http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224845
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224404

meh, 30 minutes worth of work, fuck the crackling towards the beginning, im at my boys n his cable is fucked up but thats the best take we got n i couldnt be bothered doing another one incase the crackling was even worse, n i got lazy on writing aswell so i freestyled after abit just to pass time n keep it goin lol

lyrics are on the page

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3683142

shoulda chose a diff beat and a ghost writer.....


this was More than Horrid.... trully a display of how talentless you are.


that 20 second accapella ending.... aint even rhyme!!! aint even make no sense... juss UK jibberish..... straight up trash to the enth degree!!!!!


i only peeped this cuz i wanted to see what you was workin wit in this beef between yall..... but dogg.....



dont do it to yourself mayne..... jusss...... stop it....



werd.

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once again proving you are on his nuts.

his diss was average, it had no punchlines and no real disses, mainly just name calling, an average flow and monotonous delivery with a trashy hook.... and you concidered it dope, and you was the only person that concidered it dope, go figure.

your in his crew so i expected nothing more from you.

lol @ the end didnt rhyme yes it did rhyme, maybe u need to go look up the word "rhyme" in a dictionary and find the meaning of it lol

LMAO...Thanks Tito...I was wonderin if this was even worth a listen. Now I know it isn't.


lol

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atleast i actually had REAL disses, and not just mutlies with the odd name calling, fact remains, tha q lyrically got owned, even with a freestyle with absolutely no thought put into it on the end.

aww ya fell off at that beat slow down "your from the land of the queen"eh you do get kinda jumbled with ya words and why is that shit so crackled ionno what cable has to do with it yea the beat choice is monotonous but AWWWWWWW MAN I LITTERALLY FELT EMBARRESSED FOR YOU that ending was the most complete trash ending ive ever heard as for your ending yes i do beleive it was a freestyle cuz it was fuckin horrible and the rest of it that u claiming was a freestyle is only because u know that shit is garbage and need a cover up please tell me where your played out punchlines were?

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the cables got a loose connection inside it i dunno, not my equipment, that shit at the end was actually freestyled, but arent you in tha q's other internet crew???

im starting to notice a trend here

ahhhh come on leady dont blame internet crews on ya discomfort on the mic ...best thing about ths track was the air in between ya lyrics .......

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lol nice accent =P haha..

the beat is cool... i like the beat, good for a diss beat.. multi's are nice but your diss lines werent too good.. ur mic's quality isnt bad.. but the static is ahhhhh!!!! lol..

overall.. jst try harder next time lol

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lol @ dis-comfort, im far from uncomfortable on the mic, i was abit un-easy of the crackling n how much it was gonna effect the verse plus i was reading the written lyrics as i was recording where as normally i memorise them.

yeh i know the diss lines arent the greatest, but basically, to better his, all i needed to do was actually have some lol it was that simple.

k some unbiased feed here........

punchlines were better than Q's....

that static shit pisses me off

lyrically it wasnt anything insane..but there were some decent punches...mainly through the start/middle of it....

you can kinda tell your freestyling at the end....but your a pretty good freestyler..


overall..i think neither one of u came hard as fuck...but if i had to pick a "winner"...it would be you....simply for the fact that you had better punches....other than that...nothin really stood out that could make someone immediately pick you or Q as the "winner"....meh just my 2 cents i guess...

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LOL

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i agree 100% i know this was nothing amasing, but it did its job, and funy part is, iobviously spent less time on my diss than q did on his, but yeah man i freestyle quite alot so i get my practice, but that was pretty half arsed really, i couldnt be bothered thinkin bout what i was sayin really lol