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un-fuck-widable 1 16.67%
Daubs 5 83.33%
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Old 08-02-05, 04:09 PM   #16
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Old 08-03-05, 10:09 PM   #17
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voten 4 un-fuck-wibable

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my vote goes to him from his punch's and flow just come 2gether like
plastic on ice
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Old 08-04-05, 10:17 AM   #18
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Old 08-04-05, 03:03 PM   #19
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Old 08-05-05, 02:58 PM   #20
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

Flows:-UNF-
Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines-
cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/

u started off well using nice words to start off this battle...u hav used a lot of vocabulary skills at the start..nice opening

Punches: Daubs
Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable..
Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able..

Pretty nice wordplay but i dont think the benneuk@hotmail.com has anything to do but some of wordplay done by daubs wasn't brought hard enough....

The best punches by -UNF-:
ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'-
after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/

The worst punch by -UNF-:
muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest-
i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/

The best Punch by Daubs:
You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream..
And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream)

Worst Punch by Daubs:
Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight..
And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!!

Best Punch Overall in this battle:
daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow-
plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/



But overall i think that unf had much more harder punches with great power into the wordplay....

daubs had some very nice punches and vocab skills weere great but i just wasnt quite feelin the wordplay

but nice battle yo....very close one...


Vote: -UNF-
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Old 08-05-05, 03:00 PM   #21
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my vote goes to him from his punch's and flow just come 2gether like
plastic on ice


battle me if u think u the bigger better man...come on.....-unf- will set it up...crew votes allowed and all the usual house rules......6 lines u down?
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Old 08-05-05, 03:32 PM   #22
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You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream..
And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream)
5...played concept really and the pipe dream shit wasn't all that clever.
Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable..
Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able..
6...clever wordplay in this bar, nice punch.
The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath..
And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked..
6...nice punch, but chess lines are getting played now.
Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight..
And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!!
7...LoL!! decent personal punch, had me laughin.
Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends..
And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N..
7...OUCH!! this was a fuckin nice personal punch.

OVERALL: 31/50



Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines-
cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/
5...this was weak, the concept was gay and the delivery wasn't good.
daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow-
plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/
6...played concept but an ok spin on it and still funny
muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest-
i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/
7...basic delivery really, but it cracked me up with the 2nd line
ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'-
after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/
7...HOLY SHIT!!! LMAO!!! dope punch.
play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours-
Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/
5...weak closer, disappointing cuz the concept was ok, but punch for it was wack.

OVERALL: 30/50



close battle, both had a couple of shit lines and a couple of real funny ass lines, but in the end daubs wins it cuz his crap lines weren't as shit as un-fuck-widable's

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Old 08-05-05, 05:06 PM   #23
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Yeah, il rtf tommorow man.........................

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Old 08-06-05, 02:56 PM   #24
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You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream..
And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream)
meh, okay
Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable..
Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able..
weak
The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath..
And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked..
almost
Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight..
And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!!
meh, played
Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends..
And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N..
an aight closer


Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines-
cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/
meh, u flipped this shit
daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow-
plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/
okay
muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest-
i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/
nope
ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'-
after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/
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play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours-
Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/
okay

not really liking both verses.. but Daubs took this one here
punches were a harder, both structures were aight here, &
the flow was blah.. UNF, work on ur punches a little more,
one of them was okay, but the rest were garbage, so elevate
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Old 08-06-05, 04:08 PM   #25
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Old 08-09-05, 08:26 PM   #26
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This was feedback posted for Daubs

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hahahaha my boi daubs took this EZ.......man checkin polls g'luck homie
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Old 08-10-05, 07:35 PM   #27
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muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest-
i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/
LMAO ^
Nice....

uppin this for faaaaaaaam....
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Old 08-13-05, 06:13 PM   #29
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Old 08-13-05, 06:38 PM   #30
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Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines-
cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/
^^^Played.....2/10
daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow-
plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/
^^NO...this is whack..a newbish punch...1/10
muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest-
i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/
^^Hmm...coulda been better...3/10
ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'-
after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/
^^OK...dawg..how you know about Cosby's pubic hair?..ewww....2/10
play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours-
Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/
^^No....2/10

Bad.C'mon man.Ya flow was ite...had some multis...but structure sucked.Get rid of the "/".Makes it look newbish.And your punches...man....they were bad man.Upp your creativity up.None of those lines had creativity.All of them were geniric "you couldn;t do this or be this if you....".It's Ok to have that approach for a couple bars..but not a whole verse.And where the fuck are your personals?

You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream..
And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream)
^^Nice personal/punch here..creative too...7/10
Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable..
Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able..
^^Nice nameplay....6/10
The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath..
And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked..
^^Hmm...set-up was horrible,chess line?.nah...4/10
Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight..
And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!!
^^OK....6/10
Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends..
And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N..
^^Good....6/10

Ok.....good verse.Flow was ite.Structure was ite though you could get rid of some fillers and hypens.Punches is where you shined.As opposed to unfuck...you had personals in your verse.The best bar was ur opener where you ripped on his address..a creative punch.My opinion..a one-sided battle

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