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MaRVJay1009 3 37.50%
hotshh! 5 62.50%
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Old 05-02-05, 06:55 PM   #46
N.Tavarez
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............................................^^^^my 1st line is the truest personal i ever said
the second bar was confirmed by this kid when he got 3 votes dq
but gather ya friends.......................
 
Old 05-02-05, 10:59 PM   #47
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lol yo shut up nigga u aint win shit...u'll take any fukkin vote u cant get
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Old 05-03-05, 06:44 PM   #48
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i know u aint talking
if i win again, you'll send it to complaints..........
dont even know whats the point....
 
Old 05-03-05, 08:46 PM   #49
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Voted For: hotshh!

I think that hotshh! got this battle because i feel that hotshh! came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt hotshh! got it was effective and was on point marvjay1009 you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to hotshh! good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to hotshh! and flow and structure i'll give to hotshh!. Marv i think what lets you down sometimes is the stretched structure effects your verse, try and cut it down some...

V/hotshh! RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

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Old 05-04-05, 03:50 PM   #50
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u neva won so shut da fukk up u dickhead...dis da battle of ya life...dis aint shit 2 me...cum on i done said dat weave line like 2 years ago...da droppin dymes shit is played ur a rv mc u have a rv style
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Old 05-04-05, 05:45 PM   #51
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2 days until RTF deadline.........................
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

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Old 05-04-05, 06:25 PM   #52
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Originally Posted by MaRVJay1009
u neva won so shut da fukk up u dickhead...dis da battle of ya life...dis aint shit 2 me...cum on i done said dat weave line like 2 years ago...da droppin dymes shit is played ur a rv mc u have a rv style



lets get this straight, battle of my life? i beat you b4,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174225
it was a KO in MULTI'S!
AND you had punches,
i told you, imagine a text battle....and you came with some busted shit in that too, dont believe me? lets see....
im 2 sick,and u bitch!..i just got a new 5th so fam a few clips.
a hit a head n leave u like da "yankee's when babe died","roof-less".*ruth*
YOUR SETUP IS ALWAYS SELF GLORIFY
type of guns i hold make kops-get-scared,chill! ya not-sick-quer.
he raps like "nelly" ppl came da see marv spit no1 cares if "HOT in here"*
AGAIN, AND NOW YOU GOT GUNS ONLINE, WOW...AND A NELLY PUNCH!
HOW FRESH!!
no1 stopin dis bastard!,u lyin 2 ppl on rv hot ur an actress go hop in a casket.
u wouldn't have a "buzz in da hood" if u put ya "intercom on da top of ya jacket".
OHHHH, MULTIS, IN A TEXT BATTLE, WTF, STRETCHED AND HORRIBLY WORDED
dis fagget lie's!...talkin bout in da bronx he shoot his gun & be stabin guy's.
put jay in ya PaRa-graph PaRa-medics gon tell ya moms her boy's PaRa-lized.
SETUP, NEVER SAID THAT, AND OHHH LOOK HOW MANY TIMES HE SAID PARA...UNIQUE
vets think ur still a noob who wants dis dick in a crew,he does alot of bickerin 2.
u spit with da flu?,no u "da medicine man" well i know "women sicker" than u.
WOMEN SICKER THAN ME...NOW IMA CRY...
couldn't "see marv" on his "bp page",im cool u dont wanna c-me-rage.
u'll neva get on da radio usin ya "demo as a frisby" a be da only time ya "Cd-plays"
ANOTHER SELF GLORIFY INTO A PLAYED PUNCH.......
MOST YA PUNCHES BE PLAYED ANYWAY, TOO STRETCHED TO SPIT TO A BEAT...NO PERSONALS IN ANY OF YA BATTLES...
SO THAT MEANS YOU JUST INSERT PRE WRITTEN SHIT INTO YA VERSES.
AND YOU THE BEST? NIGGA YOU ME IN MY 2ND MONTH ONLINE..
AND BY THE WAY, YOU THINK IMA TEXT HEAD? THIS THE 1ST TIME I EVER DID TEXT WAS THIS SITE...TOOK ME MAD LONG TO ADJUST, READ MY 1ST SHITS YOU'LL SEE THE DIFFERENCE. IN THE STREET I'D MERK YOU EASILY, NIGGA CANT SPIT TO NO BEAT...
AND THIS AINT SWAYING, ANYONE WHO READS THIS VOTED ALREADY OR AINT GONNA VOTE..
AT BEST, YOU PRETTY GOOD........BUT YOU AINT BETTER THAN ME. PERIOD
 
Old 05-04-05, 08:01 PM   #53
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wish i could vote.

would of honestly given it to hotshh!
 
