word the featured track man I really should redo this track in the studio for my mixtape then

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www.soundclick.com/lethalgk

ha you killed the shit outta this beat, hot dayum!!!!!!!! lol... you got an original flow you str8 murdered the track, this was ill.... it deserves to be stickied for another month.. stay up.. "gorilla warfare the reason for Vietnam"................ good shit.
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word thank you I appreciate all feedback im getting

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www.soundclick.com/lethalgk

ay yo im feelin this, if u get a complement from me then u good iight, im feelin this track.

I like the beat, ur ryhmes is poppin, nice flow.

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E Town on the monitor, shout out to PRE and E LEE, shout out to jeff, D.A, Obi, shabeatz, rated r, and everyone else whos doin there own thing.

and thats all i gotta say....

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E TOWN soundclick

whoa. nice drop dun. Last I heard from you was waaack. This track is light years ahead of ya last drop. Beat is sickness, and you stuck it son. Nice drop. Stay up. 1

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lol thanks for tellin me my shit before was wack, but why aint you tell me this when I dropped it lol, I could of deleted it quick or something

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www.soundclick.com/lethalgk

aww man i know you........haha how u doin? know this was decent and yeah i aint forgot about you we gone get u on vol 3 it just aint started cuz we had a hang up on pop the trunk 2 ......yall gotta watch for this boy man he fire....... we gone blow dat azz up....aint nobody gone gra the flow and run wit it like this kid

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I thought the presence was really good. You seemed pretty comfortable getting into the song emotionwise. The chorus desperately needs some help. Throw a dub in there or something.....basically, just spit another version of the chorus in a different tone or emotion and blend the two together......that makes it sound more chorus like

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