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Old 12-03-05, 10:37 AM   #16
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I dont have a printer...




lol...dat sucks man


and I wud hate to have to transcribe 170 bars by hand


ugh


get ya self a printer nigga
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Old 12-03-05, 10:39 AM   #17
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Yeah sure... I'll just go buy one with all the money I dont have......
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Old 12-03-05, 11:36 AM   #18
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Yeah sure... I'll just go buy one with all the money I dont have......




man...shhhh

u ever hear the expression, "Act like you've been there"





lemme cloggin ur thread up
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Old 12-03-05, 01:10 PM   #19
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This is really sick u actually sound like Kool G. Rap to me best I've heard on this site so far
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Old 12-03-05, 01:10 PM   #20
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the version you sent me, at 3:00 min in, you can hear msn in the background....lmlo, but this is tight, i like the part when "welcome to the business" comes on....and this line

My mission to prove, peace as an attainable goal
Imagine what would happen if you gave it your all

and the jedi mind tricks beat, that part is sweet..."That peeps rewind & play this shit on repeat, infinatly"....word, good shit man, are you done the better version yet?
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Old 12-03-05, 01:12 PM   #21
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don't worry about quality this shit is dope and something that has replay value nonetheless
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Old 12-03-05, 02:04 PM   #22
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Listening...

Intro was nice and dark...

Lovin the way the beats change up and the way you just keep flowing...

Flow was nice...you changed it up with every beat...liked that.

I still think you sound sorda like Pac...

The thing that needed work the most was the delivery in some parts...it was on and off...some times it sounded really forced in a sense.

Overall, good track. Keep it up.
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Old 12-03-05, 04:39 PM   #23
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sick shit man...ur flow is PIMP..voice is SICK bro...u flow over to the other beats real nice too...DL'n this shit...
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Old 12-03-05, 04:50 PM   #24
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this is real nice...nuff said........ya ur right quality wasn't all that great but you def. got mad better
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Old 12-03-05, 07:14 PM   #25
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Word, mad props to everyone whos sayin they liked it..

And yeah drakel man, msn is fucken annoying.. If you notice theres even a signing on notice muffled in the background of this version at one point ----____----
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Old 12-03-05, 08:01 PM   #26
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I put it down to lazyness..
I still have a bit of writing to do on the rest of the cd.. This is just what I put together for a pre-release version cause most the rest of the tracks need hooks and shit...

Cats wanted to hear me drop something.. So here it is.
I actually dont think it turned out as bad as you were making out.. Near the end, if youve ever tried spitting for that long without stopping.. You get big spit balls hocked up blocking your throat, thats probably what you were talking about with the delivery problems...

Try it yourself, I bet you'll have the same problems.


ive actually spat for longer, freestyle but still done it, n yes i kno exactly what u mean, but still early on ur delivery started monotonous n it carried on that way pretty much
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ive actually spat for longer, freestyle but still done it, n yes i kno exactly what u mean, but still early on ur delivery started monotonous n it carried on that way pretty much

Partly due to the mic duke...
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Interesting intro wasnt that in a movie or something..............

Eminem beat..- flow was aight kinda changed you voice a little, u using too many sylables in one line...so flow is off and on but ....it was aight.....alot of multi's beat changes was nice..well done....aussie accent is there...but u doing ya thang....lyrics were complex i expected that from you..u came good on Thug Mansion beat....i was feeling that one out of all...and also Talib beat was cool..

is about time yo ass gets back on track wit tha audio..lol since ya been lazy to do shit..welcome bizack foo..
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blah i aint gon lie it was ight...but not dope enough for u ta diss my shit like u aint gon get shit spit back in ur face any harder...im gettin told that my vioce sounds gay from a kid thats tryin ta sound like pac and sucks at it...u read ur feedback that shit just proves it...i wouldnt of said shit if u wouldnt of said shit so dont even bother ta type back to this shit unless i deserved it
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blah i aint gon lie it was ight...but not dope enough for u ta diss my shit like u aint gon get shit spit back in ur face any harder...im gettin told that my vioce sounds gay from a kid thats tryin ta sound like pac and sucks at it...u read ur feedback that shit just proves it...i wouldnt of said shit if u wouldnt of said shit so dont even bother ta type back to this shit unless i deserved it

Bro.. You need to elevate BIG TIME.. You voice did sound whiney and gay.. I was being compleatly honest with you, I'm guessing your real young and thats why it sounded the way it did... Take it or leave it..

Otherwise stop bullshitting around in my thread little kid... Learn to handle the truth.
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