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01-30-06, 12:56 AM
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1. JTR vs. 4. Mimesis
IP: A0C8 44A9
Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time. 28 Lines. No Recycling. No Biting. No Feeding. Good Luck.. Come Dope. |
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01-30-06, 03:02 AM
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IP: 1A46 2126
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T R Another one bites the dust.
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It's JTR, lyrical art
The towers aren't still standing but the pyramids are... |
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01-30-06, 04:12 PM
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IP: 543A A18E
Checking in.
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02-03-06, 08:51 AM
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IP: 76F3 F9F6
Let's get down to business.
Keep coming with your played ass nameplays acting like you're such a fucking monster or some shit. Nameplays and old wordplay with a style that's not yours. Great combination you wack peice of shit. I have a little surprise for you, son.. Ill be the one to step first.. your check in shows me youll be left herb Cause I may bite the dust.. but I'll leave you digesting whole deserts Haven't heard of this dude.. easy rounds, now I'ma be murdering you Had byes to the Final Four.. ..so it's only fitting you get one from the tournament to Ha, I'm riled and pumped.. your fake, queer.. be sure to smile you punk While I shit on John's.. you just been biting Hensley's style for months Here's a follow up... with this beating you should start studying health You can't get anywhere.. executing a style worse then somebody else When you spit its the worst.. know that Im going to be kicking you first Put so many Fractures on your face.. you'll start forming it into a verse You queer.. . . . . . ..I've been doing this for two years, you ain't handling this.. The only time you leave vets bloody is takin care of hurt animals, bitch Here's the real talk.. I ghosted for Apostrophe.. but still keeping it cool Because you only exposed the shit to stop him from BEATING YOU TOO Sometimes I do go over the top.. making sure opponents'll turn and roll But you have to hack accounts just to compile a few decent personals Just freeing the facts.. A-Z is where I reside.. always beating the wack While A-Z is the list of letters that wuld rather not be seen in your raps Ya must not be steppin to fight.. just know that I'll be repping this right And Reign over you so much, we'll see Lil Cali turn into a vet on the site You stepped, why?... I changed from boy to man.. trying to wreck guys While boy to man is just another avid description of your fucking sex life JTR's Picture.. JTR's Abs.. . . ..What the fuck is that, you ugly peice of shit.. you aren't rocking dudes Because gravity holds us all down.. but it's actually close to droppin you That's PATHETIC, but I see that backround, know youll get smacked son Your such a corn hopper you had to go skydiving to get off your last one I'm murdering you.. hurting you.. just believe that you shouldn't rap, guy So damn close to death, when you landed.. parts of the fucking grass die And on to that second picture.. questions arised, for now, just hold the L Like, ..Why the fuck are you posting pictures of your body on site full of males But let me continue.. ya verses are shitty, and now I'm smelling somethin My verse Rex.. so Ill just add another crater that you call your bellybuton . . Fuck what you've got to say fool.. youre losing, and obviously lame dude Because in Theory I'd beat you.. but I can take you under this name too Faggot, I tag team bitches.. leaving them whining.. but it's still sad.. see ...Because you only whined like a bitch when I beat you in the Tag Team You know it's true... and with PLL... you did take the title with pride now Cause you champed it.. ..after all the good people stopped caring or signed out CONGRATULATIONS! And here's a follow up.. you shouldn't even try herb You couldn't even win the Champ Match without grabbing 9th's lines first I did see your thread in LL.. I did read those pms.. and it's really sad, kid ..You're trying to diss the SAME PERSON you were begging to collab with How do you expect to win? Ya lost to 9th and ain't gonna own me neither Though I would say you'd have a chance if you bit.. ..but you didn't win the last KORV either I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid Cause you called us the Philbins.. ..just to mimick what we do with your verses Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap That aint even it.. but Ill give you some free shots, as I like keeping it fair Cause I dont like to box.. but nobody can stop me from beatin this square Garbage.. I saw you squad up with that group, and it's worse then cheatin ..Only joined that french crew because nobody likes your verses in English Hensley, Fracture, Lama.. people you jack shit from, and it's nothing dude You aren't ^ overdose cats.. but that's what we're hoping you'll up and do JTR Battling Himself.. . . You didn't think I knew that shit?.. Man, just know I'ma be handin ya hell I did think you were Master Minded.. until you got caught battlin yourself That shit is weak as fuck.. now theres no chance youll be beating me kid Cause my punches are innaVader's.. while your just stuck eating my fists You seeing this shit? Headgames? That sounds homo and this whores gay Even some damn golfers are trying to get away from that fucking foreplay That's 3 out of four names banned.. sad shit, and so I'ma wreck your spit You pulled the cheating card.. when you still got a whole deck of the shit Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first Wackness is so Thoreau.. ..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work And you know it's the realness.. so just believe that this mine to take, kid Yu dont need to go off on tangents to show you got no sine of greatness It's like the Matrix.. when I step its like how Neo fights.. just beating guys While when you decide to step up.. we all find out you're just a neophyte Here's a follow up.. that movie and your ranking.. ready to just run heads Because I'm a machine.. so it's pretty dam obvious I'll leave this one dead I seen that girl you were talking about.. and now I know that I will be fine But HOW THE FUCK you need 6 dudes to tell you to bang a chick.. ..and then still deny HeyKalashkinov: oh yeah, fuck you. HeyKalashkinov: FAGGOT. YOU FUCKING FAGGOT. Jaw Show Awe: word. Let me rephrase this though... that shit is crazy.. but honestly dude, quit Because how am I supposed to call you gay... when you'd just admit to it You fucking fag.. you only picking up Washington's so just stand n' admire This may be your Training Day.. ..but nothing'll stop me from leaving this Man on Fire Believe it's true.. I will be beating you, just hurting guys like a rapping star An R ally.. is just going to get run the fuck over by my personalized Nascar It's real, fag.. and let me just say this shit again.. cause you will lose hoe People'll say "Vote - R.. IP" when I ask what should be on your tombstone Let me say something.. Nobody predicts you to win.. so hide your rhymes I mean, even ESPN is banking on voters wantin to read Outside The Lines ...You're getting DESTROYED.. can't pop shit until you talk to your father And I can't rock your boat.. cause that shits more like a condom in water It's finally over for you... a little advice.. try your best to learn to rap shit Red gave me this match... just so we could watch your Bull burn to ashes 88 lines. Both of the mods said I could go over the line limit if I posted my verse first and set the line limit. So, say goodbye to the tournament, bitch. Better wordplay, better punches, better personals = better verse. It's game over for you, son. |
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02-04-06, 04:30 AM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: 5F2C AA8F
Fucking wow @ this rigged tourney. You fucking faggot, PM'ing me to post early, OFCOURSE YOU WANNA POST EARLY, Apostrophe no-showed, wich means you already had half your verse for me done! Fuck you, fuck your explanations, you're a cheater. Acting like we'd forget you pulling bitchmoves in the Tag Team Tourney, now you're pulling bitchmoves in this tourney, bitch,move aside.
