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Old 04-05-07, 01:13 PM   #1
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21. Zelph (0-1) vs. 22. Mets (0-0)

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G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Celebrity Rapper Battles

Pretend as if you ARE the rapper you have been assigned. Don't diss your opponent, diss your opponent's rapper. Bring out the personals and the heat. Good Luck.

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Zelph as Jadakiss

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Mets as Fabolous


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
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Old 04-05-07, 06:06 PM   #3
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*puts on Jadakiss voice*


J.A.D.A bout to rip this ugly bitch, u better grab ya fellas
Fab's lips is so fat, he got Biggie, Guerilla Black & Jay-Z jelious
you been gone for a minute, now u back and jaw jappin foo'
so im gon' break ya chicken bones, and give em' the retards who kidnapped you
nuff said and done faggot, but I hope you know that u deserve this
I'll do you ass a favor and cut ur elephant ears off....cuz they belong in a circus
dam I remember you was the shit, sellin' hits and blazin' with ur ego
collabs with Moe and Nate Dogg makin' the same digets in cash and the year .00'
dudes a star? I beg to differ, cuz when this guy raps-it hurts to hear
plus last time Fabulous was mentioned, it was gays showing off their gear

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Old 04-06-07, 07:44 AM   #4
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F-A-B-O-L-O-U-S


I know about ur past beefs, i learned that even the best'll unravel
&..i swear to beans, that ima beat u worse then he did wen yall battled
i have some ?'s bout ur career though, i know ur known to be ill
but how u gonna be 1 of DMX's dogs, when diddy has u on a leash still
.& how is J. Hood ur top prospect wen he aint droppin good shit yet
so how u plan on gettin hood rich, wen u urself aint even hood rich yet
i really live that hoodlife, but wen it comes to crunchtime u gonna flop
cos' im in the hood like ..uh, every single fuckin punchline uve ever dropped
kiss the game goodbye, kiss of death ..damn, this niggas gassed
ask me for advice on what to call his next album, told him to kiss my ass

real talk.
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Old 04-06-07, 06:09 PM   #5
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Good shit on gettin' this up early guys, uppin for votes
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Old 04-07-07, 05:54 PM   #6
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uppin............
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Old 04-08-07, 01:11 AM   #7
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J.A.D.A bout to rip this ugly bitch, u better grab ya fellas
Fab's lips is so fat, he got Biggie, Guerilla Black & Jay-Z jelious
decent
you been gone for a minute, now u back and jaw jappin foo'
so im gon' break ya chicken bones, and give em' the retards who kidnapped you
no
nuff said and done faggot, but I hope you know that u deserve this
I'll do you ass a favor and cut ur elephant ears off....cuz they belong in a circus
uhhh eh
dam I remember you was the shit, sellin' hits and blazin' with ur ego
collabs with Moe and Nate Dogg makin' the same digets in cash and the year .00'
lol
dudes a star? I beg to differ, cuz when this guy raps-it hurts to hear
plus last time Fabulous was mentioned, it was gays showing off their gear
decent

vsss

I know about ur past beefs, i learned that even the best'll unravel
&..i swear to beans, that ima beat u worse then he did wen yall battled
who swears to beans? fo real...
i have some ?'s bout ur career though, i know ur known to be ill
but how u gonna be 1 of DMX's dogs, when diddy has u on a leash still
meh?
.& how is J. Hood ur top prospect wen he aint droppin good shit yet
so how u plan on gettin hood rich, wen u urself aint even hood rich yet
no
i really live that hoodlife, but wen it comes to crunchtime u gonna flop
cos' im in the hood like ..uh, every single fuckin punchline uve ever dropped
no
kiss the game goodbye, kiss of death ..damn, this niggas gassed
ask me for advice on what to call his next album, told him to kiss my ass
no

one sided sadly...

V// That faggot Zelph
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Old 04-08-07, 02:31 PM   #8
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1-0 oh and I hate you Tebo
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Old 04-09-07, 03:48 PM   #9
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this shits been up since last thursday, can we get some fuckin votes.
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Old 04-09-07, 04:11 PM   #10
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wow, me and him hate eachother.

uppin
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Old 04-09-07, 06:01 PM   #11
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I know about ur past beefs, i learned that even the best'll unravel
&..i swear to beans, that ima beat u worse then he did wen yall battled
i have some ?'s bout ur career though, i know ur known to be ill
but how u gonna be 1 of DMX's dogs, when diddy has u on a leash still

vs.

