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Old 09-07-06, 11:20 AM   #31
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i left feed on your track black thanks for the feed
phenom thank ya
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Old 09-07-06, 03:51 PM   #32
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Uppppppppp......
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Old 09-07-06, 07:36 PM   #33
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ok

i liked the hook trip made the hook awesome no one could of did it better , great flow and lyrics

willa damn ur voice was killer u made a name for urself hear,, great flow nice lyrics, pitch was good ,quality was great damn good verse

tony u had great verse too u shined good too , had hard lines that delievered
good flow and good quality great verse

enyg- u had great verse too, had good flow ,wicked lyrics, tight verse , everything was killa, performed perfected

trip- u had that deep voice again that rocked out the song was great , perfected lines, awesome flow, great quality, u did awesome like usaull

id give this track

10/10

this song is a keeper on my mp3 player
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Old 09-07-06, 09:33 PM   #34
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thank you......
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Old 09-08-06, 12:11 PM   #35
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upp all feed will be returned
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Old 09-08-06, 01:11 PM   #36
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good shit, i'm not leavin feed cuz uhhh....this shit's just too ill to criticize
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Old 09-09-06, 01:51 AM   #37
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thank you.........
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Old 09-11-06, 08:28 PM   #38
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beat is simple.....but helps ya topic...so it's all good

1st Verse - flow is on point.......lyrics is strate......feelin da story........feelin ya delivery......and ya quality is nice....
Hook - came in loud ass hell.....but otha than that it's a dope hook
2nd Verse - ya flow is strate......lyrics are basic......and u could up ya delivery.....seems like ya didn't give much effort to ya verse.....
Hook - same as above
3rd Verse - ya lyrics are tyte on this.......feelin ya delivery on this man....ya flow is strate.......yo i'm feelin this verse the best so far........
Hook- same as above
4th Verse - ya quality sounds different from everyone else........but ya flow and all that is on point....ya ridin tha beat the best out of all MCs......ya delivery is strate.......tyte shit....

Overall - this is one hot track..........well keep droppen.....

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Old 09-11-06, 09:08 PM   #39
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lol at everyone liking my stick mic quality
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Old 09-12-06, 04:38 PM   #40
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let me listen to this. Im returnin the favour here..

OK. Production was all good from my prospective. the beat isnt my style but i can vibe to it. Guitars are nice. Everyone should of had one person to mix it so it sounds more. Like a PRofessional track. Production was Decent from my part. I give this about a
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Willa:

DAMN, you improved alot from the last time i heard you..i like your voice..its a good "underground femcee" voice. Especially for this kind of beat. Your quality is real good aswell. Especially from the last joint i heard from you. The lyrics is good. I was feelin what you was saying. mic pressence was good for this kind of tracc. Couldn't see you screaming on some Hype tip on this so the laid back flow works.

overall give this 7.9/10

Tony:

2nd verse. Good Quality aswell. I also liked these lyrics and the flow. But you had less multi's then the first verse. Your mic pressence was REAL laid back. its good for this kind of track. Reminds me of a wild wild west type shit. But yeah your flow was OK. nothing i havent heard before. But the lyrics make up for it. So this is a good verse

overall 7.3/10

Triple N:

Yup, best verse so far. Better Mic pressence it was nice. the quality was nice. but wasnt as good as 1st and 2nd. your flow was nice. Nice Multi's and the lyrics were good. This was a good verse from ut riple N. the strong voice suites this kind of joint. So you get my props. nice verse

8.1/10

Enygma:

ok verse, quality wasnt as good as the above. but you still did your thang. Your flow was nice and your mic pressence was good. but your adlibs were off and the quality was lackin. Your emotion was....Good. you rode the beat nicely. no real flaws sept for the quality

overall 7.3/10


overall: the beat isnt really my type. but the Concept is. i like the concept and everything you guys put into this joint. a real UNDERGROUND track. nice shit
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Old 09-13-06, 05:58 PM   #41
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Like all the verses well written and recorded(Wishing my quality was that good) Though I got what I got.. Hah anyway love how the chorus is written.. over all great song I think.
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Old 09-13-06, 07:39 PM   #42
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listning.............
ill flow off tha start by willa lyrics and ish all on point.......
beatz fucking ill real calm......
ahahah an my boi trip....hookz fuckin illmatic................
next dude.........sounds like outkast lol good voice........
good flow.....nice lyrics....my fav so far........
hook again.....head bumpin**........
fucking ill trip blowin dis shit up like alwayz..........
lyrics ill
flow-ill
quality ill as alwayz....
next dude.....flowin nice.....fell off once or twice.....but was ight covered em nicely..........
good shit
this was a strong joint right hurr.....feelin dis shit bigtime.......
we gots to collabo girl get at da kid
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Old 09-15-06, 09:32 PM   #43
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thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Old 10-07-06, 12:04 AM   #44
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i think Willa needs to throw me in on a collab.
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Old 10-07-06, 12:17 AM   #45
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no doubt i already told you i was down
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