you should never take my name in vien

it's a big no no

THE MASTER MAN is nothin' to fuck with

callin' me a bitch

you better not post shit

i'll be there stalkin' your ass

your manhood is mine

NUGGA

-1-

This was decent. I thought that there were some tight lines, and some played lines. The flow started off kind of weak, but then picked up when you added some multis near the middle and the end. Overall, it was pretty good, but my main complaint is that all you did was state that you were the best and that all your opponents would lose to you. There was no creative twist on it that made it better than any other rhyme on that topic.

Quote of Note:
why u shakin stop waitin i double dare u tah pull it
That was nice.

Peace

master blaster when u learn to spit audios come back and knowck on my door till then get outa my thread

watch here we go woosh and its up

haha...just kidding but, no one cares

piece was nice. good flow and rhythm, it was a lil' short though... shoulda stretched it out. and if this is your last text post, you shoulda came harder like dude said. why you beefin' wit' master blaster? he'll rip you son... ha ha...

this was nice
short though
but nice

thanx for the feed back but to due up top master blaster cant rip me cause he dont spit audios when he can he can try and rip me but this was my last texxt ryme battle what ever ...pzzz

cool piece i liked it but i dont think you should quit text
keep elevating

check some of my work

hahahaha,
dawg, this was straight ill... no lie either, i ain't front words if i can't back 'em, like Armaggeddansaid, its down to you kid, illest, fuck vocab, fuck wordplay, just fucking rhyme what you have, only pussies hide behind threats and all that shit spitting grit your teeth and fight ish is weak... props dawg

peace 'n' keep... rhyming


signed,
~madd

"dawg, this was straight ill"

lol thanx man elevating this isho to the fullest

uppn

upping

u aint shit...