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02-20-05, 01:10 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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Nostradamus - One Day.. Check it out! -- The new shit..
IP: 80C5 FF8A
Its for a small mix tape I'm working on..
Check it out and show some love.. Leave me links to your stuff and I'll check it out and leave good feedback.. http://www.soundclick.com/nostradamus1 |
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02-20-05, 01:20 AM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 74C8 66CC
Beat - I always loved this beat. T-boz and Da Brat killed this. The vocals in your first verse are about 2-3dB's too loud. I'd turn the inensity on the reverb down a bit too. Flow got lumpy in some spots. The deliv is EXACTLY like pac's circa 1989. Just mostly shouting and no real variance in it which is a shame. The lyrics were on point but the deliv was 2Dimensional through the whole track. The last line finished off flow too man which is a big no-no. It's not a bad track by any means, but I've heard better from you and EXPECT better. Rapped yourself into a corner now. Better deliver straight A's or everything else will soudn like a C. This would be a C IMHO. Think you owe it to your self to re-record it and fix that flow, turn the levels down a little or at the least turn the levels down on the existing vocals - but I'd still opt to re-record if I were in your shoes.
Honest feed as always. 1
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02-20-05, 01:34 AM
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IP: C220 E2DA
cool ish...your getting pretty consistent with making good tracks man
can't say that i've heard everything you've done, but what you've linked me to has been pretty nice. Same thing here. Good flow and whatnot, seemed fluid not off beat or anything like that. Lyric wise cool stuff, fuck ya from behind have you limpin like a c-walk, that made me chuckle, lol. You've got the distinctive accent but i thought the delivery was clear enough to where could make out everything you say. But was there like reverb on the hook or something? It kind of sounded like it, though it might be because i have to listen lo-fi, i dunno just wondering my speakers aren't the greatest. Anyways i'm sorry i can't give much of a critique, but i'm not really in a position to say what ya could have done better being i'm not much of an audio head and i would just sound stupid, lol. It all sound coo to me keep doing what you do man, it seems to being going good for ya -peace |
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02-20-05, 01:36 AM
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The Rulers Back
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this was a good listen lyrics were good concept is suttin fresh to what isnt normally posted on rv flow was good fell off in some spots but eh that doesnt take away from the message you got your point across an thats all that matters overall i enjoyed it mos def worth the d/l.....=1=
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02-20-05, 03:51 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 17A6 8175
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im not tryna hate...but if you had an american em sce this shit would sound alot beter to ME........... but yo nice shit...flow is nice lyrics are dope.... to be real you sound kinda like 2 pac when you rap.....like you got the ame style and talk about the same shit.....i think that is mad dope.....yo...nice shit..usually i would think that is wack but i honestly think that is mad dope beat is mad dope.....shit sounds realll good...fits your style.... your flow was on point nice shit...nothing was really offf. your chorus could have been a lil better....like if you would have had the ONE DAY as a back ground voice.....would have been dope but all in all this was mad dope yo you know i be feeling all of your shit......word... RTF......i dont need a link becuase im that dope...lol but the song is by me and enygma,,...called HIP HOP IS OURS.....
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02-20-05, 06:38 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 80C5 FF8A
Lol @ american em sce.. I enjoy releasing these tracks on RV, but understand I do rap primarily for an Australian audience.. As for sounding like Tupac.. I think its just cause I got a base type voice.. I mean Pac has been a real big influence to me as an artist no doubt but I dont get into the whole Thuglife type thing cause I do live in a different culture to what pac grew up in.. But probably when I get down and rap for the ladies I know I've taken a few notes from his music..
 BTW I'm gonna be re-recording this with new hooks & shit.. Consider this as a preview type thing.. I might even add another verse.. Well have to wait and see.. The way I did this was by cutting off loop points and re starting the beat for the second verse.. So I basically got complete control over what I can do with the beat itself.. Thanks for the contructive critasism so far.. Uppin for more..  |
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02-20-05, 09:35 AM
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Listening...dope beat...fuck you sound like Pac, I swear...Nice flow, nice lyrics...I think your voice is bein' loud as it is nice...it's clear, and the quality is great...hook is pretty good...this is a very nice track, keep up the good work. What happened t the collab that we were supposed to do???
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02-20-05, 09:57 AM
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IP: 80C5 FF8A
Sorry man this is the first track I've done in about 2 weeks.. Cause I've had a lot of other stuff going on latly. Well hit it up as soon as I get back into dropping regularily..
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02-20-05, 11:27 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 4EBF 2570
Beat/Production: The beat ain't bad, its pretty much looped straight though. I guess it fits you, but definitly a throwback feel to it. Ol'School style. Lyrics: Lyrics weren't bad, there was sum parts where you were above par with them, and then you dropped to basic shit. But wasn't bad. Flow: Flow was choppy in a few lines, the way you pronounced your words didn't hit with bass line, but besides that your flow was straight. Delivery: Delivery probably your strongest point, because you have a lot of emotion. I think this is what makes your songs stick out because of that sound, plus the whole Tupac feel. Quality: Nothing wrong here..shit was clear beyond muffled. Overall: Decent track, short though...yea you should add another verse to this shit. What you should do is teach me some more high-tech production skills within Cool Edit Pro 2.0. I would rate this track a 8.5/10. Keep At It. Only thing I could say that would be a negative with your rapping, is that you sound like Tupac, and no industry is gonna sign someone who sounds like someone who died from a gun-shooting and had such an impact on the industry....blah but maybe I'm wrong because they did sign that one cat who sounds like Biggie. ~R~ |
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02-20-05, 12:04 PM
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aihgt im listenin son...
lol..fuckin accent is funny... but yea...quality is pretty good...lyrics is good but ya flow fell off at some points...sounds like some old school shit...other then ya flow its pretty solid...levels coulda been betta by turnin down ya vocals...they seemed to high to me..
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02-20-05, 12:25 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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I think you should take some of the reverb out your vocals
but they are clear... bring that Reverb down a notch... beat is good flow is good kinda reminds me of pac here... good 1 1 |
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02-20-05, 01:53 PM
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The Light
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man... i swear, pac came back thru u ROFL.. i swear, if a company wanted to make u as a gimmick to be the recarnation of pac, and u had a black vboice... shiiit ud be right.. i aint heard nobody in my LIFE that sounds as much as pac as you do....
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02-20-05, 02:11 PM
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IP: C6A9 FC75
dope...beat is dope...flow is perfect...lyrics is tite...hook...classic...
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02-20-05, 07:42 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 80C5 FF8A
Damn -_- I gotta try and shake the pac voice lol..
Thanks for the feed all. I'll be uploading the new version today probably so be ready for it.. |
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02-21-05, 12:41 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 80C5 FF8A
Uppin..........
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