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Old 10-13-06, 12:08 PM   #16
Eternal Thoughts
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
^LMAO... nice personal
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
^nice

vs.

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
^ nice
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
^ meh

v/philly
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Old 10-13-06, 02:05 PM   #17
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
wordplay was aight, but I have no clue how this relates to Spul
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
I thought this was awful. The wording killed it, shoulda changed it up completely

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
I liked this. worded nicely and just a good punch
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
eh, wasn't feeling this at all. alphabet type punches are played and this didn't work

I thought Spul got this for his hat punch. I really didn't get Art's verse at all. The first bar was worded weakly, setup shoulda been better. And the second bar was just weak. So yeah I got Spul taking this for his first punch basically.

v/ SPuL

EDIT: this isn't a sway, but since if philly were to explain his punch, it might be considered one, i'll explain it. kemp, for his first punch, what he was referin to was the fact Spul came from section/group C when the league was first made. just wanted to clear that up and btw, i would do the same if it was needed for Spul.
- Untold

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Old 10-14-06, 01:34 PM   #18
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
^good shit, direct hit nice
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
^lol funny but could've been worded better. ok

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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
^haha good usage off the pic. nice
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
not really seeing this punch hitting hard, worded better or not...

vote-philly

spul's first punch was dope, if his 2nd one was nice he would've took it...think philly lucked out.

BUT DOESNT WANT ME VOTING SO ITS W/E
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Old 10-15-06, 11:09 PM   #19
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
^LMAO... nice personal
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
^nice

vs.

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
^ nice
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
^ meh

v/philly
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Old 10-16-06, 11:12 AM   #20
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Votes So Far:

For Philly:
untold
tony brown
chrit
eternal thoughts
d.stroyer

For Spul:
jack
david lama
n. tav
rush lingo
kempo mrk

Ken' Pho and Lampejo voted for Philly, but Spul stated before the battle started that neither could vote and they both recognized their votes would not count when voting.

Therefore, this battle is tied 5-5... I haven't voted yet so theoretically, I could vote right now and just decide this.

I think a better solution though would be to leave this open. I'm going to leave this open during the first week of the preseason and close it at the end of the week. That way, this should have plenty of votes and there should be a more distinctive winner.

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Old 10-16-06, 08:40 PM   #21
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
This bar was aiight, nice punch..
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
Wasnt feelin this as much homie..

VS

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
lmao, decient..
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
Witty punch, good wordplay..

Honest vote,
V/Spully............

Good job to both for makin it to the finals, good luck.
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Old 10-16-06, 08:54 PM   #22
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SPuL:
He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
ehh not a bad diss coulda been worded harder man.. decent..
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
L lines are played u coulda dropped something better

Artistik:
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
not seeing any real nice wordplay, but im feeling the diss
spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
best bar out of the battle, fresh and really feeling it

I gotta go with Art he had the one niceee bar, and the other one was mediocre.. where as SPuL dropped one decent bar, and one played...
decent battle vote:artistik
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Old 10-16-06, 10:22 PM   #23
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
ok........
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
nah not that great

VS

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
Loool hahaha nice
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
ehh aiight

ehhish battle. SPul had that opener that won it for him. rest of the lines i ain't really like much. ok battle

v/spul
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Old 10-17-06, 02:09 AM   #24
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Artistik[B]
spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
[b]I think the idea is great, just not a huge fan of the wording..

spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
Not really feeling this one..

SPuL
He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
Nice, best punch of the battle..
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
Nothing special, but alright..

This was really between the c-section punch and the hat punch to me as I didn't really like the other punches by each of you. I think that SPuL's hat punch hits harder than Art's c-section punch, so I'm going to have to give this one to SPuL.

Close/good battle..

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Old 10-19-06, 02:18 AM   #25
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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat

a decent punch but dont think it hits that hard for a champ match

I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit

ok punch, average or a little above

vs.

spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker

Ok punch, not the best ive seen you drop tho

spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz

lol, i liked this line...it fits his pic perfect

I think philly won this battle because i believe he had the best line..wanksta cuz/gangsta buzz but for the most part it was pretty even.
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Old 10-19-06, 03:32 PM   #26
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
lol.. dunno if this is a persona cuz, I aint even on this bit in forever.. but w/e’z
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
ha..

vs

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
lmao.
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
cool

aight.. aint been on here in a minute, so don’t get mad. but I’ma give it to SPuL here. like I said b4, idk if that c-section punch was a personal or not, cuz I aint been on rb or rv in a hot minute.. but it was coo tho. But the gun line, was aight, could’ve been harder tho.

v/ SPuL
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Old 10-19-06, 04:15 PM   #27
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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
Its alright, funny and witty, I just think it lacked hard hit. In the end its only a hat diss really.
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
This is pretty straight, but I seen shit like this before somewhere, I'll put K through 8 elemantry somthing? Was that you? If so then its aight but, you dont want to wear the concept down, or in this the method of it.


spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
Alright, but its funny and creative. Tied the two together well.
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
Man, I really didn't feel it at all. I mean i understand what you were going for, posuer etc. But to me its not like an ego blow really. Its all set man.

I am going to have to go with Spul on this and Philly, you know how I do so there is not hate at all. Its just going to come down to basic wit, and Spuls punches had more to me. Nice match though.

V. Spul.
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Old 10-19-06, 04:21 PM   #28
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
Nah, itz championship match you shoulda came bettr
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
^read above

Vs

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
hahahah, dope
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
lol.. no

v/Spul 4 havin the only punch championship worthy
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Old 10-21-06, 05:27 AM   #29
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spul

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat

^^funny lol ...like the little wordplay on his hat

I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit

^^decent kinda of stretch here still aight ...creative

art

spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz

^^nice little stab at his pic...feeling it

spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker

^^ouch this was a nice dig....favorite line

i thought you both equal'd on the pic attack but art got this on the line without using the pic ..close battle..but

vote-art
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Old 10-21-06, 03:35 PM   #30
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He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
^lol.couldve done more with that concept tho...


I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
^coo.L concepts..r a bit played.


art

spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
^ha.lol.That was funny..


spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
^I thought of using that c-section concept myself..but couldnt pull it off..u did well with it..I thought it was pretty decent.

V/-Art.

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