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Old 07-18-06, 06:44 PM   #1
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Exclamation "Hold ya Head" ft Q

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This some Real Shit for the Hip Hop Heads out there

This some deep shit...the Intro

Chorus and the Lyrix explain it all

Remember its only my 2nd Track ya

Notice the Elevation

im 1st
Q 2nd

*Nuff Said*

"Hold ya Head" ft Q
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Old 07-18-06, 06:48 PM   #2
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Old 07-18-06, 07:00 PM   #3
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yeah the intro is from a good movie.........

Beat is good......i like the sampled marley hook

first up flow is good lyrics is good

quality is trash gotta pick up a better mic man

lyrics flowed well wit beats good shit

Q your quality sounds like it fell offa lil

I was feelin luciano's pressene more and his multies

Your flow was better tho....so it was easier too listen too

this song is pretty straight..not too bad

keep it up
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Old 07-18-06, 07:14 PM   #4
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Thanx bro...........
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Old 07-18-06, 07:18 PM   #5
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yeah the intro is from a good movie.........

Beat is good......i like the sampled marley hook

first up flow is good lyrics is good

quality is trash gotta pick up a better mic man

lyrics flowed well wit beats good shit

Q your quality sounds like it fell offa lil

I was feelin luciano's pressene more and his multies

Your flow was better tho....so it was easier too listen too

this song is pretty straight..not too bad

keep it up




yea...I admit, I got lazy on this one...

but, Luciano held it down well...



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Old 07-18-06, 07:31 PM   #6
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This not the last u gonna hear from us

Fuxa's
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Old 07-18-06, 08:38 PM   #7
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hahha i like the American History X intro

the beat is ill..i heard it before...dope shit....bob marley that is i think?

luciano..comiin in..you got dope ass lyrics...ill sounding voice and flow i'm loving it....
only thing here is that the quality could be upped a tad bit..

Q you come in....nice lyrics as well...riding the beat good and everything...good shit

overall this was a nice little track yall did...good shit..
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Old 07-18-06, 09:10 PM   #8
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appreciate it bro

yea i gotta learn some more shit bout mixin
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Old 07-18-06, 09:39 PM   #9
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yeah the intro is from a good movie.........

Beat is good......i like the sampled marley hook

first up flow is good lyrics is good

quality is trash gotta pick up a better mic man

lyrics flowed well wit beats good shit

Q your quality sounds like it fell offa lil

I was feelin luciano's pressene more and his multies

Your flow was better tho....so it was easier too listen too

this song is pretty straight..not too bad

keep it up



ima a bit busy but i felt this way too nice my dudes Q stand tall my friend and Luciano my man keep em comin.
nice flow and creativity
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Old 07-19-06, 12:09 AM   #10
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Thanx Bro...Uppin ya
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Old 07-19-06, 12:14 AM   #11
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The beat is dope *thanks me* bob marley sample on the hook is nice
Luciano comiin in ya flow alot better then ya first track..im feelin it
ya quality better then ya first track i can understand everyword ya sayin
and nice job on the add libs homie..overall yo verse was nice and you elavatin
quickly fam..keep it up

Q comes in nice lyrics also..flow is nice delivery is nice as well riding the beat good and everything...good shit but yea like PT said it sounds like ya quality fell off alil but other than that nice verse homie

overall this was a nice track..keep um commin
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Old 07-19-06, 12:16 AM   #12
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Thanx Fam...im Elevateing on every track
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Old 07-19-06, 12:54 AM   #13
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This shit was hot on both sides of the track. lyrics was nice. Im guessing Luciano was on the 1st verse and Q on the second. Luciano had one line that he kinda rushed through and seemed like he tried to force it in but it was'nt that big a deal. His Intro was tight and on key and his verse was on point wit good multies and energy that brings the biggie beat to life. Sounds a lot different to his 1st audio...thank god...lol..jk.

I like Q's style cuz its slowed down so u can get into wat he is saying more and feel it. His voice is tight for trax too. didn't see any flaws in his verse at all. like Past tense said the quality is turned down a bit compared to the tracks on his Myspace shit. His Multies was still tight too.

Keep bring tight shit to the table both of you...this text shit is only for kicks and giggles...if niggaz can't do audio then they shouldn't be spitting at all. I give the song an over all score of 8.5/10

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Old 07-19-06, 12:58 AM   #14
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I told u fam ...that 1st track i did was trash

im elevateing ....

but appreciate the feed
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Old 07-19-06, 01:31 AM   #15
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The introduction is koo from american history X. word. sick movie. Anywayz. onto the track. The beat. hold ya head beat. Thats whats really good. anywayz onto the verses.

Luciano

Yeah the quality is fuckin booty. but i can understand your vocals clearly. The lyrics on this shit. is hot fo real. im feelin shit. The flow is alright. kind of off beat. but on beat at the same time. you should of chose a different flow but this shti came off tyte. the multi's were deadly in this. nice shit. the volume was good. overall verse 7.5/10

Q. word at the wanna go to heaven. iw as waitin for somebody to say that. Shit was sick styll. The lyrics is on point and the flow is fire. Im feelin this shit fo real. Multi's also good but thats typical for the q. good shit overall verse 8.2/10

overall. this track is FIRE. luciano is a fuckin DANGEROUS FACTOR look at what man is doin with only 2 tracks? damn good shit
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