Nothing

Zelph, I wasn't really feeling much from you. Closer was almost funny cuz thats definately the way gays talk, but I didn't like the way you worded the concept. The 00 line was okay too, but again, wording let it down. The first 3 bars seemed more like stuff from a pic battle than this kinda thing. Like, if u had a pic to show his elephant ears or fat lips it mighta been effective, but Fabolous, as far as i know anyway, isn't known for either of those things so the disses are kinda ineffective.

Mets, first two concepts were simple, but good because they were personals mixed with some good wit so they could be landed. Those 2 bars were really all you needed to win this battle. Hood rich concept was a nice concept, liked the way ya used it, but Jadakiss isn't poor man, lol, that kinda takes away from how good the concept could be. Every punchline thing was too simple and closer was a funny concept, but not well used.

Overall, Mets prolly had the better concepts and definately much better wording of those ideas so he got this.

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Old 04-09-07, 08:08 PM   #12
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I know about ur past beefs, i learned that even the best'll unravel
&..i swear to beans, that ima beat u worse then he did wen yall battled
i have some ?'s bout ur career though, i know ur known to be ill
but how u gonna be 1 of DMX's dogs, when diddy has u on a leash still

kiss the game goodbye, kiss of death ..damn, this niggas gassed
ask me for advice on what to call his next album, told him to kiss my ass

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dam I remember you was the shit, sellin' hits and blazin' with ur ego
collabs with Moe and Nate Dogg makin' the same digets in cash and the year .00'


one sided battle here..mets took this easily...didn't feeling anything besides^ this by zelph

vote-mets
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Old 04-09-07, 10:32 PM   #13
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know about ur past beefs, i learned that even the best'll unravel
&..i swear to beans, that ima beat u worse then he did wen yall battled
i have some ?'s bout ur career though, i know ur known to be ill
but how u gonna be 1 of DMX's dogs, when diddy has u on a leash still
kiss the game goodbye, kiss of death ..damn, this niggas gassed
ask me for advice on what to call his next album, told him to kiss my ass

all these were good

pretty good consistant verse from you,had some harshness and funny spots.

V$

am I remember you was the shit, sellin' hits and blazin' with ur ego
collabs with Moe and Nate Dogg makin' the same digets in cash and the year .00'

only line that i was really feeling,it was ok

\\// Mets
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Old 04-10-07, 03:30 AM   #14
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J.A.D.A bout to rip this ugly bitch, u better grab ya fellas
Fab's lips is so fat, he got Biggie, Guerilla Black & Jay-Z jelious
ok
you been gone for a minute, now u back and jaw jappin foo'
so im gon' break ya chicken bones, and give em' the retards who kidnapped you
weak
nuff said and done faggot, but I hope you know that u deserve this
I'll do you ass a favor and cut ur elephant ears off....cuz they belong in a circus
wtf? lmfao hell nah
dam I remember you was the shit, sellin' hits and blazin' with ur ego
collabs with Moe and Nate Dogg makin' the same digets in cash and the year .00'
cool
dudes a star? I beg to differ, cuz when this guy raps-it hurts to hear
plus last time Fabulous was mentioned, it was gays showing off their gear
ok


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I know about ur past beefs, i learned that even the best'll unravel
&..i swear to beans, that ima beat u worse then he did wen yall battled
lmfao
i have some ?'s bout ur career though, i know ur known to be ill
but how u gonna be 1 of DMX's dogs, when diddy has u on a leash still
cool
.& how is J. Hood ur top prospect wen he aint droppin good shit yet
so how u plan on gettin hood rich, wen u urself aint even hood rich yet
ok
i really live that hoodlife, but wen it comes to crunchtime u gonna flop
cos' im in the hood like ..uh, every single fuckin punchline uve ever dropped
nah
kiss the game goodbye, kiss of death ..damn, this niggas gassed
ask me for advice on what to call his next album, told him to kiss my ass
lmfao!!!


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Old 04-11-07, 12:43 PM   #15
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i got 8 links trus, iight
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