Damn this fag is ugly, almost stopped my fuckin heartbeat It looks like ya hair was skribbled onto ya head with a fuckin sharpie! Dawg please, you're wack, I just extract the facts And could be very cheeky, just by saying your face is exactly that Cheek bones swolen like mad, ya weak, it's true bitch I'd beat ya ass, but it looks like someone already beat me to it Jaw Show Awe: I just wanna ask you a question Jaw Show Awe: Does it not look like he has ears on the back of his neck? Suomran Exid: *holds in laughter & takes deep breaths* No, it dosn't You're left ruined like ya face, I dont give wacks respect And EVERYBODY talks about you behind ya back ...cuz you got ears on the back of your neck Dudes a bloody wreck, i'll make him bloodier, bring the pain here 'Course ya nose is already redder then Rudolphs, and ya still can't reindeer I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes Guy, i'm telling ya, you're scrawny, & that's truth bitch I'd say this shrimp has a pencil neck ...but that shit looks more like a tooth-pick I'm ruthless, these punches leave you delirous with a few scars Fuck ya ugly shirt, fuck ya ugly hair, fuck ya ugly... no seriously, you are Quote:
Fucking retard, you got me? nah, i'll still tear this bum apart Cuz you didn't surprise shit, dude, I knew you were a bitch from the start You act hard, but i'll still leave you to rot queer They say a good daedal go a long way, so i'm wondering how you got here STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk Ya crews soft, a bunch of easy to rip bitches, you suck homie I could dissmemeber ya crew ...just by saying fuck apo, fuck hopesfall, and fuck sobe You're out of luck, cheat, no one respects this whore Pulls bitchmoves like an ass, but I still rectum more Ya left in gore, the best? dude you're average, you got that? Calling you dope would be such a big Kid,man ...you'd swear nicole got fat Just rot fast, dude you're fucking wack, no skills n' I'll lay him on the floor like a turkish rug when I kilim You're still a wimp, i'll kick your ass, it's true bitch I get a surgeon rip hoes ...while you just have one operating on you after I do it You're through kid, and chances are long gone You could cook chinese food and still wouldn't have wonton Stop riding my long john, faggot, ya gang bangs shock Like the capitol of thailand, you just Bangkok I hang lots, and beat the shit outta faggots, I know you heard of me I'll woop ya so bad, in order to save face, you'll need constructive surgeory Taking the win like burglary, kicking his chest so this hoe may break Cuz killing a bitch is so Simp,son they'll re-open the OJ case I'll wreck her face, you're better to head for the fence and bolt Cuz i'll just steeler win, like Pittsburgh did against the colts You got some faults, what's true is you won't advance Your wins will come to a Holt, but you aint the St.Louis Rams Damn you're ugly as hell, man you know it's still true Pittsburgh is predicted to win the superbowl, but Bettis you'll lose The truth, you're future is looking quite shady bud I'll squish this chick like an insect when this lady-bugs I'm hating ya, just cuz you're like wack evolved Man, i'm bacon ya, with no pig fat involved Faggot, this'll be over fast, i'll stomp this vet You're Dunn so quick, Atlanta will take that as a compliment Get sent away, 88 lines, well that's Degrees fault I'm bent on kicking your ass, you're bent as the result For the championship, you're gone, and I bet I'm around still The way ya only Windu to cheating ...could get mace kicked off the Jedi council Ya, so your rid the mods dick this tourney, why boast fag? You Leia bitch on the bed and chewbacca little more then most fags Asking me on aim where you can go to box and shit, the fuck you so eager to get knocked out for? And dissing my girl, shit i'd diss yours, but you aint ever had to rip on anyways. And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me? You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me You're history, muh fucka, you know it's true fruit You stupid, gay, wack, i'll put my timbs in ya face & make ya ugly to boot Talking 'bout boxing, you'd step in the ring and die son You only take a loss, so go ahead and bite, ya still won't Tyson Ya, I got here by bye's son, this is still a wrap, it's ova Cuz if you wanted to take this Winfrey, you'd have to kidnap Oprah And you ever even spoken to a girl, not one relationship but losings a bitch, oh, my bad, that makes one you're aquinted with And you rep NY, but live in Phoenix, and jelous cuz ya abs small Man, this dude is a comp-poser, with no orchestra at all Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick You aint slick, boxing, basketball, stop trying to be me, I know it's sad... ...But dude, you aint Jack, and I say that knowing you wanna be me so bad And what's up with brining my girl into this, trying to diss her For that, if I don't fuck you up in this battle ...i'll just fuck up your sister What's with her? She's 18 telling me she's 15, I want more sir Aint nothing scary 'bout me macking, but I still horror And this dude whines I went past the deadline, just more fus You aint have to have a Russian name to know that you Borus My lines would kill yours, and you wanna be boasting at first Why the fuck do you think Apostrophe didn't bother posting the verse Ya, get screwed, actually get nailed back Cuz you blow hoe, and I aint talking 'bout a whales back I sell weed, but we know you won't buy, this tricks wack I'd sell you some strong herb, but even that would kick your ass And ya, I went 88, but still didn't match you or your lame lines Cuz to match you... ...I'd have to ghost, pre-write, and go over the line limit at the same time
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It's JTR, lyrical art
The towers aren't still standing but the pyramids are... Last edited by Red Bull : 02-04-06 at 10:59 AM. Reason: Mimesis Requested Feeding Be Removed |
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02-04-06, 10:15 AM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Nobody post unless it's a vote.
