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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221203
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221083

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Ite listenin....Like triple's verse thas nice good flow, delivery and pressence...own's the beat like he usually does...so nice homie......Really feelin the hook has a nice ring too it n it's real catchy like a dope hook should be....Inter your verse was dope you owned the beat by far the best flow, delivery and pressnce you've ever produced so i really enjoyed....Hook again was dope....and verses again were real nice...Overall this track was dopeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee fo real this track was nice i really enjoyed it ...from dope verses too dope hook....def a contender for song of the month.....shit i downloaded it already lol.....i'd give it a 9.9/10...dope track.

Thanks alot fam...sigged

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the beat is pretty dope, the piano sounds gay.....if it woulda had a better piano it would be cool. but it's not a big deal is it?

triple: you come in with a nice pressence and you form your voice nicely into the beat so it doesn't sound fucked up. your flow is solid like always and I always loved your voice, and for your hook it was fuckin dope, almost the best hook I've ever heard you do. overall trip I thought you did very well man.

intermental:
hmm your pronounceation still needs work man, it sounds like you studder/mumble a lot of words still. put your voice out there more and use your tongue lol. thats your weakest point in my eyes man, work on it. your flow is pretty good and as was your delivery. lyrics were tight.

overall I liked this track a lot.

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Thanks fam uppidy........

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*listening*

Triple comin nice as always... hittin this beat ON POINT with his flow.
Verse is dope overall, no weaknesses at all that i can think of...

Chorus is also perfect, love the mix of voices...

Inter's voice starts out soundin kinda like laid back Wheezy style, gradually gets a little bit more upbeat... you flowed well on the beat but came up a little short on emotion in your verse...

overall dope ass track...

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Wow......I just left feedback, but my computer froze. The jist of it was that this was a pretty good track, even though I didn't like it much. Not my type of ish, but you can always tell what other people will like ™

Edit

I found the feedback,.....lol. I posted it in the wrong thread...lol. Here it is...

Trip comes inpretty good. You pretty much sound the same in all of your tracks man....I don't know if that's good or bad. Flow's nice though. You definitely got a nice style. Intermental......not bad. Quality needs a little work. Your vocals could be raised a little bit higher. Overall, I wasn't really feeling this track too much, but I can tell it was pretty good. Just not my type of track I guess......

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

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this shyt is hot fiya lol, the hook iz tite as hell yo, flow and delivery for both ppl, lyices are dope, message is dope, even tha beat iiz dope lmao, im definately about to download this song, damn lool listenin to it again, RTF yo

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221388

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this was fuking sikness.............................

trip........................


dopest flow..................

illy lyrics................................

amazing deleivery and emotion......................

hook was amazing also..................................

intermental.............................

best track from you homie....................

u killed errything boi...........................

im loving this new fav track....................

**will be bumpin on ipod for weeks

dopensss 10/10
amazing no flaws and ill fight anyone who argues that

Feed used 2/5/06 "beef part 1 featuring intermental"

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feelin all of this like a b cup... keep it up

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lol at b cup and thank yall people I apreciate this alot homies

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Thanks ma..I apreciate dat....

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Aigghhh

beats dope

Triple,you really moulded this verse,fellin your delivery,the differences in your voice really works,feeling your emotion,im relaly feeling this verse,the lryics are out of this world

Hook is dope,feeling the differences in the voices

Inter:

your first verse is koo,the lyrics mould it,your emotion could be upped in this verse,your breath control has elevated so much,first thing i noticed,i couldnt do this,it flows so smooth..really feeling your smooth/laid back delivery on this,its like this beat is made for you,the quality could be upped,but get a new mic

lol

Aight your 2nd verse(3rd):the emotion is noticabally imrpoved this verse,with your delivery again as smooth as a babys ass cheeks lol,the lyrics are good,your presence is off the hook in this track,i unno,you got that smooth delivery,reminds me of sum1,cant put my finger on it though.....

Overall:

Triple verse 1:8/10
Hook:10/10,dope
Inter first verse:8/10
Hook....
Inter second verse:9/10...wy better

Overall:35/40

Good shit!


Feed used 2/6/06 "This Is My Time"

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