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DJ-Sydm 0 0%
F.oo 5 100.00%
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Old 10-05-07, 07:53 PM   #1
Red Bull
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DJ-Sydm vs F.oo

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Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No Dick Riding

Be cool people and vote for the actual winner. If somebody has you confused with a line, PM them and ask them what it means instead of just voting for the other person because you don't understand it.

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Check in by: 10-05-07 at 08:23 PM

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Old 10-05-07, 07:58 PM   #2
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F.oo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-07 07:58 PM.
 
Old 10-05-07, 08:04 PM   #3
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DJ-Sydm has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-07 08:04 PM.
 
Old 10-05-07, 08:08 PM   #4
Red Bull
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DJ Sydm..

Your punches are shit dude, always set up with weak jabs,
But yet Sydm still seems to fall low through to Aphil's lap..
Abbreviations are wack fool, this 'Disc Jockey's' pathetic,
But I won't talk Down 'Syndrome' because that shit is genetic.
Beat F.oo? Nah, you can forget it, but shit talk all you want,
Go ahead and pull strings...
.......................you still got no flow any time of the month.
You're all just a front, kid I'll pick you apart till you lose.
So let me A.sk y you try? 'Cause even your old name is confused.
 
Old 10-05-07, 08:12 PM   #5
ThatsWhatSheSaid
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Refacing this geek? This guy gets burried, pick up where we left off,
LET YOU lay at my feet, than greet you to Pains like Tyler Perry!
Foo wont fight in the 1-2 cause thats how many losses he gona get, you cant play me,
im quick to get flagrant..well..'Every dog has its day', but im like VICK to that saying',
Smackin' him back only fits, we see Foo, all we hear is OOF from the hits, come well,
truely a bitch, dumb as hell, cause' how you gon' fix a losing streak, with ANOTHER L?
Flow bold in spite of you, spit lies thats not the truth, but its ok, hes a tough guy,
Foo couldnt touch Sky', if Redbull gave you the fuckin' wings to fly-upright!


This ends the beef, if you win you win, its all good in my book, the league is the only thing im concerned with after this.
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Old 10-05-07, 09:24 PM   #6
KM
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Voted For: F.oo

foo...
Your punches are shit dude, always set up with weak jabs,
But yet Sydm still seems to fall low through to Aphil's lap..
Abbreviations are wack fool, this 'Disc Jockey's' pathetic,
But I won't talk Down 'Syndrome' because that shit is genetic.
Beat F.oo? Nah, you can forget it, but shit talk all you want,
Go ahead and pull strings...
.......................you still got no flow any time of the month.
You're all just a front, kid I'll pick you apart till you lose.
So let me A.sk y you try? 'Cause even your old name is confused


VS...


DJ Sydm-

Smackin' him back only fits, we see Foo, all we hear is OOF from the hits, come well,
truely a bitch, dumb as hell, cause' how you gon' fix a losing streak, with ANOTHER L?
Flow bold in spite of you, spit lies thats not the truth, but its ok, hes a tough guy,
Foo couldnt touch Sky', if Redbull gave you the fuckin' wings to fly-upright!

i gotta give this to foo though....punches were more creative@the down syndrome...and A.sk y lines......his verse was smoother to a cleaner flow......

my favorite line from yours DJ was.....

Foo couldnt touch Sky', if Redbull gave you the fuckin' wings to fly-upright!

^^^^nice lol.....but that was your most creative one....the rest was good but could of been better.....your verse seems kind of forced to like u were rushing....

....well good battle anyways....would like to see another round.... yall stay up....~1~
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Old 10-05-07, 09:54 PM   #7
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Voted For: F.oo

Reading Both Verses, I gotta give it to F.oo. In-fact you wouldn't even believe this because F.oo had the shitter flow this time, and flow is important, when you checkin' a rhyme. But.. F's 2nd and 4th punches were his best in that order. 1st was flat out whack and 3rd was mediocre. DJ Lost it by the first bar. The 'another L' shit was his best attempt and even that fell..
So.. V/ foo
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Old 10-06-07, 02:47 AM   #8
C-Bo
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Voted For: F.oo

Punches: DJ
Creativity: Foo
Flow: Foo
Wordplay : Foo
Personals: Foo

Both came aight but not too hard...DJ had a couple good punches but not enuff creativity and it didn't flow too well...Foo had a good flow a couple of personals and a little creativity...

Vote: Foo
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Old 10-06-07, 07:44 AM   #9
Red Bull
Adam
 
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Cool, thanks for the feedback and the votes everybody.
 
Old 10-06-07, 09:48 AM   #10
ThatsWhatSheSaid
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My verse and flow was wack, had a couple of concepts in my head but rushed em, its all good, you got me Foo.
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Old 10-07-07, 11:55 AM   #11
Red Bull
Adam
 
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And people should like vote on this battle and stuff.
 
Old 10-08-07, 07:33 AM   #12
Red Bull
Adam
 
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Old 10-08-07, 09:50 PM   #13
Red Bull
Adam
 
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Old 10-09-07, 10:44 PM   #14
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