Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
^^good concept alright punch
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
^^another good concept wasnt feeling the wording

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Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
^^this was a good punch here
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
^^i liked this also .. witty good concept


Aerals punches were good but i felt they coulda been worded better, lost some effectiveness but nonetheless still a couple good punches. Tav had some good punches both were witty with good concepts


Vote: N. Tavarez

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Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
..naw son. shitz madd play'd..
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
..lolz! @ first i didn't get this, only cause u had "so for you" where i thought ur rhyme would be. then i got pointed out, it wasn't the rhyme. so not bad. pretty cool..

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Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
..a lil play'd. i've seen punches similar to this. not bad though..
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
..lolz, nice. i liked it. ya revised old wordplay and made it dope..

tav had one good punch, while aeral had 2 good ones. hmm.. this wasn't too hard. tav, ur first punch was mad play'd and the wordin on ya second one almost caused me to even miss the rhyme. work on that, yo. aeral, some witty shit. i really liked ya feed. thats what won u the match, imo.

v/ aeral

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Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
The wordplay was really nice but it made no sense, rofl

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
nice
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
lmfao, nice bar, pretty original

what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
oooooohhhhhh, that was hot

Still Aeral first bar made no sense and the second was not very creative cuz well it was hard but simple at the same time he just fed/flipped a concept wich is simple to do. N.Tav came dope with that bird line and the other even if it was played was pretty cool, so I have to v/N.Tavarez

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Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
I feel this punch was worded a bit too statementish and ya coulda easily fixed that. Good concept tho, just not that harsh

Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
would be okay, but i'd seen this concept before a bunch times even before aeral posted the links
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
structure of this confused me at first... i used a flip the bird punch awhile ago, but this one was much better than the one i wrote, good shit

what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
nice feed, hits hard

Good battle here, both of you had a weaker punch, but then a really nice punch. I got Aeral slightly edgin' this tho with the dope feed.

Vote - Aeral

DTH i gots no access if i dont drop links ill drop double links next week

5th link negroids

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233814

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
word, not bad. pretty coo
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
this was tight. nice feed. like it

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Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
pretty coo
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
rofl... this was illy

Overall this was tight battle. both came pretty nice. That flip the bird line was pretty ill tho, I think it was the line that won it for NT. But Aerel came nice tho. that first line could of been hotter with a lil better wording. but it was still coo. good battle y'all

v/NT

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ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib

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what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04

thats what it came down too, the feed worked well and hit hard and the bird line was clever, Tav didnt come as hard as he normally does and i think overall Aer got this,

good battle lads.

V./aer

Aer always top the 10, & you running back, cos ya the worse clown
Take this battle the whole 9 yards.. you'll still be the FIRST DOWN
lol nice flip
what the fucks with the played lines? thats all i seen from this whore
& ya right, i should take aleve, maybe i'll stop seeing wordplay from 04
haha i liked the feed but needs better wording

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Your a headache in this league, we believe you acting
fucka pill kid, you NEED to tak Aleve of Absence
nice
ya girls a hoe, dont get mad its a fact that she is, so for you
I'll flip the bird.....off my bed and send her BACK to your crib
decent

V/ aeral.. loved the feed line

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