LOL, dead.
check.
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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

im in, ill drop about 16.

Dunno if hes gonna show, but the deadline to this came aroudn really quickly, and I'm about to go to bed, So i just threw somehtign together quickly.

16.

james brown? what a farce!... face it your done.
a sex machine? yeah, I heard you like to use vibrators for fun
make you sleep with the fishes, when i pump my gun at this gay
but you'll be at one...
cause you look like a puffa fish, with all those lumps on ya face
Fuck it, ya gay. claiming status, like the "godfather of soul"
yet since your death your career is quickly falling, like I pushed you down a bottomless hole
I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss
is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop?
you flop from the top. Let me tell you this.
We won't "get up", and neither will your dead arse bitch
I find it quite unfair, cause your shit, everyone basically bumps
because your ill.. Yeah, you've got a serious case of the mumps.
and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge
and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does.
you could never finish the job..
you got caught when you were stealing, and fucked up your mastered stuff
well how's this for a closer. *CREAK* your caskets shut.

I dunno, I prolly shouldn't havent signed up If i knew the due date was gonna be so soon, been busy as hell with work. Ah well, good luck.

Geez, Marlon Brando?
..................you look like you got hit by a 'streetcar' and ran ova
I guess its the desire to eat cuz ya waist is biggin then ya damn shoulda's
Ya must have been eatin damn boulders, hold that mic next to ya heart son
Seriously, i thought you died of old age, and you fuckin got scarred lungs
Actually they said thats not what killed ya, we determined it wasn't older age
And potter wasn't your heart problem VERNON, you was just overweight
We're no longer in the older days, And now you can't be missed dude
Cuz you had more fuckin health problems, then ALL of your family's issues
Your whole life was wreckless, even as a kid..... you were still scary fool
How the fuck you move around 10 times, and get kicked out of military school
10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude
Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too
24? damn son, you was born way the fuck back then. hold on *pause
Jumpstart of your career? Dude, your fuckin OLDER then jaws
My bad on the fat jokes dude, but thats something i can't not bother
Dude you had 9 fuckin children no wonder you played 'The GodFather'
This shit's a boat, a closed deal. But i have a opposite belief
Cuz the funeral aignt a mystery. They just tossed you into the sea

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

james brown? what a farce!... face it your done.
a sex machine? yeah, I heard you like to use vibrators for fun
decent
make you sleep with the fishes, when i pump my gun at this gay
but you'll be at one...
cause you look like a puffa fish, with all those lumps on ya face
meh
Fuck it, ya gay. claiming status, like the "godfather of soul"
yet since your death your career is quickly falling, like I pushed you down a bottomless hole
okish at best
I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss
is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop?
nah
you flop from the top. Let me tell you this.
We won't "get up", and neither will your dead arse bitch
nah, ya both dead
I find it quite unfair, cause your shit, everyone basically bumps
because your ill.. Yeah, you've got a serious case of the mumps.
no
and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge
and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does.
decent
you could never finish the job..
you got caught when you were stealing, and fucked up your mastered stuff
well how's this for a closer. *CREAK* your caskets shut.
no

was ok in spots, bad in others

Vsss

Geez, Marlon Brando?
..................you look like you got hit by a 'streetcar' and ran ova
I guess its the desire to eat cuz ya waist is biggin then ya damn shoulda's
okish at best
Ya must have been eatin damn boulders, hold that mic next to ya heart son
Seriously, i thought you died of old age, and you fuckin got scarred lungs
nah
Actually they said thats not what killed ya, we determined it wasn't older age
And potter wasn't your heart problem VERNON, you was just overweight
okish at best
We're no longer in the older days, And now you can't be missed dude
Cuz you had more fuckin health problems, then ALL of your family's issues
lol ok
Your whole life was wreckless, even as a kid..... you were still scary fool
How the fuck you move around 10 times, and get kicked out of military school
nah
10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude
Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too
lol fuckin harsh
24? damn son, you was born way the fuck back then. hold on *pause
Jumpstart of your career? Dude, your fuckin OLDER then jaws
nah
My bad on the fat jokes dude, but thats something i can't not bother
Dude you had 9 fuckin children no wonder you played 'The GodFather'
meh
This shit's a boat, a closed deal. But i have a opposite belief
Cuz the funeral aignt a mystery. They just tossed you into the sea
eh

both were inconsistant but had decent stuff, so its kinda close

V// Stub, his punches hit harder, now go write your verse for our pic battle lol I'm already done

Uppin for votes

wow @ only 1 vote on this.

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I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss
is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop?

vs

10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude
Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too

v//stubb

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Fear

sprungy:
and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge
and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does.

vs

stubbs:
10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude
Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too



Alright battle. Stubbs came more consistent.




Vote = K.Stubbs

nuthin

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We're no longer in the older days, And now you can't be missed dude
Cuz you had more fuckin health problems, then ALL of your family's issues

V/k stubbs his verse overall hit better an this line i thought was pretty good sprungy your punchs were to bland an had no wit to them work on that

and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge
and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does.

vs

10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude
Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too
My bad on the fat jokes dude, but thats something i can't not bother
Dude you had 9 fuckin children no wonder you played 'The GodFather'
^^^needed to tweak the wording

v/ stubb for the extra "near quotable" line lol

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Honestly, nothing in Sprungy's verse was good.

Maybe:
I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss
is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop?

Was a lil funny, barely.
Nothing else was harsh at all.
Everything else was meh:
I find it quite unfair, cause your shit, everyone basically bumps
because your ill.. Yeah, you've got a serious case of the mumps.
Damn, this concept is ooooollllllllldddddd.

As far as Stubbs, most of his stuff had potential, but nothing was harsh here either. But, it did seem like he had a greater grasp on wording, and his shit was overall just better.

Actually they said thats not what killed ya, we determined it wasn't older age
And potter wasn't your heart problem VERNON, you was just overweight

That had potential.

So yeah, my vote goes to Stubbs.

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VOTE: K. STUBBS
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