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this piece had an amazing storyline and it was very well put-together with some excellent imagery, great job Sav

^ Lmao @ you being an alias of Savior.

Do kids not understand the IP thing?

lmao.........you had to vote on yourself to try to get a chance at being in the HOF

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Aight i dont care what anyone says...My vote is for Tears of Ink by T. Skillz...Hands down this was a great piece...Flow was on point,Imagery was GREAT...Structure was just slightly off but nothing major...Tha topic was nice and it was deep to me...Thats my vote and how it breaks down...Word...1

you read flow you dumbass^^ it's called flowing good when you read it

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Itz called reading it out loud and hearing how it flows while your saying it....word...1

What is the point of beefing in an awards thread?

Of course there is flow in writing, only a fuckin' moron would disagree. Flow is based on a syllable count, and how well the words go together in a piece when you read it.

Case closed.

Now shut the fuck up.

^^Thank you for making tha final say in it...And thank you even more for agreein with us...word...1

^ Are you fuckin' retarded?

Stupid example, but hopefully easy enough for you to understand.

Chief is a tool.
So that makes him totally worthless and uncool.

^ No flow.

That faggot Chief is a retarded, kid acts like a tool..
I mean he's totally worthless, and known as uncool..

^ Flow.


Writing can have flow, you're honestly a fuckin' moron if you don't think so. When you write out your songs before you spit them, do you write them with flow or do you write them without flow?

Actually don't even answer, because you're just going to make yourself look like more of an ass.

wow you're gay....you dont think when people write writtens, they try to incorporate a flow to go along with it....like, stfu, you're garbage at everything you do

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^ Lmao @ him having RV Legend in his sig too..

If he's a legend... I'm a God.

1. Yes you did, everybody can clearly see it in your sig.

2. You're the only one who considers yourself a RV legend.

3. Do you actually think you're good?

4. You make sigs now. Good job.

You don't seem to understand when you read, you say it in your head. Are you saying you somehow read something and don't think about it? Are you saying you read thoughts? No, you hear thoughts. Read this and tell me if you can hear yourself repeating it in your head.