-check in-

g'luck...

yea check....

ur goin to need it....lol......and drop on time too....

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We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams

blah...bored so i key'd mine up now

Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death

EXPLANATIONS.....
Ok right like im right and at the same time talking bout directions "left"
and Cezar, J(u)lius that i killed him with knives....julius cesar died from being knifed....and seeing death is his OM in his sig....kinda of a good explanation....lol....

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i dont see why you had to explain it...pretty simple

V/Cezar.............. for having the better bar...

Ps. You dont need to explain 2 lines with 4 lines.

We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams
^^man saying his jams are deaf ain't really a punch, also jams doesn't rhyme well with stand

Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death
^^this is a much better concept, poorly executed, don't just throw wordplay in like the left right stuff for the hell of it, make it work, make it funny/witty, make it have a point

v/Sin'cere

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

v/ sincere

slightly better, even though the explanation almost killed it
cezar def jam lines arent effective in PL battles

V/ - Cezar

both bars were pretty much as weak as each other.....

but then Sin`Cere explained his, so it made it wacker

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v/ sin`cere...dat def jam shit was super wack lol

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^^he's scared.lol

Pretty close...but honestly...I gotta give it to cezar
His one seemed to hit more as a punch.
Sin 'cere was too technical......try to avoid explainin ya shit too..

V/Cezar

^^^Ooh shit....I forgot i was still logged on that account..

it's me...just to let you know...

hotshh! n marvjay are'nt in the league?...so there vote cant count