na im here haha, in portuguese we in the computer lab

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OptimisticallyGenius

uppin for votes guys... Aphilly, don't ban him just yet, I wanna get my first win on rv.com

lol, ok buddy. u came .w some shit but dont say ur winnin yet. and aphilly aint annin shit

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OptimisticallyGenius

Voted For: D523

Quintessential
your opener is good, smooth punch and nice personal. You have a good consistant flow and decent amount of ok punches. I think you could of closed your verse a lot more solid. But its a good personal either way.
Overall, could of been a lot better, but you have some decent punches in there.

D523, first of all. Fuck off with the bold text. We all know what a multi is, you have no reason to bold your rhymes, its looks fucking wack as fuck and pisses me off when Im reading your verse.

Your openers shit, good attempt at a personal but you didnt pull it off too well.

Little Rookie…If You Think You On My Level Not Even, Ill Leave Your Heart Bleedin
Soon As You Stop Breathin, You Start Seein A New World In Hell Without Gods Teachings

This is just one big boring ass filler with bolded rhymes.

Your last two punches are what took this for you.

good battle

uppin this for votess

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OptimisticallyGenius

^^ Cheating Fucking Faggot, Your A Fucking Queer, Get The Fuck Off The Board You Lame Ass Fucking Dick Sucking Queer Of A Faggot

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woww still on the shit talkin thing i see. That's good, battle me or shut the fuck up. thats all i can say

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OptimisticallyGenius

^^ so that way you can just make up ANOTHER account and vote for youself? your fucking whack dude.

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it aint even like that faggit, but dont take up space on my battle thread to talk shit

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OptimisticallyGenius

so what is it like you? YOU CHEATING MOTHER FUCKER

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Voted For: D523

if you didnt bite this from another site,
its a decent verse, creative,your punches hit harder then his..
i doubt you wrote it but you get the win..
quintessental your verse was alright,decent vocabulary i liked how you rhymed capillary with vocabulary,i did that in some of my older shit..i felt like your verse was more of a filler though your punches really didnt hit..

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"the loudest one in the room is the weakest"- frank lucas..

why thefuckiseveryone doubting i write my shit. LISTEN the fuck up RV,i write my shit. u heard me?

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OptimisticallyGenius

^^ cuz your a fucking cheat you faggot

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lol, this little bitch is STILL on my dick. E-GANGSTAA watch out!

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OptimisticallyGenius