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Old 08-25-05, 03:58 PM   #16
La Cosa Nostra
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Alias = no idea..

Heres part of my new track so judge me on this or w/e..

Ay look,
Give me the mic, take a step back.
I aint the best cat in rap,
Untill my sledge hammer snapped.
The ex-best rappers back.
I leave lethal operatives jacked with optimal performance.
Intact with strategic tactics torching a mass of fans swarming.
Around a fagget candy rapper pouring, his knowledge on the game.
Its all the same, because his tortise brain, is slow as his flow of oxygen.
Into his tortured vein, facing rigor mortis mayne.
My lyrics saw the game, came to fournicate with swords & chains.
Searching for a horde of dames, to reclaim the force of fame.
Dopium is sure to tame the game, spike you like a cactus.
Break you with the blades of a chain saw & bore your frame backless.
As I attack this, track with tactics & fracture wack kids.
They catch scratched track lists, from this rapping flag ship.
I'm sick of everybody talking like, damus aint the shit.
You cats jus wank a bit, like genocidal athiests.
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Old 08-25-05, 04:00 PM   #17
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9/10...good....
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Old 08-25-05, 04:00 PM   #18
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Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Alias = no idea..

Heres part of my new track so judge me on this or w/e..

Ay look,
Give me the mic, take a step back.
I aint the best cat in rap,
Untill my sledge hammer snapped.
The ex-best rappers back.
I leave lethal operatives jacked with optimal performance.
Intact with strategic tactics torching a mass of fans swarming.
Around a fagget candy rapper pouring, his knowledge on the game.
Its all the same, because his tortise brain, is slow as his flow of oxygen.
Into his tortured vein, facing rigor mortis mayne.
My lyrics saw the game, came to fournicate with swords & chains.
Searching for a horde of dames, to reclaim the force of fame.
Dopium is sure to tame the game, spike you like a cactus.
Break you with the blades of a chain saw & bore your frame backless.
As I attack this, track with tactics & fracture wack kids.
They catch scratched track lists, from this rapping flag ship.
I'm sick of everybody talking like, damus aint the shit.
You cats jus wank a bit, like genocidal athiests.


9.987365/10

Pobodys nerfect..
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Old 08-25-05, 04:00 PM   #19
.Barz Of Steel.
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Red Bull=8/10..........
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Old 08-25-05, 04:02 PM   #20
atti?
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8/10, And Dont Rate Based On Text Battles.

I'm Topical
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Old 08-25-05, 04:02 PM   #21
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8.5/10....no one wants to rate me
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Old 08-25-05, 04:02 PM   #22
Sean Gunner
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Don't know.

Topical please.
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Old 08-25-05, 04:03 PM   #23
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8.5/10

Word to The Rev..
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Old 08-25-05, 04:03 PM   #24
J. Luth
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9..............
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Old 08-25-05, 04:05 PM   #25
.Barz Of Steel.
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9 for the spulster
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Old 08-25-05, 04:05 PM   #26
atti?
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Hmmmmm, 7/10 For Spul.
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Old 08-25-05, 04:10 PM   #27
Sean Gunner
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8.5/10
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
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Old 08-25-05, 04:11 PM   #28
B To The D
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9.4/10.............
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Old 08-25-05, 04:11 PM   #29
J. Luth
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8/...............
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Old 08-25-05, 04:12 PM   #30
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9/10...based on his record
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