But honestly, vote up. |
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02-04-06, 02:50 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: AF88 6884
aiight I grade as follows if anyone cares lol
50%-good 60%-really good 70%-dopeness 80%-straight ill son 90%- damn son you should be signed!! 100%- OMFG the battling version of Tupac is alive!!!! but word let's go mimesis: Ill be the one to step first.. your check in shows me youll be left herb Cause I may bite the dust.. but I'll leave you digesting whole deserts shit's coo....... 6/10 Haven't heard of this dude.. easy rounds, now I'ma be murdering you Had byes to the Final Four.. ..so it's only fitting you get one from the tournament to coo........ 6/10 Ha, I'm riled and pumped.. your fake, queer.. be sure to smile you punk While I shit on John's.. you just been biting Hensley's style for months coo personal..... 6/10 Here's a follow up... with this beating you should start studying health You can't get anywhere.. executing a style worse then somebody else it's aiight....... 5/10 When you spit its the worst.. know that Im going to be kicking you first Put so many Fractures on your face.. you'll start forming it into a verse coo wordplay.......... 6/10 You queer.. . . . . . ..I've been doing this for two years, you ain't handling this.. The only time you leave vets bloody is takin care of hurt animals, bitch noo the vets line is so played son..... 3/10 Here's the real talk.. I ghosted for Apostrophe.. but still keeping it cool Because you only exposed the shit to stop him from BEATING YOU TOO ehh....... alright i guess 4/10 Sometimes I do go over the top.. making sure opponents'll turn and roll But you have to hack accounts just to compile a few decent personals personal, but still weak......... 4/10 Just freeing the facts.. A-Z is where I reside.. always beating the wack While A-Z is the list of letters that wuld rather not be seen in your raps lol good........ 7/10 Ya must not be steppin to fight.. just know that I'll be repping this right And Reign over you so much, we'll see Lil Cali turn into a vet on the site lol it's coo....... 6/10 You stepped, why?... I changed from boy to man.. trying to wreck guys While boy to man is just another avid description of your fucking sex life umm it's aiight........ 4/10 JTR's Picture.. JTR's Abs.. . . ..What the fuck is that, you ugly peice of shit.. you aren't rocking dudes Because gravity holds us all down.. but it's actually close to droppin you coo......... 6/10 That's PATHETIC, but I see that backround, know youll get smacked son Your such a corn hopper you had to go skydiving to get off your last one aiight........ 5/10 I'm murdering you.. hurting you.. just believe that you shouldn't rap, guy So damn close to death, when you landed.. parts of the fucking grass die coo......... 6/10 And on to that second picture.. questions arised, for now, just hold the L Like, ..Why the fuck are you posting pictures of your body on site full of males personal, aiight tho not too hard hitting..... 4/10 But let me continue.. ya verses are shitty, and now I'm smelling somethin My verse Rex.. so Ill just add another crater that you call your bellybuton coo......... 5/10 . . Fuck what you've got to say fool.. youre losing, and obviously lame dude Because in Theory I'd beat you.. but I can take you under this name too nice....... good personal 7/10 Faggot, I tag team bitches.. leaving them whining.. but it's still sad.. see ...Because you only whined like a bitch when I beat you in the Tag Team no..wtf? newby type punch soon. nigga please.  2/10 You know it's true... and with PLL... you did take the title with pride now Cause you champed it.. ..after all the good people stopped caring or signed out ehh..... c'mon yo....... 3/10 [/n] CONGRATULATIONS! And here's a follow up.. you shouldn't even try herb You couldn't even win the Champ Match without grabbing 9th's lines first ehh it's aiight....... 4/10 I did see your thread in LL.. I did read those pms.. and it's really sad, kid ..You're trying to diss the SAME PERSON you were begging to collab with c'mon.... you fallin' off =/ 3/10 How do you expect to win? Ya lost to 9th and ain't gonna own me neither Though I would say you'd have a chance if you bit.. ..but you didn't win the last KORV either it's aiight..... 4/10 I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape lmao that's jus ill....... 9/10 That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid Cause you called us the Philbins.. ..just to mimick what we do with your verses LOL..... nice.....8/10 Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap loool....... nice....... 8/10 That aint even it.. but Ill give you some free shots, as I like keeping it fair Cause I dont like to box.. but nobody can stop me from beatin this square lol... nice........ 6/10 Garbage.. I saw you squad up with that group, and it's worse then cheatin ..Only joined that french crew because nobody likes your verses in English ehhh..... it's aiight....... 4/10 Hensley, Fracture, Lama.. people you jack shit from, and it's nothing dude You aren't ^ overdose cats.. but that's what we're hoping you'll up and do lol nice....... 7/10 JTR Battling Himself.. . . You didn't think I knew that shit?.. Man, just know I'ma be handin ya hell I did think you were Master Minded.. until you got caught battlin yourself uh..... it's aiight..... 4/10 That shit is weak as fuck.. now theres no chance youll be beating me kid Cause my punches are innaVader's.. while your just stuck eating my fists lol nice wordplay....... 7/10 You seeing this shit? Headgames? That sounds homo and this whores gay Even some damn golfers are trying to get away from that fucking foreplay could have been so much better if worded nicr....5/10 That's 3 out of four names banned.. sad shit, and so I'ma wreck your spit You pulled the cheating card.. when you still got a whole deck of the shit cooo..... 5/10 Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first Wackness is so Thoreau.. ..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work lmao... many might not get this.. but illness... I hated that shit.. 8/10 And you know it's the realness.. so just believe that this mine to take, kid Yu dont need to go off on tangents to show you got no sine of greatness lol nice math wordplay... fuck math oh god. lol 6/10 It's like the Matrix.. when I step its like how Neo fights.. just beating guys While when you decide to step up.. we all find out you're just a neophyte lol..... coo..... 6/10 Here's a follow up.. that movie and your ranking.. ready to just run heads Because I'm a machine.. so it's pretty dam obvious I'll leave this one dead it's cooo.... 5/10 I seen that girl you were talking about.. and now I know that I will be fine But HOW THE FUCK you need 6 dudes to tell you to bang a chick.. ..and then still deny ehh personal atleast........4/10 HeyKalashkinov: oh yeah, fuck you. HeyKalashkinov: FAGGOT. YOU FUCKING FAGGOT. Jaw Show Awe: word. Let me rephrase this though... that shit is crazy.. but honestly dude, quit Because how am I supposed to call you gay... when you'd just admit to it eh... i see you getting it from convo, but I jus ain't feeling it to much...4/10 You fucking fag.. you only picking up Washington's so just stand n' admire This may be your Training Day.. ..but nothing'll stop me from leaving this Man on Fire lol good wordplay.... set up tied in too..... good 7/10 Believe it's true.. I will be beating you, just hurting guys like a rapping star An R ally.. is just going to get run the fuck over by my