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Old 10-25-05, 09:47 PM   #1
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Round 3: Vaskez & DaTrusHurts vs Mimesis & 9th Degree

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Welcome to the Semi-finals. You guys all made it this far and are starting to dream of listening to your free mixtapes. Time to step it up and make sure you actually can listen to you mixtapes instead of in your dreams. Both matches this week are good ones. So show, drop fire, and goodluck.

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Old 10-25-05, 10:42 PM   #2
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40 lines a team. 20 each.
 
Old 10-26-05, 01:31 AM   #3
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Check. 20 each.
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ninth your a fucking idiot and im purposly spelling your name wrong...


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Old 10-26-05, 04:34 AM   #4
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Checking in

20's cool, but you guys cool with moving the due date back to Saturday night cuz this was posted late?
 
Old 10-26-05, 11:05 AM   #5
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yeah, whatever, check
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-26-05, 02:44 PM   #6
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oh and make sure the deadline's clear, I want no bitching in here about rules or whatever, let's make this fair, dope and clear, right?

I'm fine with saturday night if you guys are
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-26-05, 02:47 PM   #7
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Alright, whatever, Saturday night it is.
 
Old 10-29-05, 08:10 PM   #8
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Aight, here's my 20, DTH will post later


Man, there's so many peeps on Mim's dick, the unfairness is felt
So's no wonder, when they hit up his battles...
.................................................A LL the hits are below the belt
Dunno why tho, dude's worse than most, I always said he's wack
N carrying a rucksack is the only time he's ahead of the 'pack
When he attacks, I'ma react calmly in this cold place
I ain't batting an eyelid, I'm damn well batting his whole face
I'ma let ya soul waste, maybe ya felt good 'fore this started
But after I rip ya organs out...
....................................it'll be hard not to be disheartened
Heard Mim's audios? Wackness to me, but some might care for it
They listen intently with heart and mind...
...............................................cos their ears can't bear the shit
I can almost say ya raps are out of this world, n ya skilled
Cos if ya voice was pitched any higher...
..............................it'd escape earth's gravitational field
In the race for KO's, these 2 d/r each other, I seen the signs
How's Mim top 5 on RV, when he's always cuming in 9th?!
Damn both y'all bars suck, poor flow, s'hard to see the rhymes
N there's no hidden meanings...
.............but peeps STILL read better shit BETWEEN the lines
Plus, seen Mim's pic? Get ya weight up 'fore ya start shit
There's enough skin n bones on display...
.........................................to start an ivory/furs market
And that 9th kid's garbage, I'ma smack the punk hard
But at least he KNOWS his place...
........................................chillin in a fuckin junk yard


Mim:

9th:
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And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel
 
Old 10-29-05, 09:12 PM   #9
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For the record, trust isn't even my name

My name is Trus, pronounced like your making a truce with someone

I've been known to show backbone when brawlin' in the verbal way
And you're my necks victim...until I crack ya vertebrae
My fist'll form an alliance with your jaw, have you bruised worse
But you're the only one to blame, 'cuz apparantley DaTrusHurtz
Word, and when we call you a herb we ain't lyin'
Your wackness roseMary, Joseph, and even the 3 Wisemen
Plus you fight like a pussy, throw kicks at the guys n'
Have 'em catchin' enough foot-balls to win the damn Heisman
Mim didn't need your help in PLL, leave him alone
'Cuz even Tom Hanks knows bitches need A League of Their Own
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Vaskez? Shit, you don't want in this war zone, g
You just call a Trus...
...and ask him to come home 'cuz you're lonely
Since your girl dipped, and showed up at my house bare
We went nuts...
...or at least she liked to Planter mouth there
While givin' me road head, then grabbed a phone and dropped your number
To say she got a flat tire...'cuz I fuckin' popped the rubber
Face it, you're a loser, and I'm sorry my truth's ownin'
But you're such a long distance from winnin'...
...L.I. charged you for roamin'
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I schooled you fucks in text, all your shit's lookin' forced
And now I just got you tuition that you never took this course
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Old 10-30-05, 12:52 AM   #10
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Mim, this is just for you dawg...

Whether you like it or not, ya credibility is shot after I gun you
I mean how you dissing me after it took you ONE WEEK to mod me in 1-2
Ya know it's funny your a pussy and that ya hairy n' mean
Damn, I felt bad when I learned that your alergic to dairy, queen
Punk ya rep ain't clean, you get blamed for bad shaped votes
So I'm a put you in a chokehold that you can't escape, goat
I'm hearing the hecklers, they sayin' ya the worst of the sector
Ya know bitch, all ya simple shit is ONLY overheads on projectors
And your ugly as fuck too, no one's wants to hang with this gay
N' MAYBE you wouldn't be the last resort...
... if ya looks didn't scare the tide away

9th, you've always been a fucking clown...

