Voted For: shadow

straight up i wasnt feelin either drop, shadow it was simple...but ok....vocab needs werk, n same with emotion...
good points was ya ryhme scheme...which kept my attention focused..overall 6.5/10........
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blah your name,lol...needs more feeling n vocab n try to stay on the topic..
i wasnt feelin anything you wrote,..srrry son, stay up n keep tryin your ryhmin was way off....n so was ya overall readin appeal

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

thenks werd eppin

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Voted For: shadow

I putted an note in your locker, saying I was your secret admire
I’d emit all my feelings to you in that letter ,also added an flower
Your man doesn’t appreciates you, he don’t give you what you desire
He treated you like an puppet under his strings, it was like love for hire
Seeing you in the beautiful dress, god, You was like an rare diamond
Seeing you standing there where I arrange a meeting for you to see my body
Your eyes looking at the beautiful sighting, then appeared another human
You smiled at him, thinking he did this for you, my anger went to fumes
You kissed him. I ran down the road, my tears weeping, with an lost soul
I was hoping me and you can be together, all this time it was just an false hope

mista-- I think your grammar is horrible... No hate at all, but "putted" "an" before words that start w/ consonants... all that shit adds up, and gets real irritating to have to re-write in my head... I think you had a good path on this topic too, but your writing mis-cues really take alot away from your verse....

Shadow- Not bad at all, I kind of expected a little bit more fluidity to your verse- but the story and rhymes flowed well enough I think to win you this... your verse really reminded me of being a teen-ager for some reason... good shit... Vote shadow.

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Voted For: shadow

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ: found good balance in your vocab, structure was nice but your flow was off here and there. Emotion was good because of the personal vibe over it, not that much imagery, you had an "in your face" sort of attitude,saying everything like it was. So imagery and maybe vocab a lil could've been better...Overall good drop...

shadow: very deep, had your flow on lock, vocab was tight and structure was good.Emotion was raw and you made me think about some things which is nice of course. Imagery was dope, enjoyed reading this for sure! Very good job!

Vote goes to shadow because I was feeling the message a lil more, no hate...RTF please (link is in my sig)

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O damn drama thanks...i never would've thought you vote................

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