personalized Nascar lol coo....... 6/10 It's real, fag.. and let me just say this shit again.. cause you will lose hoe People'll say "Vote - R.. IP" when I ask what should be on your tombstone nice......... 6/10 Let me say something.. Nobody predicts you to win.. so hide your rhymes I mean, even ESPN is banking on voters wantin to read Outside The Lines coo........ 5/10 ...You're getting DESTROYED.. can't pop shit until you talk to your father And I can't rock your boat.. cause that shits more like a condom in water lol........ nice........ 6/10 It's finally over for you... a little advice.. try your best to learn to rap shit Red gave me this match... just so we could watch your Bull burn to ashes ok....... 5/10 Ok, overall..... verse was good..... had a lot of good lines, and then a lot of wack shit that was like "Wtf? leave that shit out. but overall some nice shit..... Overall: 232/440 (53%) JTR: Damn this fag is ugly, almost stopped my fuckin heartbeat It looks like ya hair was skribbled onto ya head with a fuckin sharpie! lol nice....... 6/10 Dawg please, you're wack, I just extract the facts And could be very cheeky, just by saying your face is exactly that coo....... 6/10 p Cheek bones swolen like mad, ya weak, it's true bitch I'd beat ya ass, but it looks like someone already beat me to it ehh.... not really hard hitting, and played kinda..... 3/10 Jaw Show Awe: I just wanna ask you a question Jaw Show Awe: Does it not look like he has ears on the back of his neck? Suomran Exid: *holds in laughter & takes deep breaths* No, it dosn't You're left ruined like ya face, I dont give wacks respect And EVERYBODY talks about you behind ya back ...cuz you got ears on the back of your neck lol coo.......... 6/10 Dudes a bloody wreck, i'll make him bloodier, bring the pain here 'Course ya nose is already redder then Rudolphs, and ya still can't reindeer it's cooo.......... 5/10 I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes lmao....... word......... 8/10 Guy, i'm telling ya, you're scrawny, & that's truth bitch I'd say this shrimp has a pencil neck ...but that shit looks more like a tooth-pick .... eh..... nah....... ain't feeling it... 4/10 I'm ruthless, these punches leave you delirous with a few scars Fuck ya ugly shirt, fuck ya ugly hair, fuck ya ugly... no seriously, you are lool.... good.......... 6/10 Quote: Originally Posted by Mimesis I have a little surprise for you, son.. Fucking retard, you got me? nah, i'll still tear this bum apart Cuz you didn't surprise shit, dude, I knew you were a bitch from the start [d] nah........... not hard hitting..... 4/10 You act hard, but i'll still leave you to rot queer They say a good daedal go a long way, so i'm wondering how you got here coo wordply........5/10 STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk lol..... dope..... 8/10 Ya crews soft, a bunch of easy to rip bitches, you suck homie I could dissmemeber ya crew ...just by saying fuck apo, fuck hopesfall, and fuck sobe it's aiight..........4/10 You're out of luck, cheat, no one respects this whore Pulls bitchmoves like an ass, but I still rectum more good wordplay...........6/10 Ya left in gore, the best? dude you're average, you got that? Calling you dope would be such a big Kid,man ...you'd swear nicole got fat lool... nice 7/10 Just rot fast, dude you're fucking wack, no skills n' I'll lay him on the floor like a turkish rug when I kilim it's coo......... 5/10 You're still a wimp, i'll kick your ass, it's true bitch I get a surgeon rip hoes ...while you just have one operating on you after I do it ok........... 5/10 You're through kid, and chances are long gone You could cook chinese food and still wouldn't have wonton nice........... 6/10 Stop riding my long john, faggot, ya gang bangs shock Like the capitol of thailand, you just Bangkok lol........ nice......... 6/10 I hang lots, and beat the shit outta faggots, I know you heard of me I'll woop ya so bad, in order to save face, you'll need constructive surgeory lol it's coo....... 5/10 Taking the win like burglary, kicking his chest so this hoe may break Cuz killing a bitch is so Simp,son they'll re-open the OJ case it's nice....... 6/10 I'll wreck her face, you're better to head for the fence and bolt Cuz i'll just steeler win, like Pittsburgh did against the colts aiight........ 5/10 You got some faults, what's true is you won't advance Your wins will come to a Holt, but you aint the St.Louis Rams decent........ 4/10 Damn you're ugly as hell, man you know it's still true Pittsburgh is predicted to win the superbowl, but Bettis you'll lose ok.......... 5/10 The truth, you're future is looking quite shady bud I'll squish this chick like an insect when this lady-bugs ok........... 5/10 I'm hating ya, just cuz you're like wack evolved Man, i'm bacon ya, with no pig fat involved ehh..... decent man......... 4/10 Faggot, this'll be over fast, i'll stomp this vet You're Dunn so quick, Atlanta will take that as a compliment wordplay's there, just not as hard hitting..... 4/10 Get sent away, 88 lines, well that's Degrees fault I'm bent on kicking your ass, you're bent as the result ehh, can see you had to rush shit..... decent.... 4/10 For the championship, you're gone, and I bet I'm around still The way ya only Windu to cheating ...could get mace kicked off the Jedi council pretty nice....... 6/10 Ya, so your rid the mods dick this tourney, why boast fag? You Leia bitch on the bed and chewbacca little more then most fags it's good......... 7/10 Asking me on aim where you can go to box and shit, the fuck you so eager to get knocked out for? And dissing my girl, shit i'd diss yours, but you aint ever had to rip on anyways. And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me? You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me loool... that was ill........ 8/10 You're history, muh fucka, you know it's true fruit You stupid, gay, wack, i'll put my timbs in ya face & make ya ugly to boot kinda played......... ok tho....... 5/10 Talking 'bout boxing, you'd step in the ring and die son You only take a loss, so go ahead and bite, ya still won't Tyson tyson lines played with the biting....... decent... 4/10 Ya, I got here by bye's son, this is still a wrap, it's ova Cuz if you wanted to take this Winfrey, you'd have to kidnap Oprah loool that was tight........ 7/10 And you ever even spoken to a girl, not one relationship but losings a bitch, oh, my bad, that makes one you're aquinted with lool haha... nice........7/10 And you rep NY, but live in Phoenix, and jelous cuz ya abs small Man, this dude is a comp-poser, with no orchestra at all it's coo....... 5/10 Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick dope..... 8/10 You aint slick, boxing, basketball, stop trying to be me, I know it's sad... ...But dude, you aint Jack, and I say that knowing you wanna be me so bad nah.......... it's decent....... 4/10 And what's up with brining my girl into this, trying to diss her For that, if I don't fuck you up in this battle ...i'll just fuck up your sister [n] wtf? no yo.... not really hard hitting....... 3/10 [/b] What's with her? She's 18 telling me she's 15, I want more sir Aint nothing scary 'bout me macking, but I still horror decent......... 4/10 And this dude whines I went past the deadline, just more fus You aint have to have a Russian name to know that you Borus it's coo........ 5/10 My lines would kill yours, and you wanna be boasting at first Why the fuck do you think Apostrophe didn't bother posting the verse decent.... could have been worded better........ 