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View Poll Results: Showtime vs. LyricalMa$tamind | |||
LyricalMa$tamind | 5 | 83.33% | |
! ShowtimE ! | 1 | 16.67% | |
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04-12-05, 06:40 PM | #46 | |
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IP: 806C A26A
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04-12-05, 09:22 PM | #47 |
Skadoosh!
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IP: 9458 811B
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
Lyrical - aight drop............flow was aight, bit choppy in places, ure structure is fucked honestly u need to fix that....and drop the // cuz they make ya look herbish!!! vocab was pretty basic throughout with some spots that were quite gud....wordplay was weak, ya had a couple of metas in there which were aight. ure punches tho were average, a couple of fairly gud ones, but some weak to and some self-glorifyin goin on in there. some attempted personals but i don't think shit was comin off as gud as it cud've done but still an ok drop. 6.5/10 Showtime - flow and structure on point better than lyricals....ure punches in ure verse were similar because they were not hittin as hard as they cud. i see the effort put into them but a lot could be worded better for a nicer effect. some personals in there although i wasn't feelin ure opener, i thought that was very weak!! the closer to was weak, mainly filler and not a real punch. not much for creativity, just some basic vocab and shit, nuthin special that i aint seen before. need to elevate on ya punches, throw in some dope ass metas and multies and hot personals and you'll go far!! 6/10 - Return the fave on the Kesse Battle!! Links In My Siggy!!! |
04-12-05, 09:40 PM | #48 | |
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IP: 806C A26A
thanx 4 da vote
still uppin dis shit
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04-12-05, 09:45 PM | #49 | |
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
IP: D730 A3B7
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04-13-05, 04:10 PM | #50 | |
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IP: 7CF5 4B0D
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04-13-05, 08:03 PM | #51 | |
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04-13-05, 08:23 PM | #52 | |
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
IP: 104C 51B3
uppin this shit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!
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04-14-05, 09:59 AM | #53 | |
vanquising Mc's Daily
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IP: 7BE9 3FF0
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
AIght even LM is a fag.. He took this battle, He had more punches, Little personals, and it flowed aight i guess.. depends on how you read it..but it was still mad weak, and nothing you should be proud of.. You won a battle agaist a newb.. Good for you.. lol Showtime your verse was aight, could have worded some things better and added some more lines.. Aight..
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04-14-05, 03:48 PM | #54 | |
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IP: 5CB9 3F3B
thanx fag
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04-14-05, 06:48 PM | #55 | |
~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
iight lets start with showtime! Shit wasn't hitting to hard you had a couple good bars structure was off vocab was cool fav lines was lets get this shit poppin, Lyrical Mastamind... your name is fake it should be, Lyrical Disaster-Time... now the beast has emerged, teachin you to plot the blueprint... you must be a square, you and the winners circle arent congruent... You started off good but you ended kind of bad! LyricalMa$termind You came on strong vocab was good structure was kind of shakey at spots but was still hitting you also came on hard merk his ass but it was kind of hard to read. Fav lines was My viscious rhymes fill and wrap your brain like lyrical vines/ Palestinian bombs couldn't phase my adamantium rhymes/ Spittin psychological testaments that wipe out tenements without hesitance/ Envy's evident while you're regrettin facin this one-man armored regiment/ street sweeperz, mackz n 44's limit ya lifeline wit no doubt/ 22 lines to murk u/ bitch now im out That shit was hot as fuck but umm overall my vote goes to........ vote=LyricalMa$termind |
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