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Old 07-17-05, 08:23 PM   #31
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I've kept an eye on your songs, and you've improved a whole lot..........

Yea, the 2004 thing threw me off, lol, but its still coo....................The storyline was built through the metaphors that you used....Which created the foundation of the song....The chorus was tight.....Overall, good track.......................

8.5/10
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Old 07-17-05, 09:44 PM   #32
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Thanx man...Hit me up for a collab sometime...
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Old 07-17-05, 10:05 PM   #33
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Fa sho, i'll hit you up sometime this week playa............
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Old 07-18-05, 05:57 PM   #34
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Iight sounds good

Uppin
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Old 07-18-05, 06:38 PM   #35
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yo the beats aight...ur flow is dope...ur quality is perfected....it kinda a deep song...the hook is straight....cant be mad 8.5/10..RTF on "Still Incomplete"
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Old 07-18-05, 08:42 PM   #36
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when the hells our collab gonna jump off Cecil???????????


HOLLA
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Old 07-18-05, 09:00 PM   #37
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i was feelin the beat, simple but nice... flow is nice, storyline is str8.. chorus is aight. there are a few places were your dubs don't match up real good.. but quality is str8, lyrics is aight as well... you sound like this chi-town rapper, White Boi... just a bit. Str8 track overall..
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Old 07-18-05, 09:37 PM   #38
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Thanx yall

Uppin this
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Old 07-18-05, 09:43 PM   #39
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NEGRO YOU DONT SEE ME???????????????????//


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Old 07-18-05, 09:48 PM   #40
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OOPS

I see you now
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Old 07-18-05, 09:48 PM   #41
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Get on aim Tito!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-18-05, 11:13 PM   #42
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hey, what up foo

nice, i was feeling the beat the whole way through, steady delievery, and clear......word, lyrics are awesome as well, keep fuckin droppin man, im not feeling the quality, but its probly because im listening through headphones, so, dont worry.....good shizzle man,
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Old 07-18-05, 11:40 PM   #43
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Thanx sukka foo!!

Sup Drakel! Long time no aim convo's
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Old 07-19-05, 09:55 PM   #44
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Caw Caw.............
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Old 07-20-05, 01:47 AM   #45
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damn i love this beat... lyrics were on point ya use of the multis kept me guessin at the next words man nice shit for real i loved if you ever wanna do a collab holla at me
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