4/10 Ya, get screwed, actually get nailed back Cuz you blow hoe, and I aint talking 'bout a whales back it's coo........ 5/10 I sell weed, but we know you won't buy, this tricks wack I'd sell you some strong herb, but even that would kick your ass it's ok........ 5/10 And ya, I went 88, but still didn't match you or your lame lines Cuz to match you... ...I'd have to ghost, pre-write, and go over the line limit at the same time personal, could of been worded better.......... 5/10 Basically you came really nice man with what was stacked up against you. But you too had a lot of gay shit that should of been left out, BUT....... since you keystyled like 60+ lines of it..... but yea, you had some real dope ones too. but overall a very good effort by you here. Overall: 230/440 (52%) Quotables (8/10): Mimesis: I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid Cause you called us the Philbins.. ..just to mimick what we do with your verses Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first Wackness is so Thoreau.. ..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work JTR: I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me? You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick OVERALL: I am tight with both, but I still don't like how mimesis did that on last day, I mean wasn't really fair to JTR. But since 9th and Bull allowed it, can't knock mimesis off of that. But since that happened, REALLY gave JTR huge handicapped. and I think he did very good job at coming back from that. and battle was really close. But I think Mimesis jus had a punch or two better than JTR. Iunno, it's sad that this battle couldn't have stayed at the 28 lines, would have been much better, and maybe even other way. But being as how it is, mimesis edged JTR off by a lil bit.... good battle by both tho. this can still go either way v/Mimesis |
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OMFG...
you'd get like no votes at the length of this battle... barely finished reading half... Don't worry i'll vote later.
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02-04-06, 09:58 PM
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I like to do bar by bar shit, but yo, I'm not breaking down a total of 88 bars, lol. Mim what you did is pretty fuckin' dick. You want to write 88 lines, that's cool, tell him early, that's really unfair, but given it was okayed i won't penalize you for that. But besides that
Haven't heard of this dude.. easy rounds, now I'ma be murdering you Had byes to the Final Four.. ..so it's only fitting you get one from the tournament to Ha, I'm riled and pumped.. your fake, queer.. be sure to smile you punk While I shit on John's.. you just been biting Hensley's style for months I've been doing this for two years, you ain't handling this.. The only time you leave vets bloody is takin care of hurt animals, bitch Just freeing the facts.. A-Z is where I reside.. always beating the wack While A-Z is the list of letters that wuld rather not be seen in your raps Ya must not be steppin to fight.. just know that I'll be repping this right And Reign over you so much, we'll see Lil Cali turn into a vet on the site What the fuck is that, you ugly peice of shit.. you aren't rocking dudes Because gravity holds us all down.. but it's actually close to droppin you And on to that second picture.. questions arised, for now, just hold the L Like, ..Why the fuck are you posting pictures of your body on site full of males But let me continue.. ya verses are shitty, and now I'm smelling somethin My verse Rex.. so Ill just add another crater that you call your bellybuton Fuck what you've got to say fool.. youre losing, and obviously lame dude Because in Theory I'd beat you.. but I can take you under this name too You know it's true... and with PLL... you did take the title with pride now Cause you champed it.. ..after all the good people stopped caring or signed out CONGRATULATIONS! And here's a follow up.. you shouldn't even try herb You couldn't even win the Champ Match without grabbing 9th's lines first I did see your thread in LL.. I did read those pms.. and it's really sad, kid ..You're trying to diss the SAME PERSON you were begging to collab with I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid Cause you called us the Philbins.. ..just to mimick what we do with your verses You didn't think I knew that shit?.. Man, just know I'ma be handin ya hell I did think you were Master Minded.. until you got caught battlin yourself That's 3 out of four names banned.. sad shit, and so I'ma wreck your spit You pulled the cheating card.. when you still got a whole deck of the shit Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first Wackness is so Thoreau.. ..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work And you know it's the realness.. so just believe that this mine to take, kid Yu dont need to go off on tangents to show you got no sine of greatness You fucking fag.. you only picking up Washington's so just stand n' admire This may be your Training Day.. ..but nothing'll stop me from leaving this Man on Fire ...You're getting DESTROYED.. can't pop shit until you talk to your father And I can't rock your boat.. cause that shits more like a condom in water vs. Damn this fag is ugly, almost stopped my fuckin heartbeat It looks like ya hair was skribbled onto ya head with a fuckin sharpie! You're left ruined like ya face, I dont give wacks respect And EVERYBODY talks about you behind ya back ...cuz you got ears on the back of your neck Guy, i'm telling ya, you're scrawny, & that's truth bitch I'd say this shrimp has a pencil neck ...but that shit looks more like a tooth-pick You act hard, but i'll still leave you to rot queer They say a good daedal go a long way, so i'm wondering how you got here Ya left in gore, the best? dude you're average, you got that? Calling you dope would be such a big Kid,man ...you'd swear nicole got fat Damn you're ugly as hell, man you know it's still true Pittsburgh is predicted to win the superbowl, but Bettis you'll lose For the championship, you're gone, and I bet I'm around still The way ya only Windu to cheating ...could get mace kicked off the Jedi council And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me? You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me And you rep NY, but live in Phoenix, and jelous cuz ya abs small Man, this dude is a comp-poser, with no orchestra at all Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick And this dude whines I went past the deadline, just more fus You aint have to have a Russian name to know that you Borus I sell weed, but we know you won't buy, this tricks wack I'd sell you some strong herb, but even that would kick your ass 20 vs 12 This battle was sick. Definately worth the read though it took me long as hell to do this. JTR definately rushed this verse, he had a lot of lines that looked like he wouldn't have used except that he needed 88 lines of material. With a smaller verse this would have been closer, but Mim came dope as fuck. I guess that's obvious given i found like almost half his lines quotable. JTR you put up a good effort though, that sharpie line you had was prolly my favorite line of the battle cuz after looking at the pic, it was so true! hahaha. You also had some weak shit though like fucking his sister line? lol. Mim really fell off near the end, but it was a very consistent verse for the length of it. Props to both of you, but. Vote - Mim |
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OK... I read the whole thing...
