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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

How about you follow the rules and drop 24 lines.

lmao @ editing our checkins

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

The links are just proof that the quotes are real, no need to click





http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=231268


http://www.myspace.com/spul


I won't stand in line to smack MCs, I'm quick to kill a few
But Spul must be a patient man, s'clear he loves being in a Q
Plus lmao @ ya myspace, I guess ya just tryina save lines
Stating both ya gender and sexual preference at the same time
Dumbass! Ain't many dumber, ya ain't got heart or a clue
When peeps say your streetwise...
...they mean even it^^ is smarter than you
Take a wackass who's barely wrecked any MC in a head-to-head test
Spul, I didn't needa know ya 2nd alias to know ya reck-less
I don't need an army to put an end to the "Spul's a vet" hype
I'ma beat Spul single-handed, till the battle resembles his sex life
So quit tryina harm me, let's discuss ya site rank calmly
Spul's first and foremost...
...decent lines are 4 of the worst ever on RV





Spul takin the prize money home? Nah he'll be gettin some knocks
Poor bum thought he'd done ^^that cos the cash's kept in a box
Sick of bein homeless? I'll help send ya onto a better place
My punches'll hit Spul harder than a shortage of shelter space
I see ya want a big house n shit, I dunno if it'll happen
But you've already achieved the second part with ya rappin
Plus ya want to play basketball, ya quotes show great intents
I understand you wanna court...that dude Q in the dating sense




Ya think it's fresh lines ya laying? Bullshit, man quit playing
Cos ya concepts're the only thing less original than that saying
But hey ya might see somethin resemblin a "Win" on my worst days
When I send ya whooped ass crying back to ya birthplace


quotes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ess#post2606100
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...52&postcount=24
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...706#post2626706
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...604#post2626604

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

^nice verse yo.. but word just know that nitrous oxide is laughing gas.

aiight let's go:




I'll make you dissapear in front of a crowd, leave your ass messed
I'd have to knock their teeth out, to have 'em screaming "Vas-kez!?!"*
It's like I'm spitting with a fury, the way I'll have you leanin', fool
To each his own...
............ so I'll drown Kez in his gene pool!
This ain't RV Survivor, but I'ma be snuffin' Kez out
He might not be thinkin' bout losing, but he gon be losing this bout
Behind every great man's, a great woman, 'member that rule?
So if your girl's a hoe...
..................then it's no suprise you're a fuckin' tool!
The joke is up, man, it's over, I'm spearin' this gimmick
Take a look at your avy, even he tired of hearing your lyrics
It's true, man, atlast... it's time to pack your bags
Who's winnin'? Vaskez?...
.............. hell nah, Vas, kez my ass!
You're knot what they want, so I'm bout to tie up loose ends
Cuz you're worse than barbie, we couldn't even buy you new friends
Vaskez? Now ain't that spanish? I ain't into exploration...
but...
You can't be runnin' this shit.....
............ you're too busy runnin' from immigration!
You're wasting your time online, kid, with text battles online
I ain't Jesus, but I'll knock you out, just to Savior time
This gon be far from a fight, just take a guess at who's winnin', dude
You can throw bows all you want...
................ but the arrows all pointin' at you!
D here there, all you do is laugh
Must be up on that nitrous oxide cuz it's plain to see you're gassed
You're tryin' to be rich in victory, but that ain't comin' bitch
Cuz..
Your win-dough of oppurtunity's closed...
..................like Flow was runnin' this!


*-where's kez?

yeah some nice shit from you too, let's get some votes people!

