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Old 12-21-04, 08:20 PM   #1
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Patently my parents have there own beef going On
Flows the opposite way of a song to you its Wrong
Hopefully they don’t get mad at each other & Leave
If you believed they would to, bust all there Relieve
Basically y’all would receive a patently waiting Gift
Surprisingly you know this is no myth & get my Drift
I don’t believe how I work with this Misunderstanding
So unsuitable to me and how my parents are Demanding
I really do wish these last 4 years were brought Back
So I would spend time with both then just one, its Wack
Moms trying for money off my dad, whats her Problem
And dads always fighting in court, trying to solve Em
I had no say in this like they thought I was Invisible
They thought I was disabled to people none Divisible
Its like shit people wake up and see whats goin Down
Mom, don’t forget about my Two brothers & I Frown
The reason why we frown is because you seem to Forget
You leave to Calgary and almost feels like we never Met
Dad was always here for us & even took us to Places
James is are half brother but we still go the same Paces
In different ways we still liked knowing both are Their
Most of the times we visited each other we still Share
The latest years gotten real bad but we show are Composer
Standing tall is what is need, to be the greatest Soldier
I want you to, to be standing together on all the Problems
Try working with each other as family like expensive Gems
Its up to you to, to stop beefing and shit, its your Choice
In the days this first began I hated to hear the loud Voice
By the time you realize that you two do such mental Shit
You’ll end up realizing that its about the time you two Quit
Sometimes I feel it’s a competition between both of You
To see whos the best & whos gonna turn out in the long Run
I think you two outdone yourselves this time, its like a Crime
Watching me play ball soon you’ll start a fight on the Subline
Starting to begin in another fight, I don’t want more Confusion
Both got enough started its time to quit this maxed Conclusion
Surprisingly this wasn’t resolved together, theres to much Wrong
The flow has disappeared like a producers outgoing Song
I don’t want this to begin again like another war or Armageddon
It feels like slavery has begun, & now this family equals Gone
-Parallel



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Old 12-21-04, 08:22 PM   #2
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sho so. can't wait till we get done.
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Old 12-21-04, 08:37 PM   #3
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ya man...but uppin this might be a open mic of the month...so uppin
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Old 12-21-04, 10:43 PM   #4
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this was very dope man....this a true story....anyway this reminds me of a kinda eminem lyrics and all...vocab was descent...

good drop...
9.5/10
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Old 12-21-04, 10:45 PM   #5
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thanks man..yea this was true shit...thanks...uppin
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Old 12-22-04, 12:24 AM   #6
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decent, but hardly om of the month
this is mediocre at best
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Old 12-22-04, 09:11 AM   #7
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if you think so dont u see my wordplay n shit...easly to see..ya i dont care tho...uppin
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Old 12-22-04, 05:49 PM   #8
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uppin.................weerdizzle to the crunkshizzle
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Old 12-23-04, 01:43 AM   #9
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fuckin hoes...leave soem feed
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Old 12-23-04, 02:32 AM   #10
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sorry i was in a bad mood
and you called me a herb so...
yeah i'll read again and leave some feed
later
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Old 12-23-04, 04:01 PM   #11
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this was tight.....i liked the picture you made me when you wrote that shit out....nice topical man...pz...
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Old 12-23-04, 05:15 PM   #12
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yall is some buuummms!!! justbattle me
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Old 12-23-04, 05:20 PM   #13
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Wow Bums And You Have No Record Plus You Bit Ya Name "Cass" HaHa I'll Battle You....
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Old 12-23-04, 05:31 PM   #14
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why are there newbies in my thread?...wtf..uppin
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Old 12-23-04, 06:01 PM   #15
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lol.............have no idea
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