I was almost competley done this the vote.... .....then I was like fuck it... Don't know why you wanted 88 fucking lines.... But overall... This battles was very good... Nice punchlines.. Hilarious personals.... Ok... wtf... I'm kind of pissed right now. My computer shut down two times while I was giving feedback to your battle.. but that was because it was raining... This wasn't the best i've seen from either of you though... Mim's was all stretchy but still flowed well... JTR's was rushed but still had some good punchlines and wordplay... Personally I liked Mim's personals better... JTR's was lame as fuck.... and kind of weak... But on the other hand... JTR had better punchlines... some made me ROFL... so overall to top this all up... Never do that AGIAN! took me at least about fucking 30 minutes to read all of it to understand the whole two verses... but to cap it all up... I think it was a tie... that my fucking opinion OK! Damn... Punches: JTR Peronals: Mim Flow: JTR Structure: Mim Wordplay: JTR Picture Dissing: Mim W/E... You get the point... It's a tie... fully.. But if I had to vote.. Don't hate... Bitch.. I'd pick JTR... I'm not saying anything else.. Mim was dope too... but it's my opinion.. don't hate or shit like that... SO overall good battle.. Nice punchline and personals.. That's all fuckers...
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so it's 2-1, or 2-0 I guess, wtv.
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yes, i did read it all...i actually enjoyed both verses and had a considerable amount of good laughs...i feel that mimesis made quite a large bitch move here, even larger than my own earlier in the tourney lol...with that being said, i personally felt that JTR's punches singlehandedly won this battle even though mimesis had quite a few good personals. also, i really liked JTR's wordplay and his setups seemed rushed but the punchlines made up for it
my favorite JTR lines were: Damn this fag is ugly, almost stopped my fuckin heartbeat It looks like ya hair was skribbled onto ya head with a fuckin sharpie! and And ya, I went 88, but still didn't match you or your lame lines Cuz to match you... ...I'd have to ghost, pre-write, and go over the line limit at the same time my favorite Mimesis line was: Just freeing the facts.. A-Z is where I reside.. always beating the wack While A-Z is the list of letters that wuld rather not be seen in your raps Overall....V/ JTR
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Here's the real talk.. I ghosted for Apostrophe.. but still keeping it cool
Because you only exposed the shit to stop him from BEATING YOU TOO Ya must not be steppin to fight.. just know that I'll be repping this right And Reign over you so much, we'll see Lil Cali turn into a vet on the site You stepped, why?... I changed from boy to man.. trying to wreck guys While boy to man is just another avid description of your fucking sex life I'm murdering you.. hurting you.. just believe that you shouldn't rap, guy So damn close to death, when you landed.. parts of the fucking grass die Fuck what you've got to say fool.. youre losing, and obviously lame dude Because in Theory I'd beat you.. but I can take you under this name too Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap Garbage.. I saw you squad up with that group, and it's worse then cheatin ..Only joined that french crew because nobody likes your verses in English That's 3 out of four names banned.. sad shit, and so I'ma wreck your spit You pulled the cheating card.. when you still got a whole deck of the shit You fucking fag.. you only picking up Washington's so just stand n' admire This may be your Training Day.. ..but nothing'll stop me from leaving this Man on Fire VERSUS Dawg please, you're wack, I just extract the facts And could be very cheeky, just by saying your face is exactly that You're left ruined like ya face, I dont give wacks respect And EVERYBODY talks about you behind ya back ...cuz you got ears on the back of your neck I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes I'm ruthless, these punches leave you delirous with a few scars Fuck ya ugly shirt, fuck ya ugly hair, fuck ya ugly... no seriously, you are STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk Ya crews soft, a bunch of easy to rip bitches, you suck homie I could dissmemeber ya crew ...just by saying fuck apo, fuck hopesfall, and fuck sobe You're still a wimp, i'll kick your ass, it's true bitch I get a surgeon rip hoes ...while you just have one operating on you after I do it I hang lots, and beat the shit outta faggots, I know you heard of me I'll woop ya so bad, in order to save face, you'll need constructive surgeory Faggot, this'll be over fast, i'll stomp this vet You're Dunn so quick, Atlanta will take that as a compliment Get sent away, 88 lines, well that's Degrees fault I'm bent on kicking your ass, you're bent as the result And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me? You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me You're history, muh fucka, you know it's true fruit You stupid, gay, wack, i'll put my timbs in ya face & make ya ugly to boot Talking 'bout boxing, you'd step in the ring and die son You only take a loss, so go ahead and bite, ya still won't Tyson Ya, I got here by bye's son, this is still a wrap, it's ova Cuz if you wanted to take this Winfrey, you'd have to kidnap Oprah You aint slick, boxing, basketball, stop trying to be me, I know it's sad... ...But dude, you aint Jack, and I say that knowing you wanna be me so bad My lines would kill yours, and you wanna be boasting at first Why the fuck do you think Apostrophe didn't bother posting the verse I sell weed, but we know you won't buy, this tricks wack I'd sell you some strong herb, but even that would kick your ass And ya, I went 88, but still didn't match you or your lame lines Cuz to match you... ...I'd have to ghost, pre-write, and go over the line limit at the same time That's 9 bars versus 19 bars. I think it's obvious who I think won... But to explain, Mime, I kinda felt like you were being too held back by trying to make your structure look good and those few words that could make it better didn't get included OR there was a bunch of bullshit and periods and spaces, you know what I mean? Plus, JTR seemed, really, really pissed so that element of it just had me into a lot more. Both had a few not bitten but played lines and some super corny shit that I guess we can expect nowadays. Good battle both, but... v - JTR
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Mimesis' VERSE
