need an extra push?!

... no personal found here... no real punch either...filler

Ya crew’s overlooked, but the last battle u put famine personals..
ya truly A. P.ussy,don’t hit Front Lines, make ya accept this arsenal.!***

nice wordplay in the set up but the punch coulda been done more effectively

F^3 agencies, ya hertz cycled this second round until ya anorexic!
I blew out the candles right with ya lyrics--left this loss invested..!****

nice closer!... omma have to give this one a 9.0...

damn this shyt was close and almost too hard to judge... i like both femcees but sum1's gotta win... my vote goes to fiya this time

holy shit

punches- Fiya overall more and harder hittin
personals- Fiya u just had harder hittin and more of em
metas- Fiya u really r the dutchess of metaphors
multis- Tie
word play- Fiya was wittier and had more
humor- Tie
flow- Shi-1 when i read it i flowed better wit Shi-1
structure- Fiya overall easier to read and look at.

Fiya damn that is the hottest verse ive read yet. (havent read much) haha jm but i have notin to say but good job and good luck

Shi-1 hot verse, but Fiya took this one. Um really i guess better wordplay is all u really need and maybe some harder hittin personals. I dont kno but props to both of ya.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter.

v/Lady Fiya

pz

lady fiya's punches were straight fire........they were hittin hard
she also had damn good personals....you also edged shi1 out with some sick metas..........wordplay was off tha hook......and structure was betta

shi1- flow was good same with mulites.......tha link wasnt that good becuase she isnt that bad at audios lol.....she hasnt really gotten any negative feedback........you didnt come as hard as lady f did


v/lady fiya for haveing sick wordplay and just coming harder

damnnn ko?? ...shiiit nice battle to both but it was bound to happen ..shi got you first round .. u got her back..nice shit.

Just checkin shit out....nice job both of you on this, you both did extremely well, and woot woot fam...1

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Vote Tally:

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Shi-1-----0

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Nice Battle. Lady Fiya U Really Came Hard And It Shows. Shi-1 You Did 2, But Overall I Think Fiya Came Harder.

Fiya Nice Punches and Personals. U also Put In Multis, Pretty Good Wordplay, And Structure Wuz Nice.

Shi U Had Good Punches, Not That Great Personals. Um Overall Tight Verse, But Not Quite As Good As Fiyas.

Word

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Shi-1------0

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