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dope drop great vocab and flow i liked this drop yall busted this up
ill be readin more of your drops atticus good stuff homie 9/10 one of tha best and most complex ive read yet......

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

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this was a pretty nice piece.....had good emotion....imagry was aiight
atticus had good vocab and wordplay....i like how some lines just flowed right off my tongue........good structure and i liked the topic for this collab......
onestep you flow was good....good emotions....structure was good.....you need to throw in some better vocab....it was good but it coulda been a lil better.......this was a good collab tho
keep it up fellas

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Nice concept you worked with here, don't think I have seen it being used before on RV. Both had nice pieces, Atticus picked up pace bit more but he had more opportunity to show his talent of course. I was feeling the imagery of course, especially in chorus and the emotion was strong and pure. Was feeling the flow and had some insightful lines in there that made me think about shit

For instance:

Stood Youth Doomed By "Could Do's", Never Dones Continue To Run
Through A Life Of Light Blind To Strive With Eyes Fused Up.
^nice lines...

Keep it up boys and rtf on my open mic please (link in sig)...

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Yeah Atticus...dat was cool..u dropped some complex shit there!Multies were off d hook man! Waitin 4 d audio.....

I liked OSB's verse...both had pretty dope drops. The verses comingled well, vocabulary was fine. Good multis, nice concept... Keep dropping pieces like this. Sound pretty good in audio. Favorite Lines:

Attached mentally to my girl in which I struggle to fix,
I always fall One Step short, now failures strung in the mix,
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Stood Youth Doomed By "Could Do's", Never Dones Continue To Run

.....ight fam that was a hot drop yah came wit real shit....i really felt the hook it was different i liked that u both came wit perfect structure...the vocab in both verse were perfect for a drop like this Real Talk the whole time....the last verse i give props to Atticus he ended it wit a fire verse to leave a point....also osb came good wit his verse....My insecurities are endless, life with dozens of twists,
Running from myself... and my purity, it doesn't exsist....
^^^this line was hot....
This was a good idea by both of yah.....an u did it perfect....9/10....an thats really good from me ...i tell the truth striaght out..ight..1

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shit that was a hot callabo right there....
structure was great
vocab was great
thats some real good OM talent keep it up both of you...good things are in your future
9/10

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yeah this was heavy stuff!! lol i dont really read all the open mics as much but im glad i read this! lots of tight vocabulary and very nice original lines from both! i preferred atticus's second verse as i feel it flowed better as the first one was more poetic! OSB jus killed it! lol, this is one of the best om's i've read so far!
Bottle up my firing emotions and when the molten builds,
One day they explode, flaming, burning, igniting the fuse,
fighting the fueds within myself, i'm frightened to choose,
^^these were my favourite lines from OSB, i dont no y, i suppose we all can identify with those feelins and i liked the way he described them

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Stood Youth Doomed By "Could Do's"
^^favourite lines from Atticus, lol this was deep man keep this up! u 2 should collab more often both of ur styles worked well together as atticus's was more poetry based and complex, OSB jus came wit it n hit hard n used simpler but effective vocabulary! Thats my opinion anyway!

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

GOTDAMN!...Damn...Damn...Damn Dat Was Flames On Both Side...Luv'd Da Chorus Too Dat Shit Was Serious

Atticus You Used Alotta Imagery, Vocab, Nice Structure...Wordplay Was On Point Fareal

OSB You Used Imagery Also, Nice Wordplay, Structure Was Fine...You Laced Ya Shit

Real Talk...One Of Da Best OM's I've Read So Far...Keep It Up Niggaz


$cream At Me

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WOW. amazing shit right here... attitcus, you had str8 multies, and nice rhyming, nothing seemed forced, sounded like some str8 nas level shit... dope def....

OSB, daaayyyummmm killeed this!, deep emotional type words like i could picture scarface and this... dope to the max...

nice drop yall everything was on point, flow, topic, structure, great OM... damn, good drop!!

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