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Old 01-10-06, 11:03 AM   #31
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listening as I type...good mix on my intro....ok...yea u opened wit a much improved flow....last track I heard of u, ya flow was weak...its pretty good here.....u got sum nice jabs....alot multies, alil too multie focused u got sum filler bars jus to get those multies in there I noticed...addlibs is koo.....alot of these disses is personailized, I dun really keep up wit dudes to kno all u talking bout but u flowed it nicely an delivery was decent, coulda been more animated though....ok beat switch....ok heard phase one diss....eh...u jus makign statements at him...u needed to have a ill flip on how he's wack instead of jus sayin he's wack....however liked how u used ya voice on second beat..u animated it alot better...ok son how long is this is track?....ok impersonations is kinda funny but could been a tad more exaggerated to really make it a kneeslapper...damn long diss....lol@at the "fuck a" outro....pretty good shit all in all son...keep it up!


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Old 01-10-06, 11:51 AM   #32
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finally remembered to feed on this lol.. anyway, first beat is awfull imo.. u start off n ur flow seems all over the place, but u pull it togeather, good multies, delivery is a little sleepy but not bad, u got sum sick lines though, i love the second beat, flow is much better on this too as is delivery, again sum sick lines, the impression made me laugh, yeh man cool diss, more than enough to merk em
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Old 01-10-06, 03:43 PM   #33
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Listening...

Word at Trip's intro...

Beat is dope as hell...

Nice punches...good shit. Flow is on point...delivery is good.

I'm really likin that beat though...

Good track man, keep it up.
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Old 01-11-06, 04:12 AM   #34
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cheers peeps...uppin
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Old 01-11-06, 09:02 AM   #35
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nice intro
nice beat
flows nice
very clear for a uk artist(i cant make yall out usually)
nice lyricz.............
dope punches.....
pretty nice for a diss qualitys nice too

overall pretty dope track 9/10 nice diss fam
rtf on my track prepubecent werd stay up
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Old 01-11-06, 11:16 AM   #36
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cheers man...uppin
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Old 01-12-06, 07:02 AM   #37
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and again......
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Old 01-12-06, 07:09 PM   #38
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haha intro is tight. man i need one for my cd! hit me up trip!

beat is pretty heavy, reminds of a youngbuck beat

ur vocals sound like they are clipping (going over the 1 db mark) that needs sorting out
but good voice overs. u got good delievery for a UK emcee nice rhythm bruv got me bobbing my head.

you jus need to work on pronounciation i cud understand ya well cos im from UK as well but i can imagine others peeps cudnt understand every word.

but keep it up man

i'll hit u up soon for a collab
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Old 01-13-06, 04:00 AM   #39
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very much werd Kingz nice to see ya postin on RV again...hit me up soon ya got my msn...
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Old 01-13-06, 05:20 AM   #40
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Old 01-16-06, 09:32 AM   #41
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Old 01-19-06, 06:39 AM   #42
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Old 01-19-06, 07:06 AM   #43
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the best part was the impersonation
the rest was ehh
Im not offended enough to diss back
so I really dont care.
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Old 01-19-06, 08:27 AM   #44
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the best part was the impersonation


i myself was amazed at the resemblement too
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Old 01-20-06, 09:51 AM   #45
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Sup Mad Man whats good,...

I was feeling this liked the intro,... Both beats was nice,.. flow was good
delivery was alright,.. The lyrics and disses was great and made this
track.

Nice one fams

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