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Old 11-19-05, 07:26 PM   #1
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Featured Track: Take My Shine <)-(> and will appear

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alright there it is leave feed
listen to the other rap game tracks and vote for your favorute to be featured
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Old 11-19-05, 07:43 PM   #2
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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...73&postcount=31
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...79&postcount=13
links all feed will be returned vote and ill vote on two battles or leave feed on two things
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Old 11-19-05, 11:51 PM   #3
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*edit*....lol..guess i shoulda told ya it was done huh willa?...lol...glad ya found it..holla!!!....

bump this back up top... Rap Game Track... Peepage!
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Old 11-20-05, 03:47 AM   #4
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ok first things first
wtf @ the intro, lmao..

but word, IG man not bad
its a shame ya quality not soo good, your verse could be real hot with it better...but hey, we all work with what we can get, so word.
lyrics is fine, flow is smooth
the delivery is nice, you fit the beat well.
overall pretty solid

willa girl pretty decent shit from you
first off i loved the delivery
i wasnt sure how well youd fend on this beat, but i actually liked you on it.
flow was smooth as well, few parts you fell off, but for the most part, smooth.

overall track was pretty decent though, good work.
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Old 11-20-05, 08:34 AM   #5
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Oh hell naw at that intro..... First guy i dont know you but you came on and molested that beat... good shit.. I liked that a lot.. Ok Next up Willa.... I liked the delivery and emotion... but you keep stopping and going on the beat.. you didnt go off but you slowed down the flow on the track. Overall this was dope.. I hope this is going on the Mixtape.
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Old 11-20-05, 01:55 PM   #6
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lmao.... yeah...still tryna figure some thangs out with quality but thanks for da feed....and just so everyone can stop calling me the symbol guy it's ill grammatix.... remember?... the text guy that doesn't post anymore?... was with The Definition and MAB (yeah... the undefeated crew)but yo.... i'm in da process of getting a new set up but i wanna see how far i can push da stuff i got that way i know exactly what i need to buy, feel me?... and oh yeah... go peep da battle between me and mad dog.... it needs some honest votes
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Old 11-20-05, 06:28 PM   #7
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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...55&postcount=11
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tizzle
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alrite thanx to the 3 that left feed i hit up these all feedback and votes will be returned
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Old 11-20-05, 09:46 PM   #8
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Listening...

Intro was from some book I read way back in grade 9...

<)-(>...Flow is coo...voice is dope...lyrics is tight...only bad thing wrong with it is the quality. Dope shit right here...

Will...Damn...you surprised the hell outta me here...quality was coo, not feelin the echo on it though...flow is pretty coo...a little choppy at times, but straight...lyrics coo...good shit, you elevatin quick...

Dope shit. Keep it up.
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Old 11-20-05, 10:10 PM   #9
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thanx le i hit up 4 of ur tracks
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Old 11-20-05, 11:15 PM   #10
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lmfao at the sample hahaha pretty dope, oh noplease not this beat, okay now im desapointed, love the first dude's verse, like the back verse, love the chorus, i like that indien noise you know, i hate willa's voice damn, quality is so-so, put more emotions, flow is cool, the song is cool, love the hook
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Old 11-20-05, 11:17 PM   #11
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thanx for returning the favor speats
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Old 11-21-05, 01:09 AM   #12
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aight i'm peepin it now

Intro:That intro was really really.weird....seriously....lol

Beat:The beat was aight...i think its mad overrated.....:7.5/10

Flow:<)-(> your flow was pretty good...u rode the beat real good:7/10,Willa peer you gotta lot better i'm feelin this right here good ish:7.5/10

Emotion:<)-(> ya emotion was good it rode the beat right...good ish fam.....just turn ya vocals up and ad a lil bit more reverb and it'll help:7/10,Willa ya emotion was mad hot in this keep this ish up:8/10

Overall:This song was pretty hot...somthing i might download....keep these tracks coming peeps:8/10

aight keep droppin um

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damn....this shit was illest ive heard from both of you....good job on that....even though yall on the other team...i gotta give you props on this....
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Lol, weird intro

the hook is decent
IG VERSE
Real solid, feelin the flow.
like the street tone to it

Will Appear
despite her quality, she had a nice ass verse
I used to think Will Appear was wack, but damn, since I've been listenin to her shit in the RG, she has impressed me. I was likin her voice too. AND her flow. she also sounded street, and not like a preppy white girl.
Will Appear > LV. Lol
anyway, overall, this is a pretty decent, solid track. The only down fall I can name at the moment is quality.
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Lol, weird intro

the hook is decent
IG VERSE
Real solid, feelin the flow.
like the street tone to it

Will Appear
despite her quality, she had a nice ass verse
I used to think Will Appear was wack, but damn, since I've been listenin to her shit in the RG, she has impressed me. I was likin her voice too. AND her flow. she also sounded street, and not like a preppy white girl.
Will Appear > LV. Lol
anyway, overall, this is a pretty decent, solid track. The only down fall I can name at the moment is quality.

good lookin out on that... when we first started this tourney a lot of folks didn't want willa on they squad... omma bring those posts up when this is over.... she is da sleeper of da tourney and kats don't see what i see... i was the only one willing to give her a shot... and she shining right now... i told kats... after she made that track for da tiebreaker by herself i knew she was da real deal... she's a team player and if i had to pick all over again i'd put her on my team... werdage...

good looking out on the feed and i hope we can win this thing.... so far it's been all positive feed this round... just wish i could hear everyone else's tracks...
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