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

I won't stand in line to smack MCs, I'm quick to kill a few
But Spul must be a patient man, s'clear he loves being in a Q
generally gay lines are played, but this is a personal and with a decent delivery came off quite nice..
Plus lmao @ ya myspace, I guess ya just tryina save lines
Stating both ya gender and sexual preference at the same time
gay shit again, this one not so good cuz it ain't really a personal....its just something he said flipped to try and make him look gay..
Dumbass! Ain't many dumber, ya ain't got heart or a clue
When peeps say your streetwise...
...they mean even it^^ is smarter than you
again with the ^^ shit....decent concept, delivery was pretty good..
Take a wackass who's barely wrecked any MC in a head-to-head test
Spul, I didn't needa know ya 2nd alias to know ya reck-less
it's been done before, the reck-less shit on his other name is weak now..
I don't need an army to put an end to the "Spul's a vet" hype
I'ma beat Spul single-handed, till the battle resembles his sex life
lol, this was decent, simplistic but well delivered to be real funny..
So quit tryina harm me, let's discuss ya site rank calmly
Spul's first and foremost...
...decent lines are 4 of the worst ever on RV
decent flip, although the concept is more than played really..
Spul takin the prize money home? Nah he'll be gettin some knocks
Poor bum thought he'd done ^^that cos the cash's kept in a box
doesn't work...I see you've got the quote but when you add in the sarcasm it don't work, cuz yea....spul HAS a big house and a b.ball court in his back yard..
Sick of bein homeless? I'll help send ya onto a better place
My punches'll hit Spul harder than a shortage of shelter space
again, the concept for this shit loses affect because of the same reason as the bar above..
I see ya want a big house n shit, I dunno if it'll happen
But you've already achieved the second part with ya rappin
see previous 2 comments..
Plus ya want to play basketball, ya quotes show great intents
I understand you wanna court...that dude Q in the dating sense
this was ok, only cuz you flipped it to Tha Q shit you used earlier..
Ya think it's fresh lines ya laying? Bullshit, man quit playing
Cos ya concepts're the only thing less original than that saying
pretty weak, nothing special really..
But hey ya might see somethin resemblin a "Win" on my worst days
When I send ya whooped ass crying back to ya birthplace
ok closer, could've been better..

VS.

I'll make you dissapear in front of a crowd, leave your ass messed
I'd have to knock their teeth out, to have 'em screaming "Vas-kez!?!"*
ok, i kinda get this...but its a little off for me..
It's like I'm spitting with a fury, the way I'll have you leanin', fool
To each his own...
............ so I'll drown Kez in his gene pool!
again, this was pretty average shit..
This ain't RV Survivor, but I'ma be snuffin' Kez out
He might not be thinkin' bout losing, but he gon be losing this bout
average flip with the wording, shit was ok..
Behind every great man's, a great woman, 'member that rule?
So if your girl's a hoe...
..................then it's no suprise you're a fuckin' tool!
lol, flipped nicely....good concept and well executed, lmfao..
The joke is up, man, it's over, I'm spearin' this gimmick
Take a look at your avy, even he tired of hearing your lyrics
i haven't really seen a personal on vaskez' avy, this was ok enough..
It's true, man, atlast... it's time to pack your bags
Who's winnin'? Vaskez?...
.............. hell nah, Vas, kez my ass!
Lmfao!!! dope nameplay....fresh enough and funny as fuck..
You're knot what they want, so I'm bout to tie up loose ends
Cuz you're worse than barbie, we couldn't even buy you new friends
NO!! this was fucking gay..
Vaskez? Now ain't that spanish? I ain't into exploration...
but...
You can't be runnin' this shit.....
............ you're too busy runnin' from immigration!
OMFG!!! LMFAO!!! I LOVE IMMIGRATION LINES!!!
You're wasting your time online, kid, with text battles online
I ain't Jesus, but I'll knock you out, just to Savior time
concept was old, wordplay was meh..
This gon be far from a fight, just take a guess at who's winnin', dude
You can throw bows all you want...
................ but the arrows all pointin' at you!
this was ok, nothing special but not too weak..
D here there, all you do is laugh
Must be up on that nitrous oxide cuz it's plain to see you're gassed
weak really, you're falling off..
You're tryin' to be rich in victory, but that ain't comin' bitch
Cuz..
Your win-dough of oppurtunity's closed...
..................like Flow was runnin' this!
Lol, decent shit with the Flow crap....FUNNY..


