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Old 01-09-06, 02:45 AM   #1
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13. Nick Fletcher vs. 21. Flow Intelligent

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16 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
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Old 01-09-06, 04:10 AM   #2
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Old 01-09-06, 04:11 AM   #3
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Fuck you bitch. You're wack.
And still using that same shitty style from when I KO'ed you in 2004.


16 lines, check.
This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques.
Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere………
…or a sexually transmitted disease!!
Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!
Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield,
Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield.
Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact..
..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act
I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch..
..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch
Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while..
Last time flow had a decent connection…
…was on his AOL 3-month trial.
Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny..
..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money.
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Old 01-09-06, 12:16 PM   #4
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Old 01-09-06, 01:27 PM   #5
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Check it.....


Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim
Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs
Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew
Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food
Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name
Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game
Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats
But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks
Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers*
Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch
Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid
Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money
Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy


*= Herbicide (Herb Aside)
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Old 01-09-06, 02:15 PM   #6
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This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques.
Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!

vs.

Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch
Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid

Both had 2 punchline quotables. So, it comes down to who's verse was better on average. So, exlcuding the quotables this is what I thought about the verses. King Solo had a lot of forced shit, like:

Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere………
…or a sexually transmitted disease!!


Those two "ors" in a row killed this. I know gonnorea is a sexually transmitted disease, but this shit just did not work. It was forced and didn't even come close to connecting. Then, Solo came with that Tyson line which went played out a few months after the fight.. meaning it is extremely played. And the consistency line wasn't even a punch. "You're consistency comes from you leaving after tournaments are over!" doesn't do anything for this battle. Then, the nameplays on Flow Intelligent are all played out right now, leaving that Intel line worthless. The type of shit where it's "You're only connection is through the internet" are played as hell too. Shit's just old. The last line could have been worded better, it was still decent, but didn't connect very hard at all.

Now, on to Flow Intelligent's verse.. After his first quotable that line was self glorification and sucked weiner. The wordplay was played and the line didn't do anything for your verse. The line about mexican food was decent, but the "like" lowered the effectiveness. The raisin wordplay is played out, even here. L.I. was using that in the last KORV. The broke railroads line was decent enough, it just didn't seem like it was worded to its maximum effectiveness. The herbicide line was another decent one. Not dope, but still average. You should have skipped the explanation, but it was still alright. After your second quotable you posted up a random statement that I don't care about. Solo did use a money line, but everybody already knows it's played, so that statement was pointless.

However, I do believe that Flow Intelligent pulled off an upset here. King Solo had too many forced and played lines, as well as random statements. Flow Intellligent attempted wordplay in almost every line, but some of it was worded wrong or played.

So, in the end, my vote goes to Flow Intelligent.
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Old 01-09-06, 04:29 PM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by King Solo
Fuck you bitch. You're wack.
And still using that same shitty style from when I KO'ed you in 2004.


16 lines, check.
This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques.
OK

Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere………
…or a sexually transmitted disease!!
Decent

Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!
Good

Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield,
Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield.
No

Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact..
..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act
Could of used this personal better

I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch..
..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch
No

Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while..
Last time flow had a decent connection…
…was on his AOL 3-month trial.
That's a pretty played concept

Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny..
..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money.
Weak


Started off decent & I thought better was yet to come however it kind of drifted downwards rather than up.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Flow Intelligent
Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
OK for an opening but not all that

This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim
Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs
weak

Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew
Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food
weak

Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name
Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game
OK but fuck quoting

Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats
But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks
OK

Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers*
Decent

Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch
Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid
OK

Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money
Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy
Weak


Sme nice some weak. Some stuff u used was like filler material & not a great punch such as the 'touching flow' line. However you had 5/8 bars that I liked whereas King had 4/8.

