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01-03-05, 07:08 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya its ight...as long as i get feed im kool...and yea thanks again....uppin yall
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01-04-05, 06:06 AM
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IP: 33F5 1CD5
The rhymes seem too forced, like they'r random words thrown in at the end of the bar.
Other than that, this was aiight, good concept.
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01-04-05, 07:00 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
wet drop keep doin yo thing bra
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01-04-05, 07:41 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks both...but i dont understand how there forced...i mgith have forget to throw a (,) In to show emotion but its ight...uppin
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01-04-05, 08:00 PM
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IP: 04C3 AC1B
yo was feelin the imagery, u proper painted a picture wit ur lines man and it flowed well...ur vocab was on point - was used and used in right places...was fellin this drop was a proper story..overall 9/10. Peace
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01-04-05, 09:05 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks alot......wordizzle
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01-06-05, 10:02 PM
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IP: D25C B392
........uppinizzle
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01-06-05, 11:58 PM
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IP: CBD1 4982
this is tight shit multis were tight nice topic is it somethin thats happen to u right now...good vocab nice structre....
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01-07-05, 12:14 AM
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IP: 003B D7F0
Yo i have this exact same shit goin on wit the two sisters instead of brothers but the james thing is the same its trippy as fuck nice spit!
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01-07-05, 01:12 AM
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
really good if u asks me
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01-07-05, 01:56 AM
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IP: D25C B392
thanks i kinda wanted more of better feed..but i guess you cant expect much from newbies but yea my big brother james jeez hes a nerd str8 up...and then i have a lil brother but yea this is str8 true...
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01-07-05, 11:21 AM
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IP: DADF F7AE
that link u have is boreder-line.....
plez try to get a little more in detail, like what was the best part and what was the weakest u know..... this aint ya warning this is just ya heads up.... befor the warning... |
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01-07-05, 11:56 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
fuck you.....intensify effect..
i put that link there a long time ago...im not doin it again so shut up... uppin.. |
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01-08-05, 02:22 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
wow man..you're improving at an alarming rate..
your flow,vocab,and multis also..I actually enjoyed this very much.. the true story means you're writing from the heart.. this almost seems like Luther Vandros song "Dance with my father" but alot less gay, I loved how you expressed your feelings without sounding like a strait dumbass or soft cake..good job I think raings are pointless now,I stopped using them since your last crit
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01-08-05, 02:25 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks...much appruciated
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