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Old 04-14-05, 08:12 PM   #1
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Hells Fire vs Kesse

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Semi-Final Round
Don't no-show because y would you since it took more then a month or two to get this far so if i was u i'd try my best..

Check ins due Saturday..

Verses Due Tuesday..

Lines: 20-40 Lines Max

Topic: Unbalanced World

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Old 04-14-05, 10:15 PM   #2
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wtf? i just had that topic last round......word [/check in]
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Old 04-14-05, 10:30 PM   #3
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u serious?? lol i'll change it
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Old 04-14-05, 10:53 PM   #4
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yeah man, haha, i wouldn't have said anything but my verse last round sucked...........word
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Old 04-16-05, 11:13 AM   #5
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checkin in.... sorry i was gone yesterday we still good
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Old 04-16-05, 01:03 PM   #6
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yeh, its still saturday, you're golden......gl yo
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Old 04-16-05, 10:40 PM   #7
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Nah, I'm the only one who is Golden .
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Old 04-17-05, 01:14 AM   #8
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^ that avy is pretty golden...lval
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Old 04-17-05, 08:52 PM   #9
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Your avatar looks like your mom last night at that wild party last night. word
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Old 04-18-05, 03:04 PM   #10
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topic is still unbalanced world right or did we change it
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yeah.. unbalanced world
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Old 04-18-05, 10:00 PM   #12
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There ya go. He changed it, but to a Unbalanced World. I wish I had that topic. You know I'm starting to say word at the end of my posts a lot? It's weird, word.
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Old 04-18-05, 10:56 PM   #13
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Unbalanced world

There was a planet and god created life
There was a adam and god created wife
So pure after a million of jurrassic and death
So sure before a villian of terroric hand depth
A fruit produced to kill that what was created
a tooth engulfed to vile which almighty hated
curiousity and stupidity lead to death and disease
animosity and nudity lead to self fire and no cease
That which we relied of life turned to slave for life
That which we allied for life turned to made for knife
Man turned to group turned to city turned to state
Politic turned group friend to enemy foed to hate
Nature turned shelter to mature for home to make
Nature learned skelter to rapture for throne to take
Metal tool for make of tool for war tool left horrible scar
Mental fool for sake of rule for war fool left terrible war
Animal new to extinct juvenile turned adult for precinct
Denial grew to distinct senile maned fault for excrement
The worm birthed from the apple had destoyed surface to core
The germ birthed from shrapnel had estoyed mallace to gore--(estoy-to be)
Evil and corruption gaining weight on the planetary tetertauter
vile and consumption waining fate on the evolutionary mentor
Talk turned communication turned envious and gossip progression
write turned conversation turn email-us and hate it no stagnation
Unbalanced world of demonic message within love and strength
unbalanced world of horrific homeage within good and faith
Let this world find that path and forgive each other for wrath
Let this problem find the math and derive each other for half
Till then the sea is soughter and god berthed a demonic angel for daugther
till then the blood is water and we frogs maybe mechanic pawn for faughter
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Old 04-20-05, 01:01 AM   #14
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Unbalanced World

i lived my life, where i was never accepted
even though i didn't try, i was still rejected
never suspected, that a reason was my family
dad an unemployed drunk, but that aint the tragedy
mom worked 2 jobs, and we barely came out even
she deserved better, but had no time for dreamin
got me steamin, and paps leaving.... such a bitch
said "i only was with you, cause your daddy was rich"
i could never make up, for all the things mom gave me
kicked outta her home at 15 cause she was having a baby
it seems like my fault, but she tells me im a fool
but it doesnt really matter because im hated at school
an unwritten code, youre only cool if you have alot of friends
suppose to awe and drool over the latest fashion trends
but i dont blend very well with the every-day crowd
i can feel the hate, even though its not spoken out loud
and like a cloud in the sky, passing by not making a sound
until a storm brews and my innocent body takes a pound
ive hit the ground many times, but i always rise above
they may force their hate upon me, but cant take away my love
im a dove in this world, tryin to fly freely through air
but instead im hurled, cause its a fact life isnt fair
you can swear all you want, even try 1000 prayers
gotta learn to do it on your own, cause not everyone cares
ive made alot of mistakes, but i dont let them ache
because whats the point of trying, when everone else is fake
for heavens sake, why cant things run smooth and work
how does one make a respected repuation by being a jerk?...
i live in an unbalanced world, every day theres disruptions
life is like a volcano...its filled with constant eruptions
theres going to be corruption, but i do the best with whats given
cause things couldve been alot worse, im just thankful im livin
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Old 04-20-05, 01:03 AM   #15
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LMFAO@ Kesse being 1 minute late lol its hells fire choice now either he lets it stay or youre DQ'ed
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