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Old 09-06-06, 11:18 AM   #16
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mixing on this is nice, dubs are done nicely too
beat choice is nice too

Triple N on the hook is kinda loud but that's niethere here nor there
hook is nice though

2nd verse, voice is nice but just a bit monotone
but flow's nice N smooth, good ish

Trip on the verse, like ya delivery on this
the bar clearing your throat was funny lol

last verse, don't like his voice much, should make a little change though...
turn up his main vocals and dubs down, but overall his verse is kewl

overall, Willa's was the verse I enjoyed the most
good track all around


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Old 09-06-06, 11:38 AM   #17
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done thank you very much
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Old 09-06-06, 11:57 AM   #18
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willa...flow was on point

Triple comes out of no damn where...sup trip...how u doin baby! hump hump

neway...hook was str8


Tony...real solid flow...lackluster delivery


Willa came best on this in terms of energy and flow


good track


OH...here's enygma...flow matched willas on this track...She jus rocked this beat well


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Old 09-06-06, 11:59 AM   #19
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wow thanks q
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Old 09-06-06, 12:33 PM   #20
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Listenin...

Beat is hot as fuck...guitar sample be crazy..rlly makes this track even doper..

Willa...you def elevatin shorty...taking rv's no1 femcee spot def..flow is str8 thruout...got a good nice quality..have that floetry type flow...real '99..this dope...

Hook: Trip you killed the hook...rlly liked how you did this fam..

Tony Self:...liking the style..another 9o's flow but more 95...flow is hot..delivery is nice..lyrics gd...feelin this old school shit...

Triple N:..trip you killed this shit with a new generation style...more energy keeps me entertained..hot delivery..lyrics hot too...you killin this track b..nothin wrong wit this verse atall...hook again hot...

Enygma: You got a new generation style too...but the producin aint working fo u...i think ud appeal so much more if a producer got at u cos u got that voice..but its like damn if only it had summin..the producer wud know nah mean..flow is good..not amazain cos it did fall off..but delivery is hot...

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Old 09-06-06, 12:50 PM   #21
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thank you .......
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Old 09-06-06, 05:53 PM   #22
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Old 09-06-06, 06:45 PM   #23
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willa...flow was on point

Triple comes out of no damn where...sup trip...how u doin baby! hump hump

neway...hook was str8


Tony...real solid flow...lackluster delivery


Willa came best on this in terms of energy and flow


good track


OH...here's enygma...flow matched willas on this track...She jus rocked this beat well


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lmao wow.......

but word again, dope track. listened again
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Old 09-06-06, 08:37 PM   #24
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wow...the strings r killin it already.....fuck this beats mega ill man....

willa, ur a tad loud...like the blood red line....ur flows always sickness...lyrics r nice here too...delevery fits the track feel well...trips delevery is killer...still a tad to loud tho..maybe it's my speakers...idk....

tony come in nice,,,,delevery is a biggi here man...ya'll was in the midset on this one...tony sound real crisp here to....gun shots was a nice touch....

hooks ill man...like it a lot...

sound like some cowboy shit lol

trip come in mega hype...delevery factor still..multis killin it here....flows nice....lol at the ahhh hemm shit...ya'll gettin me souped to write more lol....

nygma, come in nice...flows nice, libs a tad to loud....emotion nice on this shit...lyrics is on, like the voice a lot bro..always have..grimey as hell...

sickness....
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Old 09-06-06, 08:40 PM   #25
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he has gunshots in hsi vers lol : /
i guess i better listen lol
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Old 09-06-06, 11:35 PM   #26
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Old 09-07-06, 01:00 AM   #27
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yo this track is definatly goin on the RV mixtapes i make werd displays lyrical ability very well

first i love what yall did with the chorus...except for the accent on blood iono who did the chorus but it was raw except for that one word for me.

Liked Willa's emotion on this and the flo. concepts stayed on point as sometimes emcee's minds have a tendency to wander. Dope

iono you guys voices so

2nd verse: pretty good emotion sounded like it coulda been upped but the vocals were ok. flo sounded choppy in a spot or 2 but overall good drop

3rd verse: Came in loud den a mug but it had me crackin up when he said making sounds like.... and the flo was on point overall dope drop

4th verse: I do know this voice, your flo is always dope to me and i loved the get yo ass back here line vocal levels were on point, don't think i have any negativity dope drop

all this over a tight chill beat=nice
overall dope drop definatly a download and bump in the whip type track

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Old 09-07-06, 02:16 AM   #28
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thank yo9u sir no doubt drop it ill rtf
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Old 09-07-06, 04:55 AM   #29
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Peepin - Willa - Wow, I seriously have not peeped the songs section for awhile - you improved your stuff alot too. Adlibs are nicely done, and flow is straight. Quality not too bad, like your lyrics. hook - ummm.. Not really feelin it - I woulda done it a lil different. The melody is super nice, but Trip comes in too hard where i woulda done it smoother as its a pretty smooth track. Anyways - Tony - Nice verse bro - ain't heard you in a LONG time either. Ya vocals seem a little low to me, but good verse, nice lyrics. Trip - Vocals seem to match the hook best obviously, but it seems like you tryin to really put alot of different flow changes into a track that doesn't really need it. Good verse again - so far this track is nice. Enygma - Low vocals again, but ya flow hasn't really changed - haha still good - seeing as I liked ya flow even back in the day. Best lyrics in my opinion, jus felt it best I guess.

Overall - nice track ya'll - good 4 person colab.

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