Ill be the one to step first.. your check in shows me youll be left herb Cause I may bite the dust.. but I'll leave you digesting whole deserts >not bad Haven't heard of this dude.. easy rounds, now I'ma be murdering you Had byes to the Final Four.. ..so it's only fitting you get one from the tournament to good line (1) Ha, I'm riled and pumped.. your fake, queer.. be sure to smile you punk While I shit on John's.. you just been biting Hensley's style for months >cool line Here's a follow up... with this beating you should start studying health You can't get anywhere.. executing a style worse then somebody else When you spit its the worst.. know that Im going to be kicking you first Put so many Fractures on your face.. you'll start forming it into a verse >nice line You queer.. . . . . . ..I've been doing this for two years, you ain't handling this.. The only time you leave vets bloody is takin care of hurt animals, bitch >wow, thats hurting....olllld stuff man Here's the real talk.. I ghosted for Apostrophe.. but still keeping it cool Because you only exposed the shit to stop him from BEATING YOU TOO >well yeah, apo wasn't even writing....which makes it automatic for JTR....i dont see the punch Sometimes I do go over the top.. making sure opponents'll turn and roll But you have to hack accounts just to compile a few decent personals >because apparantly one of the best text heads is writing for 2 accounts Just freeing the facts.. A-Z is where I reside.. always beating the wack While A-Z is the list of letters that wuld rather not be seen in your raps >haha, not bad (2) Ya must not be steppin to fight.. just know that I'll be repping this right And Reign over you so much, we'll see Lil Cali turn into a vet on the site > blah You stepped, why?... I changed from boy to man.. trying to wreck guys While boy to man is just another avid description of your fucking sex life >played shit right here man JTR's Picture.. JTR's Abs.. . . ..What the fuck is that, you ugly peice of shit.. you aren't rocking dudes Because gravity holds us all down.. but it's actually close to droppin you >nah, not feeling it That's PATHETIC, but I see that backround, know youll get smacked son Your such a corn hopper you had to go skydiving to get off your last one >ehh, worded poor I'm murdering you.. hurting you.. just believe that you shouldn't rap, guy So damn close to death, when you landed.. parts of the fucking grass die >haha, this was good (3) And on to that second picture.. questions arised, for now, just hold the L Like, ..Why the fuck are you posting pictures of your body on site full of males >didn't rhyme, and its a played fact But let me continue.. ya verses are shitty, and now I'm smelling somethin My verse Rex.. so Ill just add another crater that you call your bellybuton >uhh, didn't really connect, sorry man . . Fuck what you've got to say fool.. youre losing, and obviously lame dude Because in Theory I'd beat you.. but I can take you under this name too >nice personal (4) Faggot, I tag team bitches.. leaving them whining.. but it's still sad.. see ...Because you only whined like a bitch when I beat you in the Tag Team >cool You know it's true... and with PLL... you did take the title with pride now Cause you champed it.. ..after all the good people stopped caring or signed out >nice (5) CONGRATULATIONS! And here's a follow up.. you shouldn't even try herb You couldn't even win the Champ Match without grabbing 9th's lines first >haha, true, but obvious I did see your thread in LL.. I did read those pms.. and it's really sad, kid ..You're trying to diss the SAME PERSON you were begging to collab with >okay How do you expect to win? Ya lost to 9th and ain't gonna own me neither Though I would say you'd have a chance if you bit.. ..but you didn't win the last KORV either >he didn't bite last KORV...i unno, just didn't work I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape >tried too hard That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid Cause you called us the Philbins.. ..just to mimick what we do with your verses >eh, good idea...but how many people are named Phil...really... Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap >not bad That aint even it.. but Ill give you some free shots, as I like keeping it fair Cause I dont like to box.. but nobody can stop me from beatin this square >good shit Garbage.. I saw you squad up with that group, and it's worse then cheatin ..Only joined that french crew because nobody likes your verses in English >meh Hensley, Fracture, Lama.. people you jack shit from, and it's nothing dude You aren't ^ overdose cats.. but that's what we're hoping you'll up and do >nah, not effective JTR Battling Himself.. . . You didn't think I knew that shit?.. Man, just know I'ma be handin ya hell I did think you were Master Minded.. until you got caught battlin yourself >good perosnal (6) That shit is weak as fuck.. now theres no chance youll be beating me kid Cause my punches are innaVader's.. while your just stuck eating my fists >not that effective You seeing this shit? Headgames? That sounds homo and this whores gay Even some damn golfers are trying to get away from that fucking foreplay >nice line (7) That's 3 out of four names banned.. sad shit, and so I'ma wreck your spit You pulled the cheating card.. when you still got a whole deck of the shit >didn't work for me Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first Wackness is so Thoreau.. ..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work >meh, not that good And you know it's the realness.. so just believe that this mine to take, kid Yu dont need to go off on tangents to show you got no sine of greatness >nice wordplay, i liked it (8) It's like the Matrix.. when I step its like how Neo fights.. just beating guys While when you decide to step up.. we all find out you're just a neophyte >nah, pretty lame attempt Here's a follow up.. that movie and your ranking.. ready to just run heads Because I'm a machine.. so it's pretty dam obvious I'll leave this one dead >blah I seen that girl you were talking about.. and now I know that I will be fine But HOW THE FUCK you need 6 dudes to tell you to bang a chick.. ..and then still deny >ehhh, worded bad HeyKalashkinov: oh yeah, fuck you. HeyKalashkinov: FAGGOT. YOU FUCKING FAGGOT. Jaw Show Awe: word. Let me rephrase this though... that shit is crazy.. but honestly dude, quit Because how am I supposed to call you gay... when you'd just admit to it >not bad, nothing special You fucking fag.. you only picking up Washington's so just stand n' admire This may be your Training Day.. ..but nothing'll stop me from leaving this Man on Fire >set up didn't connect, sorry man Believe it's true.. I will be beating you, just hurting guys like a rapping star An R ally.. is just going to get run the fuck oehver by my personalized Nascar >ehh, didn't feel it It's real, fag.. and let me just say this shit again.. cause you will lose hoe People'll say "Vote - R.. IP" when I ask what should be on your tombstone >haha, cool (9) creative Let me say something.. Nobody predicts you to win.. so hide your rhymes I mean, even ESPN is banking on voters wantin to read Outside The Lines >uhmm, not really that cool' ...You're getting DESTROYED.. can't pop shit until you talk to your father And I can't rock your boat.. cause that shits more like a condom in water >not bad It's finally over for you... a little advice.. try your best to learn