I know nameplays are played to the worst, but yo this shit should hurt
How the fuck can someone with NINE degrees not write ONE good verse
N' ya raps sound like shit too, they like just one high scream
Ya career's had such a rocky road...
... I'm surprised you haven't given up to sell ice cream
Cuz dawg ya fat n' like goodies while I like a good book that's jumpin'
But when I think of a best seller, I just think of ANY you're locked up in
This hated bitch is never is humpin', you can make a female hurl, man
North Korean troops couldn't destroy so much of a Soeul as ya girls can
N' that ya ugly as fuck is the word, but yeah one thing is for sure
If looks could kill...
... you'd be wanted enough to make Karl Rove much more secure
 
Old 10-30-05, 01:02 AM   #11
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Yeah, since people always bitch every time.. we agreed on verses due Saturday.. and it's 10 pm here.. so I still have 2 hours. I'll type something up in a few minutes.
 
Old 10-30-05, 02:20 AM   #12
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and your two hours are up now.

which means by the rules, that you missed the time, lol.

YOU LOSE!!!! RARRGGHH!!!!
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Old 10-30-05, 02:43 AM   #13
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Shut up. My internet went down like, 10 minutes after I posted that, so I typed my verse in Microsoft Word instead. I'll copy and paste it now.
 
Old 10-30-05, 02:43 AM   #14
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You guys fucking suck. Acting like coming from RB you'd be the best here? Fuck out of here with that bullshit, you fucking fags.

Make sure all of you listen to Vaskez's wack ass audio too.
www.soundclick.com/vaskez

That shit is fucking GARBAGE.. and I now know that ya rhymes losing
At least you said it was for a laugh......cause that's all that I'm doing
With your fuckin accent, trashy punches.. cant believe this man raps
And with flow so off.. you got people on the site setting up sand bags
You're a fucking fag.. but my intro is confusing, you ain't stayin tough
I don't know why I asked people to play your lines..
..cause your lines are played enough
Just ridiculous... but your elevation is slow... why does this herb write?
Vas been texting for over 6 MONTHS and STILL can't rhyme words right
One syllable rhyming.. newb shit, but fuck that, you got nothing to lose
..I don't even need to add punches to show Hurt is still cumming in you

DaTrusHurtz, you're fucking garbage too.

But I thought we were keeping it clean?.. I knew nothing would stay fine
And I would follow DaTrus..
..if I wanted my verse to be generic punches and played lines
Prewritten bullshit.. trash.. but in the PLL, I did ask you for help one time
And I only asked you to mod in hopes that you wouldn't post a punchline
Savin the league.. and lookin at the sponsors, it's ill.. but whats worse is
You're only a Mix Champ..
..cause you put together the best lines from other people's verses
Some herb shit.. you were predicted to lose.. you wanna know why, kid?
Cause I've done better then you in EVERY fucking league that I've tried in
Should be hidin.. Instead of stepping to us.. you suck, dont you see queer
Your leaving such a Yung Impression..
..I thought I was battling the team that should be here

Fucking faggot ass motherfuckers.
 
Old 10-30-05, 03:46 AM   #15
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Word.

This was a dope ass battle.

Starting with Vaskez, I thought you had a real nice verse. The way you flipped some of your punches around to make them more affective, and the whole nice shit you did with your wordplay gave you a nice verse. You had a couple of played concepts that you tried to put a new flip on, some worked some didn't. Overall, your verse was real consistent from beginning to end with hard hitters.
DaTrus, for me you were the weak link in this battle, you were just too inconsistent for me. You had a verse that was sometimes real dope, but then you would follow with a weak bar. Especially, the nameplay on 9th Degree you used, you stated that it was played but that still didn't help the cause. The punch itself was a weaker nameplay on the whole "degree" part and added to it being played made it worse. You did have some nice wordplay, but I think your punches on Mimesis were better, than your one's on 9th Degree.

9th Degree, a real dope verse. You had killer wordplay in your punches, they were basically all good or real fucking hard hitting. You totally dominated with flips and shit on your punches making your entire verse an amusing read. You pretty much owned Vaskez' and DTH's verse with just your own. I could pretty much quote like every bar you dropped because every one had me rolling.
Mimesis, you also came good, a couple of bars I weren't feeling. Still though, your verse was better than DTH's and Vaskez'. I think that you were like a bar or two short of equalling 9th's dopeness in this battle. As usual you brought your pissed off style and it works for you, adds an edge to your verse and when you read it you can feel yourself getting riled up, that is on thing I always like about your verses. Wordplay and flips were nice, overall really consistent.

V/ - 9th Degree & Mimesis

For me, they had far better verses and were easily more consistent.
Sorry Vaskez, but for me DTH let you down in this battle.
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