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Old 01-09-06, 06:49 PM   #8
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Old 01-09-06, 11:50 PM   #9
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Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers*

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Old 01-11-06, 06:14 PM   #10
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i vote tie lol
good battle you two
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Old 01-11-06, 08:34 PM   #11
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This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques.
^^meh ok
Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere………
…or a sexually transmitted disease!!
^^eh
Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!
^^guerilla and monkey associative worplay...so? kinda weak
Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield,
Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield.
^^meh comparison, not harsh
Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact..
..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act
^^heh, better
I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch..
..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch
^^ok but coulda been worded better
Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while..
Last time flow had a decent connection…
…was on his AOL 3-month trial.
^^heh, not bad flip
Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny..
..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money.
^^meh

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Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
^^bland, but aight
This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim
Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs
^^ouch, it pains me to read such lame comparisons, lol sorry dude
Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew
Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food
^^agh! not another comparison, dude they're pointless unless they're funny! And it's not really worded into a diss

Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name
Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game
^^good concept, weak wording
Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats
But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks
^^heh, ok
Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers*
^^good (but lol@ explaining it, any decent textcee gets it anyway)
Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch
Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid
^^ok concept, bad wording
Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money
Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy
^^not really a diss


I think FI had the best bar of the battle, but Nick came more consistent. If FI had worded some of his good concepts better, he'd get my vote, but overall I think Nick just barely took it with consistency

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Old 01-11-06, 08:52 PM   #12
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This broke ass kid ain’t shit, I got heads noddin’ on the sets..
..as I come with a bouncin’ flow, he just comes with bouncin’ cheques.
ehh iight
Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere………
…or a sexually transmitted disease!!
i agree with mim on this.. could be nice.. but.. didnt hit to full effect...
Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!
wasnt feeling it
Look dude, ya got no defence, as I bring shots to ya shield,
Ya bit off more than ya could chew………like Tyson vs. Holyfield.
played
Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact..
..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act
cool bar
I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch..
..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch
iight personal.. could be alot better
Kid you’ve fell off, let’s be real…ya ain’t hit shit in a while..
Last time flow had a decent connection…
…was on his AOL 3-month trial.
played
Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny..
..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money.
wasnt feeling it

m fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
iight opener
This battle's tragic .... So now ya future looks cloudy and dim
Cuz you aint touching flow, Like swimmers without any limbs
ehh alrite
Blessin this dude, Nick aint shit, Plus i'm wrecking his crew
Cuz lately RV's got you all gassed up ... Like Mexican food
played
Fletcher is wack .... So i'll always stay disgracing his name
Because this fruit is used and dry .. Try 'Raisin' your game
played.. but made me laugh
Solo, Let's be honest ... I know you really admire my stats
But like broke railroads, You should just retire your tracks
liked this
Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers*
feeling this no need for explanation
Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch
Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid
decent
Plus i bet he uses a line about me not paying some money
Which has been said a million times so stop playing it dummy
alrite closer

overall: i thought this battle could have been 843092843 times better.. but it wasnt so i gotta vote on what i see.. and.. i had expected nick to take this.. but i think he kinda half-assed.. and flow took advantage.. both came played.. but Flow just came slightly better and edged nick in this battle....v/Flow Intelligent
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Old 01-13-06, 11:55 AM   #13
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Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!
Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny..
..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money.

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Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers

I got equal quotables, altho the herbacide bar by far topped all of Solo's shit, his verse in general was a little more consistent, iunno, to many crappy meta's and weak shit from FI, he only had these 2 good lines and the rest were ass, while King Solo had these 2 decent lines, some wack lines, and some more decent lines, I got KS taking this with consistency

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Kid’s confused about shit lately, so I’ll beat him with ease..
Man, he don’t even know if he’s gone or ‘ere………
…or a sexually transmitted disease!!
Ok, let’s get serious…ya ain’t ready to touch my class..
..cuz this is guerrilla warfare, and I’m smashin’ yo monkey ass!!
Really, I don’t gotta come hard…and yo, that’s a fact..
..cuz Flow’s consistency in this tourney is his disappearing act
I ain’t modest about shit, this battle’s gone go off without a hitch..
..as I fuck Intel……everyone how I’m gonna destroy this bitch
Flow ya done fool…seriously y’all, I ain’t being funny..
..I’ll have him outta KORV, without even askin’ for prize money.
gimme my money
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Im fucking up ya chances, This ya last round of fighting MC's
Cuz ya seeing L's straight up like angles at ninety degrees
Getting tossed regardless, Go ahead and drop ya hardest
Just watch as i throw this herbicide, Like cautious farmers*
Most of your raps are weak, The rest are mostly played bitch
Cuz if pussy was skill, It'd be no question why youre gay kid


1st time i read this i thought flow won, but i read it again and flow shit was good
but nicks was just as good or better honestly
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