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08-11-06, 01:08 AM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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~No One Comes Close~ ft Yvonne
IP: AB57 3A4D
verse1-Tony Green verse2-Yvonne verse3-Tony Green Links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233055 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...77&page=1&pp=15 |
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08-11-06, 07:24 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 335E FE56
omg...i didnt see this!
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Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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08-11-06, 10:09 AM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: AB57 3A4D
Final project came out pretty nice
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08-11-06, 12:47 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: AB57 3A4D
uppin fo feed.....
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08-11-06, 01:20 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 0775 E664
listening
Heard this beat before. Your quality is pretty good. Your flow is shaky. Sounds like your talking more then rapping. You need to find your rhythm on this joint. It was everywhere. I wasnt really feelin the flow, mic pressence, or delivery. but the lyrics are good. But youll get better. The Quality. Was OK. nothing special but it was ok 6/10
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08-11-06, 01:33 PM
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IP: AB57 3A4D
uhum uppin......
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08-11-06, 02:32 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: AB57 3A4D
uppin tot he top
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08-11-06, 05:12 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3842 F0D2
okay beat is amateurish sounding...ok first verse tony ya flow is real choppy an robotic sounding... I can tell you are stretching ya syables to make ya rhyme word hit on the snare...but it really kills your rhythm...delivery wasn't bad but coulda been better...lyrics was koo...verse 2...yvonne...flow is smoother...its still a bit choppy...delivery is good...its mellow but still has a emotion behind it...lyrics are koo, corny lol but good...flow you holding too long...that def needed to hop off the A/B flow after the 8th bar. verse 3 ok tony...same as verse 1 same flow an delivery same feed applies...overall this wasn't bad...quality coulda been better beat was a tad loud...an vocals coulda been eqed better but all in all its a decent track jus could use some polish....1
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08-11-06, 06:03 PM
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L.E
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IP: 2EF1 1720
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Not feeling the beat... Tony Green- Flow is shaky. Delivery is very lacking, you don't sound too comfortable on the mic. Lyrics are pretty good...but you could delviered them sooo much better. Quality was blah. Yvonne- You sound sooo much like Willa...voice wise. Flow is decent...same thing about the delivery. You don't sound too comfortable on the mic either. Decent. Overall, decent track...just keep it up, and elevate. *whats golden* Last edited by Willa : 08-20-06 at 03:36 PM. |
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08-11-06, 06:15 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: AB57 3A4D
iigh thanxx for the feed
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08-12-06, 04:49 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 373D A1A5
beats aight....decent....aight tony comes in u need a lil more mic presence flows a bit choppy aight yvonn flows cool voice is different...lyrics is cool u need more swagger get into it...you sound monotone.kinda repitive.word...never do that check shit lol it sounded gay fo real...flows smoother than the first tho delivery is a lil better ya the third verse was the best out the song ....overall its cool kinda chill jus needs some rerecording the verses n shit n it be str8 =1=.
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08-12-06, 06:25 AM
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IP: 335E FE56
i thank y'all...
keep em coming please!
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Hit This Up And I'll Hit Your's Too
Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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Now That's Wassup! |
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08-12-06, 11:26 AM
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IP: 92DE DBB1
what up.......tony sounds a bit shakey on the mic the beat is eh decent but ya most improvement needs to be the flow and confidence on the mic ...yvonne sounded a lil more comfortable on the mic but still needs a bit miore work aswell over the thought was there now needs execution holla back ......rtf on "when i come around"
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08-12-06, 02:33 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 3940 95F4
iight thnaxx fo the feed uppin
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08-13-06, 09:59 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 335E FE56
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done. ...people dont ignore this and dont forget to drop ur links!
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Hit This Up And I'll Hit Your's Too
Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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Now That's Wassup! |
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