Old 05-04-05, 10:52 PM   #54
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Lmaoooo U Been On Dis Site Madd Fukkin Long Stop Frontin Bitch....and I Asked U A Thousand Times...lets Battle In Da Streets 4 Some Doe...nuff Said I Can Get Da Cam Corda U Just Show Up...and Im 1009 Times Betta Than U Fagget And Typical Got Some Dickridin Crew Goin Along Dat Shit Is Gon Stop Tho...and U Currently Have 2 Unexplained Votes They Will Get Taken Away Lol..
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Old 05-05-05, 01:05 PM   #55
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yeah i know you will

listen the whole site is aware of this battle, you just looking like a bitch by getting everything dq'd, ...and i been on this site for mad long?
u joined in dec and almost got more posts than me....hahahaha you have no life

when im back in the city this summer we'll see whats up
 
Old 05-05-05, 06:18 PM   #56
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1 day...don't think i'm kidding...you and another 2 battles are gonna get my vote removed RTF please...it doesn't hurt...oh no refunds so once it's gone...it's gone
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Old 05-05-05, 06:26 PM   #57
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lol^^.....look stupid i have 1,400 somthin post...im no where near u so dat was dumb...nobody can call me a bitch cuzz they cant fukk with me...n a lose is nothin 2 me i just want explained votes datz it
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Old 05-05-05, 07:00 PM   #58
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on EVERY battle? and ONLY when your losing?
i wont beef wit you marv, its gay...if i lose
fine...but i hate checking on battles every day,let the shit close
outta dem 3 votes DQ'd, one was un explained, you just think cats is gonna drop novels for votes.....its a miracle if a battle closes as fast as this one almost did, the more u dq the longer it'll be b4 someone votes and the battle finishes
i bet if YOU were up 4-2 wit the same votes i had you wouldnt have DQ'd ya votes
cause they was unexplained..you'd take it....dont give me that
i had a battle with like 600 views and 2 votes that expired, dont tell me ever1 DR's me...cats barely vote, THATS why i was mad, u got more than half my votes DQ'd
 
Old 05-12-05, 07:26 PM   #59
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Voted For: hotshh!

Chose Winners Verse:

All my votes are Liable.......cause you be snitching for Survival
Marv dropped so many dimes, he got a bank account with 5-0
Nice Bar could be better worded tho...
So of course marv J "runshit"....... he too broke for a Whip!!
Da last time u hopped on anything dat move, was Strobe Dick
I'm feeling that set up and the punch was relevent nice...
Ha! Im starving to play, cuz on da ball court u are what u Say
Ya shots miss on the net, Ive always owned a 'Marvolous JAy'
this is kinda weak.. but still decent...
I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell
Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L"
LMAO i definitely liked this one for some reason...
U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em
U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done
ahah Pretty Nice Bar here..
So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak
Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep
nice closer... i liked this...(silly internet geeks!!)

Okay So Overall: Hotshh you came pretty original... your punches were hitting hard the whole way thru.. also your flow and structure was on point.. you had plenty of personals.. your verse was pretty edgy and i enjoyed reading it.. the only line i wasnt feel too much was the basketball line.. it coulda been done better but hey it was still nice...

MarvJay:
Your Verse was nice.. but your structure is very hard to read.. also you have a tendency to come played on your punches this time you didnt do that as much.. the only thing i really dont care for are your punches like "Buzz in Da Hood" stuff like that just isnt really what i look for... overall your verse was decent i just dont think u had what it takes to edge out hot.. pz..
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