^^^^^^^ What he said rapverse

Fucking vote bitches!

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Fuckin uppin you fuckin muffins

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fucking uppin this bitch.....

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Aight this was a real close battle........like real close both had good imagery and good metas....i mean both were well written....i mean i like cali's closer, it was dope, really made me think, and i liked blak's intro which was nice....basically the only way to decide who won this battle was who stuck to the topic or in my eyes who itnerprated teh topic betta .........and that was blak magik....dont get me wrong cali's was dope, but to me it didnt fit the topic as well as magiks.....jus my opinion though

v/magik

^thanks for the honest vote i think black won too im new to topicals and the kids pretty dope at them so uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pp

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

Voted For: ^^..^^

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=197870
RTF Cali....or vote will be removed.

Black:
Nice topic, concept was strong....Could of used a little more emotion an vocab....i was feelin ya Imagery throughout.

Vocab could use a little brushin up, overall it was a good topic tho'''easy too read, structure was good.....nice writing, just need too elevate in emotion an vocab, an you'll be one of the better topical writers around here.

Cali-

Real nice, all ya poetry writing is paying off....good use of vocab, creative lines an really nice imagery.....emotion wasnt as strong as it could of been, but it was deeper an seemed too be more intouch with the emotions than black was.

really nice drop Cal, good read....the scheme you chose when i first started reading it i didnt think was as strong as blacks, but you got better as the peice went on, good drop both of y'all.....good enjoyable read.

RTF Cali or vote will be removed homeboy

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^lmfao ok ill drop honest votes for all 4 voters tonight uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppp

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

Uppin Thru the Fucking Roof...

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Uppin Thru the Fucking Roof...

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