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04-01-05, 10:44 PM
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IP: 1C81 276B
This is so great I jizzed my shorts..
nah...nice verse overall but you getta 3/100 for not praising BC 45/50
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04-01-05, 10:47 PM
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IP: 3E60 38C3
BC is dope... there now you know I'm godly. thanks for the feed.
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04-01-05, 10:53 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
word you had a nice hook there. some good use of metaphores, nice flow good syllable count. decent stucutre. yep this could be a OM of the month again word to what In Vision said. the imagery was very well done. im feeling this. i was flowin wit this to some ozone beat i found and it worked well. word.
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04-01-05, 10:54 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 3E60 38C3
iight man... thanks for the feed back.
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04-01-05, 10:56 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
man this was cool, like yur usuage of vocab, structure was cool, flow was cool...different from most which is cool, like the originality...overal 8.98/10... I got a OM comin later tonight...rtf it'll be called Meanine Pants... Secretary of State signing out this bitch....
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04-01-05, 11:01 PM
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IP: 403D 72A8
damn man some good shit here nice metas wordplay was tight ya verses were very vivid...nice shit 8.5/10
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04-01-05, 11:12 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 3E60 38C3
thanks all three of you... either I've already left feed on your oM or I'll rtf... thanks for taking the time to read...
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04-02-05, 08:59 AM
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The New King Of New York
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IP: C024 E429
This is one of the dopest OM's i have ever read on here, EVER. Period. Emotions was good, crazy imagery, as soon as i started readin' this, only one thing came to mind, OM of the month, possibly the year. This shit was crazy nice, keep up that shit.
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04-02-05, 02:15 PM
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I Thought You Left?
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IP: DFC2 4C11
Wow village...best shit Ive read from you...
The vocab was insane...Imagery in the hook was ill....the flow was good throught out...the structure was cool...u had some typo's but i dont blame yah, it was a long piece....very hot topic forreal...every thing was on point and in depth...9.9/10...fix the typos and oyu get a 10/10  Amazing piece man
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04-03-05, 10:11 AM
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Loyalty proven
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IP: C7EE 5FCD
yo nice shit man. im mad i put off readin this till today. some of the best shit i read in a min. me you and the real indeph gotta collab sometimes. you had so much raw emotion in this shit man. this drop right here definately deserves a nomination for om of the month. you got my vote man. SHit was beautiful. keep it up son.
RTF... when i get my om up
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04-03-05, 02:26 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
thanks y'all... I'll rtf on monday when I can get on a good computer.
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04-03-05, 07:55 PM
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IP: 3CAE 6243
ahhhh, VP with another dope drop... you just keep em coming huh? lol nice shit, keep it up, this was sick, great meta's, nice flow, structure, good drop, didnt stretch your lines, I liked this a lot, 9/10
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04-04-05, 11:16 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
This was a nice peice , i was really feeling it
the structure and how the verses changed sides Liked the emotions of this peice... had nice feeling and i was really feeling it .. overall this was dope , and i couldnt expect anything less then that.. Nice job :thumbsup: Keep up
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04-05-05, 08:17 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 2DD2 FAE7
I'll tell the truth.. that was one of your weak open mics....
i just wasnt feeling it.. what happened man.. i luved all your other open mics... 7.8/10
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04-05-05, 08:19 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 2DD2 FAE7
I aint saying your shiit was horrible. it just.. i didn't like it that much..
but no doubt you are the best om writer in the site...
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