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Old 08-18-06, 11:23 AM   #1
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can't do links for some reason in this library but i critiqued

Mary Jane by Default
Hold Ya Head by Luciano..

check da shyt out if ya don't believe me...

I.G. aka da Budget Baller!!!!

just click da SC sig and it's da top track!


I got you IG.... my track was locked too... juss gotta post links... nahmean...
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Old 08-18-06, 11:30 AM   #2
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Rediculous track i already told you that .......great concept flow was serious on this big boi........we gotta git r done on the remix version cuz this shit is hoottttttttt
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Old 08-19-06, 09:33 PM   #3
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nice track...i can def feel this one.....the beat is old so im eh bout it......the song is nice....a few production things can be upped....but this is some shit that people can relate to....good shit
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you already know what i thought about the track.... the line about "1 gold chain and i dare a nigga to touch it"... lol.... that shit had me rolling... i mean... all in all... well mixed... and executed.... shit was thorough son... lookin forward to possibly being on the remix... *wink,wink*....


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Old 08-22-06, 11:14 PM   #5
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gotta rise this slept onnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 08-23-06, 09:25 AM   #6
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links are coming.... i just got my inet back...no more library bs
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Old 08-23-06, 09:30 AM   #7
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believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"
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Old 08-23-06, 05:03 PM   #9
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aye cuz that shit is dope... that my life story this a track i can really feel... ballin on a budget..had the dope lyrics down... and a bomb ass flow... hook was kinda wierd cuz it was panned... kinda messed me up through the head phones but still sounded mad nice... i used this beat for a diss long ago.. shits tight.. good looks. o.y.d.

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Old 08-23-06, 07:35 PM   #10
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werd.... werd... preciate da feed... yo rey i'll get on that rtf soon enough brethren... been mad busy looking for a place to rent out in VA... tryna find a roommate and shyt out there is mindboggling...lol...

but yo, can i get some non-OYD heads to drop some feed on this.... i know y'all dudes be kinda mad at us and shyt at times but for realz... i'll return the favor and shyt
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Old 08-23-06, 08:07 PM   #11
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only critique i have is that the vocals on the hook are too low. actually even on the verses, but besides that im feelin it

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Old 08-24-06, 02:47 AM   #12
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ok the beat is on some funky shit make ya wanna boogie lol
i think the vocals are a little bit quiet
hate or love it you get louder
love i got one gold chain lol
your really quiet on this verse
the hook is louder on this part i think that or the last verse was jsut sooo quiet
this verse is better on the volume

overall im loving the message in the track shit everyone been there
if the volume was fixed it be mad dope id dl it
and if you could add some bass in the beat itd sound nice on the system
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Old 08-24-06, 08:56 AM   #13
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werd up... thx for da love... omma fix that shyt one of these days...lol
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wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"
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Old 08-24-06, 11:41 AM   #14
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listening through the shit i always do

i liked the first verse, kept it real. shouldnt have went with those extreme pans on the hook though, or at least do a third layer and leave it centered. Turn your vocals up, EQ your lows and mids. I like the second verse as much as the first. third verse was a nice touch cuz one more verse of "hi, I'm IG and I ball on a budget" woulda killed the novelty of the song. nice rhymescheme and what not, nothing wrong with any of that so i don't have much else to say lol.


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Old 08-24-06, 05:53 PM   #15
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listening through the shit i always do

i liked the first verse, kept it real. shouldnt have went with those extreme pans on the hook though, or at least do a third layer and leave it centered. Turn your vocals up, EQ your lows and mids. I like the second verse as much as the first. third verse was a nice touch cuz one more verse of "hi, I'm IG and I ball on a budget" woulda killed the novelty of the song. nice rhymescheme and what not, nothing wrong with any of that so i don't have much else to say lol.


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i actually thought about doing that shyt with the hook...lol... yeah... still need a lil work on the volume levels and shyt.... lmao@"hi, I'm IG and I ball on a budget"... you a wild dude, son

btw... how was ya atl trip... i tried to holla atcha but my inet was down and shyt... just got it back up
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