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Old 04-09-05, 07:06 PM   #31
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Listening: 2Pac Thugs Mansion beat yea yea i LOOOOOOOOVE this beat...romantic stuff...nice rhyming...topically you on point...flow is nice...lol parents are scarey...hook was dope...the emotion is some of the best i have heard so far since listening on RV...props on this track you done well


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lol, yo thanx for teh feed man, really appreciate it.. i think this is the best feed i've gotten so far lol
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Old 04-10-05, 04:24 PM   #32
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pretty good song, but lots of stuff to work on...you have some talent...but fell off the beat alot. and you kinda rap like they a baby talks. saying stuff like wif...instead of with...its not a big deal and you probably do it on purpose...but i liked the singing...doubles were a little off...but this showed some potential...GOOD SHIT...well done, keep dropping
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Old 04-10-05, 06:11 PM   #33
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thanx man... now i know what to improve on yo... yeah my next song will definately be alot better..
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Old 04-10-05, 11:12 PM   #34
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this was nice and shit i like this word versees were ok but i really like the singging...do yo thang ....RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185169
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Old 04-11-05, 11:15 PM   #35
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what kind of feedback is that man?
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Old 05-07-05, 03:45 PM   #36
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uppin for old times sake......
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Old 05-07-05, 11:45 PM   #37
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Really feelin this shit...Nice mix, voice, flow, lyrics are sexy...lol...Good shit man...U did a good job rapping over a beat with no drums in it...lol...Good shit fam!
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