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07-24-05, 07:39 PM
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Freestyle fo' fun
IP: 6D28 574C
Yo, I cook cats like crack,
Bring it back, I got stats, More heart pumpin' than a fuckin' heart attack, I ain't givin' up my reign, is ya cats insane, Tap my brain to turn water into acid rain, I bring tha pain like Brock, More solid than a rock, You want my skills, hea make a million in tha stocks, I'ma take you tha top 'til you can't see tha bottom, Than drop you like Tetris playin' a game of Columns, Oh shit I'm just raw, More puzzlin' than Saw, And if y'all don't get it than y'all is just lost, But pay attention to my sentence, How I mention and how I say it, 'Cause by tha time you catch it you niggas is gettin' slayed. Now wha'!!! A freestyle I just wrote... wha'cha think? http://community.rapverse.com/editp...tpost&p=2317420 |
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07-24-05, 07:40 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Not feeling it man
90% of it didnt even make sense...
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07-24-05, 07:43 PM
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IP: 6D28 574C
That's why you's lost man.
Oh shit I'm just raw, More puzzlin' than Saw, And if y'all don't get it than y'all is just lost, |
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07-24-05, 07:45 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Lol Ok..............
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07-24-05, 07:57 PM
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IP: 6D28 574C
You's funny son, you go around talkin' shit to cats right, but look at'chu kid you go around wit' a quote that says "my feminine side is a lesbian" Wha's that about son.
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07-24-05, 07:58 PM
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IP: 6D28 574C
But yer' Barz of steel huh?......
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07-24-05, 10:52 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Yep
And if you want, I will be more than happy to put a loss on your record I really dont want to though, seeing as I could save you the embarrassment of talking shit and getting KO'ed Learn your place bitch
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07-24-05, 11:13 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 2297 E5F5
eh, this was ok, seen better, work on your structure some, flow was pretty good, just keep workin at it man
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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07-26-05, 07:36 PM
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IP: 9B9E 6219
hanx fo' tha supprt and feedback, much luv.
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07-26-05, 10:21 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 2029 97B3
Yo im new do you wanna battle . i wanna see what you got
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07-26-05, 10:29 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
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07-26-05, 10:36 PM
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IP: DD02 1081
chillout nigga
overal - fix up that structure and make it have sence for a freestyle ain't bad but if you fix it well it will make niggaz feel it, na'm sayin? keep up hom
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07-26-05, 10:43 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: B48D C7D5
Yo, young, chill out son, you wants some of me you got it kid. Just let me know when and where.
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