sry but..........one more thing for leady..talkin shit on my disses...

so...for a compersion...of his QUOTED LINE....that he ben rockin fOREVER

"oh no hold up, im heavy with rhymes
no im not a vicar but im blessing the mic <---decent actualy..as should b for a quotable...
i sever ya mind with dope and sharp thinkin
if my flow was wine, the pope would start drinkin..but...<---garbage..irrelevent as the pope DOES drink wine ... and even if he did it..it's poorly worded and trivial...

me.......on a 20 min wrote ass BS diss to a BS emcee...[this track]

""i see you,yea u tryna b shinin to,stick these Adidas up yo ass,n stick some lines in you,u gota b crazy..stackin hundreds..i unno maybe..but my punches leave u laid out,like million dollar baby,retarted n legless,speak on wut u knowin,i'll leave ur face holy,like embrauderd clothing,bitch act like u know me,big tha one n only,tha 2k version,i put your heros in a box,like the 40 year old"

formats wierd..cuz if it's not in a notebook i jus write in sentences kinda...but ..for a 20 min script to your "quotable" ...yea...so stfu about basic punches

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you totally dont understand the pope line... but just way for the track im workin on as we speak, it lyrically shits on anything of urs

LOL..yea ok,i don't understand it..im sure

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

Do u base all ur jokes off cartoons?

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1. Leady would eat you up

2. Jay 287 or whatever, youre just hating because I said tha truth on your wack-no-good-fo-shit track which is abismal because youre considering it for a mixtape joint, so you can just hush ya gums

3. Back to tha Nazi, if you realise you only gettin love from ya crew members and from cats that suck Q's dick not yours, youre trash, you cant flow and if you wanna talk about real shit lemme tell you summin, theres no way in hell a 20 yr old Stormtrooper is ever gonna make it mainstream, so check dat fo ya ass

4. I aint got beef with Q no more we scrapped it but cho, imma get atchu..and you can do ure lil 20 min comebacks n shit but i know after i done ya diss u cudnt match that shit..

5. Talk garbage about me I have 10 times tha chance of makin it mainstream and dont hate on me because im mainstream, im a buisness man and i know appealing to tha masses is more important than talkin about tha hood and cho don u talk bout shit like dat cos i know fo damn sure ure nazi ass aint never been a hood...

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

Intermental is a thug?


LMAO


umm...why is this even an argument? Cho's a better rapper.PERIOD. I don't see what the question is.

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^^ no question....

kid jus wants to talk shit a week after he got ripped and make shit up.......idk if he feel cheated..drop again...not like it makes a difference to anyone but him...but if thats what it takes for him to sleep ez...hey..go for it

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

haha....wait...i did the track cuz i think you suck....i forgot that you put a comment on that song....matter of fact what song....uhh oh well...no im not that big on shit....and you put honest feed on my "wack-no-good-fo-shit track" well.....you "no-good-fo-shit" track sucked so much it made me make fun of you....and own you.....and mainstream.....uhh bitch you wouldnt get on the radio even if you were a trucker.....(incase you dont get that, cb radio...and your a bitch thats what it means....bitch)

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lmfao...damn i thought everyone knew he was intermental...wtf? lol

didnt like the intro..i dunno...just didnt like it...

uhh he is intermental...so that kinda erases that whole thing at the beginning...not good..

you gotta work on polishing that flow man...it has progressed since u got here...but u still gotta work some with it....its just not that great...keep working with that..

tone the stacks down...it takes away majorly...

u had a couple good punches overall...couple not so good....

overall and this is being completely HONEST.....i thought this diss...and intermental and unf's diss track were about on the same level...nobody really outshined anybody...somebodys gonna have to come with heat to win....cause im not seeing either one of u taking over the other...

thats HONESTY...no hate

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well...u know who may be next right?


Fire up the JET!



lol

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^^^...ehhh maby...idk man...we DO have other shit to do tho...this RV shits wasting time that we don't have anymore bro...

fuck these kids....

check the lyrical myrical forum man...

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

no doubt bro...you're right...I just entertained the idea for a quick second.


*goes to check the page now*

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uh what does jae stack.... used tampons...pussy bitch... the lisp is from suckin too many dicks ... you got ripped kid.... bottom line...dont fake the funk...your style is bunk...

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