FINAL VERDICT
Well to be honest this was a surprise. It was close as I imagined it would be, but Spul impressed me by coming decent again and not sticking to them cheeseball lines he likes so much. You had some nice concepts and some shit concepts, inconsistent really. However, you impressed me with some real fucking hilarious lines, like the "Vas kez my ass" nameplay and the immigration line.....they were fucking dope. To others they may not be, but I found them fucking hilarious and two of the best bars from this entire battle. You tried flipping a few concepts to get your punches, some of the times you pulled it off brilliantly, other times not so well and one or two that were completely fucking retarded. The barbie line for example, that shit was fucking gay as fuck andshould've been left out.
Vaskez, he came good as I expected him to. You flipped a lot of shit in your verse, I felt you came off stronger to begin with. The personals at the start were cool, the gay one I let you off because of how you delivered it, however the second bar lost points because it was just a way of manipulating something he said to make him look gay which is played. After that though you came with some hard hitting shit, I liked the streetwise line and the one about his sex-life with the single handed shit. The alias nameplay was weak, its been done many times before and very similar to the way you used it. The main downfall to your verse were some of the closing bars. I can see how you used the homeless shit from his post to make your punches, but that was a sarcastic statement he made and majority of RV know that Spul DOES HAVE a big ass house and a basketball court. So for me it made your lines lose a lot of their appeal and power, it may work for you and others.....but by my own personal preference I didn't like them. You closed with those last two bars that were pretty average and with better wording could've been so much better.

Overall, I think Vaskez started stronger but came average near the middle and ended with some weak shit and stuff that lost affect for the reasons I mentioned. Spul was average in places, but came with some real hot lines that had me laughing on the edge of my seat and I think his verse was a little more consistent and enjoyable to read. So, even though I predicted Vaskez to win...for me Spul won this battle with a funnier and more enjoyable verse.



V/ - It's SPuL!

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sum1 sed i could vote even tho im not in korv no mo, so if im really not allowed 2, then n/m this, anywho

v/spul

vaskez's shit wuz borin, shit had stupid punches, lol

You're tryin' to be rich in victory, but that ain't comin' bitch
Cuz..
Your win-dough of oppurtunity's closed...
..................like Flow was runnin' this!

spuls punches were alot better, i like hiz last line tha best.

callin spul homeless n poor n shit wuz wack cuz spul iz rich-ish i guess.

wuzznt really feelin either of tha openers.

no hate vaskez, but v/spul, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

you missed the point completely. The question said what's your sexuality and he answered male. I was saying he's a dumbass because sexuality means are you bi, straight or homo, it wasn't asking his gender and he answered his gender. Duh!



eh? King, how can I respect your vote if you don't even know what you're talking about? This is the 2nd time now. The punch is that he's shit, it has nothing to do with his being homeless, so you can't say "see previous 2 comments". I just used what he said to set that up.


yeah I don't mind being voted against, but I thought at least Solo would not make schoolboy bar-assessment errors like that!

Don't delete this I'm allowed to clarify bars, no swaying involved


Kool Col that was a dumbass vote, you need to explain but it doesn't matter now, so whatever

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Sexuality in some places can mean are you MALE or FEMALE.......it DOES NOT mean are you BI, GAY, or STRAIGHT everywhere in the world. So fuck that punch if it is directly tied to certain places in the world.

And as for the other punches, you are still using the concept of him being poor and homeless as a set up for a punch to say he is shit or whatever. It still don't work because the fake setups come from the quotes which you have misinterpreted. So therefore they still lose the complete affect you was going for.

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lmao do you really think sexuality means gender ANYWHERE in the world? lol!

As for the other thing, whatever, just thought I'd point that out

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

First off,

You claim that sexuality means are you Bisexual, Homosexual or Straight everywhere in the world.

So, I have to ask,

Have you been everywhere in the world ?

HELL FUCKING NO!!! SO HOW THE FUCK DO YOU KNOW NUTSACK!!

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