Stop starting beef in my open mic.

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biggity bump...

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yo i liked this alot sick multis nice structure sick flow good vocab good everything nice drop overall 9/10 for sure.......put it in audio id love it.....yo rtf on my link in my sig yo.............1

uppin..............!

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wicked flow....

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Wow...

I know I say this everytime you guys drop, but I mean it everytime. THIS IS THE BEST SHIT I'VE SEEN SO FAR FROM EACH OF YOU! Emotion was coming out the ass...Vocab was amazing, imagery was dope as shit, and did I mention the emotion??

Drakel:

target the vain; a blade full of ink and the power a candle wields
my mind is at war, and the page is the battlefield

Im loving that there man. Only word for it is amazing. Seriously.

OSB:

Potions with vapors, floating up, misting, beleive,
An ocean of haters, and were just the little fish in the sea...

Amazing dude. What a way to finish it. OM of August without a doubt.

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seriously, this is the best OM on the front page.

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damn nice piece, drakel you kinda lost me with all the ion's and the vocab way to much really loses the proper word, ya know try n use witty words that are small n play around more wit em, im trying to use metas more often in my lines you should try it, dont try to be so poetic with vocab its good but it loses the flow way to much, stucture was good and flow was good. OMB that was good as well nice words nice rhyme scheme really good half of you, nice emotion good imagery from both, very good shot.

rtf in my new om Lost memories

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^ i dont mind getting constructive feed....but yours would apply if i was writing this for 12 year olds.

witty words that are small and play around with them? wtf?....where did you exaclty get lost....cause all that flowed, seriously, your whole feed made no sense man.

bump.

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target the vain; a blade full of ink and the power a candle wields
my mind is at war, and the page is the battlefield

That was good, as was the closer. Both of you did your thing, and may your shlongs stay sharp. Not much I can say that the others haven't said. nice flow and imagery, multis and perhaps even a random loaf of bread. This was a good collab, as usual.

why thank you..

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Why, thank you for the shrimp casserole. My wife did very much enjoy it...SUCCULENT!

..........wow shit evrythnig was on point here sick multis great flow good structure evrything drakel u neva cease to amaze me!DAMN hot shit this is a great om ima nominate it for hall of fame

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OYD MAFIA

this was prettygood it was a lot of imagery in this joint and both of the flows were on point so overall i give it a 9.5/10 it was real thorough wit plenty of metas in there. Maybe a lil advanced for some peeps around here and thats why they aint understand alot of it. but overall it was a strong drop yall came wit that fiya.1....

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