to rap shit Red gave me this match... just so we could watch your Bull burn to ashes >cool (10) JTR's VERSE Damn this fag is ugly, almost stopped my fuckin heartbeat It looks like ya hair was skribbled onto ya head with a fuckin sharpie! >nice (1) Dawg please, you're wack, I just extract the facts And could be very cheeky, just by saying your face is exactly that >cool Cheek bones swolen like mad, ya weak, it's true bitch I'd beat ya ass, but it looks like someone already beat me to it >i laughed (2) Jaw Show Awe: I just wanna ask you a question Jaw Show Awe: Does it not look like he has ears on the back of his neck? Suomran Exid: *holds in laughter & takes deep breaths* No, it dosn't You're left ruined like ya face, I dont give wacks respect And EVERYBODY talks about you behind ya back ...cuz you got ears on the back of your neck >haha, i laughed (3) Dudes a bloody wreck, i'll make him bloodier, bring the pain here 'Course ya nose is already redder then Rudolphs, and ya still can't reindeer >cool I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes >ehh Guy, i'm telling ya, you're scrawny, & that's truth bitch I'd say this shrimp has a pencil neck ...but that shit looks more like a tooth-pick >lol (4) I'm ruthless, these punches leave you delirous with a few scars Fuck ya ugly shirt, fuck ya ugly hair, fuck ya ugly... no seriously, you are >nah Quote: Originally Posted by Mimesis I have a little surprise for you, son.. Fucking retard, you got me? nah, i'll still tear this bum apart Cuz you didn't surprise shit, dude, I knew you were a bitch from the start >average You act hard, but i'll still leave you to rot queer They say a good daedal go a long way, so i'm wondering how you got here >nah STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk >okay Ya crews soft, a bunch of easy to rip bitches, you suck homie I could dissmemeber ya crew ...just by saying fuck apo, fuck hopesfall, and fuck sobe >haha, nice (5) You're out of luck, cheat, no one respects this whore Pulls bitchmoves like an ass, but I still rectum more >meh Ya left in gore, the best? dude you're average, you got that? Calling you dope would be such a big Kid,man ...you'd swear nicole got fat >haha, i laughed (6) Just rot fast, dude you're fucking wack, no skills n' I'll lay him on the floor like a turkish rug when I kilim >wasn't feeling it You're still a wimp, i'll kick your ass, it's true bitch I get a surgeon rip hoes ...while you just have one operating on you after I do it >not bad You're through kid, and chances are long gone You could cook chinese food and still wouldn't have wonton >uggh, nice idea Stop riding my long john, faggot, ya gang bangs shock Like the capitol of thailand, you just Bangkok >not bad I hang lots, and beat the shit outta faggots, I know you heard of me I'll woop ya so bad, in order to save face, you'll need constructive surgeory >not bad Taking the win like burglary, kicking his chest so this hoe may break Cuz killing a bitch is so Simp,son they'll re-open the OJ case >ehh, heard it before I'll wreck her face, you're better to head for the fence and bolt Cuz i'll just steeler win, like Pittsburgh did against the colts >haha, red bull knows...good shit (7) You got some faults, what's true is you won't advance Your wins will come to a Holt, but you aint the St.Louis Rams >nice Damn you're ugly as hell, man you know it's still true Pittsburgh is predicted to win the superbowl, but Bettis you'll lose >cool wordplay The truth, you're future is looking quite shady bud I'll squish this chick like an insect when this lady-bugs >not bad I'm hating ya, just cuz you're like wack evolved Man, i'm bacon ya, with no pig fat involved >cool Faggot, this'll be over fast, i'll stomp this vet You're Dunn so quick, Atlanta will take that as a compliment >hahhahaha, nice, the way i feel (8) Get sent away, 88 lines, well that's Degrees fault I'm bent on kicking your ass, you're bent as the result >nice For the championship, you're gone, and I bet I'm around still The way ya only Windu to cheating ...could get mace kicked off the Jedi council >creative as hell, nice (9) Ya, so your rid the mods dick this tourney, why boast fag? You Leia bitch on the bed and chewbacca little more then most fags >nice fuckig wordplay, goes well with line before (10) Asking me on aim where you can go to box and shit, the fuck you so eager to get knocked out for? And dissing my girl, shit i'd diss yours, but you aint ever had to rip on anyways. And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me? You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me >eh You're history, muh fucka, you know it's true fruit You stupid, gay, wack, i'll put my timbs in ya face & make ya ugly to boot >eh Talking 'bout boxing, you'd step in the ring and die son You only take a loss, so go ahead and bite, ya still won't Tyson >good wordplay Ya, I got here by bye's son, this is still a wrap, it's ova Cuz if you wanted to take this Winfrey, you'd have to kidnap Oprah >loved this line (11) And you ever even spoken to a girl, not one relationship but losings a bitch, oh, my bad, that makes one you're aquinted with >nice line (12) And you rep NY, but live in Phoenix, and jelous cuz ya abs small Man, this dude is a comp-poser, with no orchestra at all >seen it Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick >nice personal You aint slick, boxing, basketball, stop trying to be me, I know it's sad... ...But dude, you aint Jack, and I say that knowing you wanna be me so bad >okay And what's up with brining my girl into this, trying to diss her For that, if I don't fuck you up in this battle ...i'll just fuck up your sister >meh What's with her? She's 18 telling me she's 15, I want more sir Aint nothing scary 'bout me macking, but I still horror >ehh, just wordplay And this dude whines I went past the deadline, just more fus You aint have to have a Russian name to know that you Borus >lmfao (13) My lines would kill yours, and you wanna be boasting at first Why the fuck do you think Apostrophe didn't bother posting the verse >hehe Ya, get screwed, actually get nailed back Cuz you blow hoe, and I aint talking 'bout a whales back >hahahaha, lmfao I sell weed, but we know you won't buy, this tricks wack I'd sell you some strong herb, but even that would kick your ass >haha And ya, I went 88, but still didn't match you or your lame lines Cuz to match you... ...I'd have to ghost, pre-write, and go over the line limit at the same time >HAHAHAHA oh shit, nice (14) so overall, i vote JTR, just because he was more consistent with his lines...i thought mimesis was a drag, the first part of his verse was aight, but just was stating obious....JTR's was insightful and incorporated much more complexity with his dissing....he was creative and imaginative at the same time, using that to his advantage creating personals and punches....like the end of JTR's verse i laughed at the most......so this is a pretty indeph description....v/JTR. yeah
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