"F" a Kontroversy...


its a collab joint........ i got my verse finished...... just waiting on my potna...


been holdin this joint down for a couple days now..... but im posting my half of the collab ... for some feed back..... might end up editing my verse......


so... enjoy...

"ez"

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

F-I-R-E.. love dem lyrics flow is a lil off b ut the lyrics is so empowring ... TAKE CHEESE GRADER TO HIS FACE.... god to bad you got someone else poppin off on this i'd jump on it.... yeah but keep droppin kid shits hot... SPENDS HIS WHOLE LIFE DOWNLOADIN BEATS... i think the last bar was a lil meh.. but still hot shizzle

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southbeachmiamiho

haha!!!!!

thanks for the feedback homie! yea...... the beat had me stumped for a min.... but.... its still a work in progress.... imma work on the flow and delivery on this joint, cuz believe me, i know what your saying about it being off a lil.. no doubt,

appreciate the feedback

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

.....................2daTizzop....................

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

omg...the flow was appalling...didn't blend with the beat well...and it was clear you were reading


on a positive note, your rhyme scheme was delectable...very nice there...some nice lyrics here and there


if your flow was on par with your rhyming and lyrics, you'd be hella nice...



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yo tito... i can't front on ya style... ya definitely got a different style than most kats... reminds me of some undaground shyt i used to listen to back in da day... yeah... but ya flow was definitely off on this joint... didn't quite ride the beat effectively... lyrics?... i was feeling how ya shyt was worded and the pattern of ya lines... memorize ya shyt and I'm sure ya flow will fall on point... ya shyt is decent, yo... stay up

if you didn't realise. i am no longer on RV. but. HEY. your merking is coming.

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Kontroverzy's Myspace

OMG OMG OMG i just heard this kat. He's wack. thats why i dont post on this site NO DOPE AUDIO HEADS. if you were on my audio site you would get Herassed OMG. lmfao im laughing right now. this was garbage. Just wait fam.

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Kontroverzy's Myspace

Is that why you no showed for seventhird^^because hes whack? rofl..yea.ok..w/e man..tito, this was dope, your vocals need to be a little lower,but you do have a different style...this drop was dope fam,good lyrics...keep em comin1

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*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

yo kon... you can't front on dude skills...

if this shyt woulda been about anybody else ya prolly woulda said the shyt was hot... but since it's about you, ya catching feelings and shyt... give credit where it's due man and stop frontin'... werd... and how would the kats on ya audio site feel about you ducking seven third? would they "herass" you about that, also?

no beef but let's keep it real, fam...werd

ill grammatix........ good looking on schoolin this foo....

*daps*

im re-doing my acca... and sending it to SevenThird for mixing down.......

this was juss a rough draft of my verse.... wait till SevenThird gets on this....

HAHAHAHHAHAHAH


straight up........ "F" a Kontroversy......


you done messed up little boy

go ahead and drop an audio against me..... you aint nobody n-e-ways....

lmao at kon catching feelings

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

this site is mad funny about getting critiqued and shyt.... if they don't agree with your critique they think you hating on them or just riding the next person... man, it even like that... instead of going back and listening to they shyt to see if it can be fixed or tweeked they get upset and wanna challenge everybody on the site... i'm pretty sure when kon sees this he's gonna be tryna holla at me next cuz i seen him do it before... he's really an ok kid but he takes this site way too serious and let's his emotions get the best of him.... anyways, keep doing ya thang tito... get ya flow down tight... prolly one of the best styles i've heard on SC so far... you got confidence in ya rhymes and comfort on the mic... all ya need to do now is fine tune it and

...you should be aiight...lol...the shyt cut the last part of my sentence off

ok as of now your the best i heard on r.v so far dope shit good flow lyrics are dope as well and your in new york?you got mangement?holla at me and well hook something up and ill get you in the studio this week

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