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Old 02-20-07, 09:58 PM   #1
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i will post with my links shortly after i post this...so dont close it...


additional vocals by triple n....he mixed it as well....i think ima get him to turn my vocals down just a tad...tell me how u think they sound...

beat: spontane


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first song...



lyrics....

1st Verse:
I Heard Em' Screamin For An Encore, Uh Huh, Yea, Find When Seeked
You See, It's Time For Finding Me
My Whole World Was Designed To Be
Something Like 6 O Clock And Nine Fifteen
At The Same Time, Cause My Circle Of Trust
Is Divided Into A Perfect 4, But Rearrange Mine
When Number 5 Comes Around Every Once In A While
So Momma Said Life Only Comes Once For You Child
But That 5th One Will Be Gone In The Fall Time
Got Damn, I Can't Wait For That
So I'll Just Stay Up, And Hold My Head Like It's All Fine
And I, Hope She Never Makes It Back
To My Mind, And To My Heart, Into My Arms, Staying Personal
Cause I Aint Got Nothing To Prove With Being Versatile
Which Came First
How Can I Be So Fly And So Down To Earth In The Same Verse? ( Get It? )



Hook:
Put Up Ya Hands And Wave
For The Foundation Of A New Start Of Buying Into The Real
Throw Up Ya Hands And Wave

Put Up Ya Hands And Wave
For The Foundation Of A New Beginning Of Listening To The Real
Throw Up Ya Hands And Wave


2nd Verse:
We Tend To Envy The Rappers With Nice Rides Much Flyer Than Ours
I Dont Need Big Rims Though, I Just Stick With My Reliable Cars
16's On Goodyears, Not Too Cool For Safe Belts, Obide By The Law
Its Sorta Like A Dangerous Roller Coaster I'm On, I Gotta Raise The Height Of The Bar
And I Dont Care About The Height That You Are
Cause Your Still Under Me, So You Aint Ridin At All
Not With Me By Your Side ( Why? )
I Call Em All The Letter J, Because They Are Behind I
And My Predicament
Is That Yall Hearing It, Every Word That I Say, But You Aint Listening
So I Stay Hip Hop And Stay Personal
Impress Me Only, I Aint Gotta Stay Versatile
Which Came First
How Can I Be So Fly And So Down To Earth In The Same Verse? (huh?)




3rd Verse:
Now If You Ask Me What I'm Headed For ( A Dream )
Gotta Stop Procrastinating, I Gotta Set It Forth
See This Hip Hop Resembles College, Cause I'm Better Than What They Ever Give Me Credit For
And I Aint Never Met A Course I Could Never Pass
So I Keep Dreamin', For That Forever Lasts
But I Aint Sleepin' So That Forever Has
Effects, Which Means That Most Dreams, I Never Have
Uh, So I Guess It's Impossible To Live Em Out
If I Never Had Em Before
We Know They Seclude The Real From The Deals That They Givin Out But Still
We Speak With Adamant Force
(Follow Me) So The Real Is Still Personal
Nothing To Prove, Still Feel We Still Versatile
Which Came First
How Can I Be So Fly And So Down To Earth In The Same Verse?
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Old 02-20-07, 10:00 PM   #2
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Old 02-20-07, 10:09 PM   #3
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Word.....I like this song a lot man. You got some nice lyrics in this shit. Its not the same shit I'm used to hearing from you which is good. I think the vocals might be the slightest bit too loud, but I'm not usually a good judge of that....lol. Your flow is good. Trip's part in the hook struck me as odd only cause it's the only contrast to your voice in the whole song. It kinda sticks out more than I think it should. Maybe if he lowered it more and panned it to kinda sound like it was sampled in instead of being a part of the hook itself. You had some nice lines in this too man. I liked your finisher of the second verse....."How can I be fly and down to earth in the same verse". That was nice man. Kinda reminded me of one of my lines..."Ironic how I pollute the airwaves but my shit's a breath of fresh air."


But yeah man....this is some nice shit




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Old 02-20-07, 10:14 PM   #4
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beat - im feelin' it, its pretty sick.
hook - its mixed well, and its dope as well.

first verse - was pretty dope, had some good rhymes in there, thats last line was dope for sure.

Second verse - dope like the first some nice rhymes in there two.

Third -this verse was nothin special ya know, still wasnt bad tho.

overall track - i'd give it a 8/10, its pretty dope. worth a listen for sure.
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Old 02-20-07, 11:55 PM   #5
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I Call Em All The Letter J, Because They Are Behind I - shot at me?.....haha jp homie....
lovin this song every verse has everyline with a double meaning or at least could be taken that way.....LOVE the college line cuz thats how i feel about school at the moment.....actually all in all a sick song.....turn down all the vocals 1db.....once you do that get at me n ill d/l this track.....defo a good comeback track man....since the last one you posted was taht one vs me in that lame duck tourny.....its really makin me want to throw you on a song for the project im workin on......any intrest then get at me
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 02-20-07, 11:57 PM   #6
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second listen....you sound like a white lupe on this track
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 02-21-07, 12:17 AM   #7
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^ just what i was thinkin

u got some lupe type shit here..

i liked it. cool beat n shit.. vocals a lil loud like u said.
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Old 02-21-07, 01:46 AM   #8
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i havent heard a track form you in forever
this track was different from anything ive eve rheard on this site
your rhyme scheme was far from basic your delivery is soooo smooth you do sound liek lupe a little bit love the endings on the lines
dope track
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Old 02-21-07, 08:58 AM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 286
second listen....you sound like a white lupe on this track

I was actually gonna say this too, but I was gonna say he sounded like Jay-Z on Encore mixed with Lupe.....lol
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Old 02-21-07, 11:39 AM   #10
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haha...

engyma - favor has been returned.....

Gkillaz - appreciate it

286 - lmao nah wasnt a shot at u...but word...just shoot something my way and ill lay a verse...and triple n said the same thing about the lupe stuff..........i listen to him a lot...so i guess hes just kinda rubbed off on me...

and everyone else....yea..like i said...lol...he inspires me to write i guess...so....yup

if yall want me to return the favor on something just shoot me a link...
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Old 02-21-07, 12:31 PM   #11
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def been a while since i heard an ike track ...def got the flow onpoint here swag is def here i like this track ...damn that wave came right uin there lol no doubt son def liked this shit .....description in one word-smooooooooth
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Old 02-21-07, 03:36 PM   #13
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hmmm just from listnin to this track i'd say that its hot..def. somthing differn't that what I normally hear here.......theres somthin about it that makes it stands out above other songs that people drop...maybe because it is VERSATILE.....lol i like the fact its the same sample that they used for jiggas Encore..and it was still hot..i was def. feellin the track.....no real changes I could say to make..this is a nice lil album track
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Old 02-21-07, 11:00 PM   #14
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thank you thank you......anyone that wants me to return the favor just drop a link
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Old 02-21-07, 11:21 PM   #15
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word up deff.....specially if you can get tripp to produce it hahaha.....hit me up on aim..... Default 286
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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